《In the Naruto world (1)》Chapter 6 The struggle
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The crow that flew off earlier landed on someone's arm.
"So Itachi, find any news of the nine tailed brat." (Kizame)
"I did, and I also found something interesting." (Itachi)
The two men are indeed the two most well known evil men in Naruto, Itachi Uchiha and Kizame Hoshigaki. There they were in the middle of a forest surrounded by dead trees and mist, the sight looked very eerily.
And for some reason Itachi's eye's were closed, he didn't dare to open them up at all. They were also wearing their awesome Akatsuki's robe.
"Oh really what did you find?" Looks like Kizame was interested a little
"A kid that knows a jutsu, it is exactly the same jutsu used by Jiraiya." (Itachi)
"A jutsu that is used by Jiraiya? you mean the rasengan!!!." (Kizame)
"Yes! that exact same jutsu, and what's worse is that he's about to teach it to Naruto." (Itachi)
"That is pretty troublesome and how did this kid know an A-ranked jutsu, I haven't heard that Jiraiya is taking any students." (Kizame)
"That's why it's interesting, this kid knows a jutsu only known to Jiraiya. It's impossible for him to steal such a technique, so I need to find out just how exactly he got ahold of such jutsu." (Itachi)
"Hm! if you want we can kidnap him, and we can also fish up a nine tailed brat on the side." (Kizame)
"I agree, but not now, they're in the leaf village and it's not somewhere we would want to infiltrate. It's too heavily guarded." (Itachi)
"But if that other brat teaches the 9 tailed brat that jutsu then things will become much harder for us, we cannot let the 9 tailed brat get stronger." (Kizame)
"Relax Kizame it doesn't matter if Naruto learns the rasengan or not, he's not the only one who knows an A-ranked jutsu. Besides I have a plan to lure them both out." (Itachi)
"You're right it's not like that 9 tailed brat is able to overpower us in a day, and what is this plan exactly." (Kizame)
"Follow me we'll talk about it on our way to a village. There is someone there who will be of great use to my plan." (Itachi)
The two characters dissapeared into the dead forest and headed straight to god knows where.
Next morning on the Hokages residence
"So everyone tell me your report on your assigned teams Starting from team 1" (Hokage)
"Team 1 is not ready" (Ninja 1)
"Same here" (Ninja 2)
"They're okay but they need to work on their teamwork, so they failed." (Ninja 3)
"Never in a million years" (Ninja 4)
"I would rather die than be the leader for this team." (Ninja 5)
"Passed but barely" (Ninja 6)
"They also passed but by a hair" (Kakashi) (Team 7)
"I guess they did alright for their level" (Kurenai) (Team 8)
"..." (Team 9)
"Dom give me your report... Dom? where is he" (Hokage) looked in the room for Dom.
"I last saw him on the barbeque shop with Choza, apparently they were having another one of their food competitions." (Ninja 1)
"Damn that Dom, i'm gonna have to helf his paycheck for the week. Anyway's team 10 give me your report."
"They're good ninja's i'm glad to be their teacher" (Asuma)
"THE YOUTH BURNING INSIDE MY TEAM IS HOTTER THAN THE SUN, I BELIEVE THAT THEY ARE READY FOR THE NEXT STEP" (Kakashi) (Nah I'm just kidding it's GUY)
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"Oh dear god... everyone here is dismissed, and if any of you see Dom tell him to come here as quickly as possible." (Hokage)
"Yes Hokage!" (Everyone!) Then everyone dissapeared into the shadows, like true ninjas
seconds later...
"*Gasp* sorry i'm late lord hokage, I didn't think that Choza would be this hard to beat in a food competition." (Dom)
" 'sigh' i'm docking your pay for the week Dom, I expect you to come to these kind of meeting on time." (Hokage)
"Yes lord Hokage" (Dom) said in a sad tone
"Tell me what do you think of your team" (Hokage)
"Well to be honest Hokage, I think they're a really good team especially that Chris" (Dom)
"Oh really, what did they do!" (Hokage) said a bit curious.
"Well I was gonna do the bell test but somehow Chris knew about it before hand, I couldn't tell them they failed or passed because I said that as long as they had a bell they would pass, but Chris unexpectadely brought 3 bells with him." (Dom)
"Wait! you said that Chris knew before hand about the test, how?" (Hokage)
"I don't know Hokage, but that's not what I wanted to talk about...I gave them another test that would show them about teamwork, they did great but Chris used the Rasengan on me." (Dom)
"The Rasengan!!!! only Jiraiya knows that technique." (Hokage) said a bit shocked to hear that.
"I know that as well lord Hokage but he somehow was able to use it, but the team showed exceptional teamwork and perfect Co-ordination. Chris was also the mastermind of their plan and even I had to admit it was beautifully done and painful, they even managed to defeat me at 10% of my full power" (Dom)
"Hm! make sure to keep an eye on Chris, I don't know how he knows such jutsus, but it might be possible that he really is. a spy." (Hokage)
"I don't think so Hokage" (Dom)
"Hm? why do you say that." (Hokage)
"While I was fighting them Chris seemed to really enjoy it, I didn't sense any bloodlust or hatred on him and he seemed to get pretty well along with the team. I had also used my golems to follow him just in case, and he met Naruto on Ichiraku's ramen shop.
After that they had a light spar, but the really surprising thing is that he was more than willing to teach Naruto the rasengan, he is having Naruto, Luna and possibly Kat meet him today to train them. If you ask me, a spy wouldn't do such a thing to make our leaf village stronger, if anything he would do anything to hurt us." (Dom)
"I see, your observation is really good, but just in case I need you to follow him in the shadows. If you suspect that he's doing anything suspicious, then do not hesitate to bring him here, but if he is more than willing to help us then I don't see any reason to suspect him any further." (Hokage)
"You're dismissed" (Hokage)
"Yes lord hokage" (Dom)
the Hokage was left there sitting alone while smoking a pipe, he was wondering about something.
First Person view * * * Chris POV * * *
Ow my head hurts, what the shit happened to me.
Well you over-trained all night with your 2000 shadow clones, after that you passed out from mental exhaustion. Luckily some ninja strolled around and found you in the middle of the park, after that he found your address and left you on your bed.
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So that's why I feel so tired, but it payed off now I have a better understanding on my Kekkai Genkais. And I was able to fully master the Kenjutsu book you gave me, I gotta get me a good sword.
That's good for you but take a shower, i'm a blue box but I can somehow smell you, and you reek Ew!
Shut up, it means that I work pretty hard and my smell means that i'm showing progress...
Are you there...
Hello...
Huh! guess he left.
So I took a quick shower and like always blah! blah! blah! I set out to meet my team and Naruto. No one was here yet so I took this time to see the results of last nights training.
I can now use my limbs and change them however I want, last time I could only do it with my right hand.
I can now stop time for 5 seconds, even though my time ability is progressing more slowly than the others it's definetly getting stronger.
I used 'creation' and made a fine sword, I summoned a few shadow clones as training dummies. Surprisingly my sword techniue wasn't half bad, I still lack the expereince fighting with a sword, but even so I am still a far away from reaching the level of master swordsman.
"Hey Chris." (Luna)
I turned and saw two very beautiful girls heading my way, I wasn't surprised that Kat also came with her since she wants to be better than me.
"Hm! I only came here so I can show you that I am better than you at everything else." (Kat) pouted
(Good excuse *Clap* *Clap* *Clap*)
"Great the both of you are here, we're only missing one person." (Chris)
"Someone else is coming?" (Luna)
"Yeah, it's Naruto" (Chris)
"Naruto?" (Luna and Kat) said at the same time
"Yeah? is there something wrong with him." (Chris)
"Well there's nothing wrong with him but he's the weakest ninja in the whole school, are you sure you didn't mistake him for someone else." (Luna)
"Luna, you should know that papers don't judge a person's future, I don't care if Naruto is the worst ninja or the best ninja in our school, if he's willing to become stronger I don't see why I shouldn't teach him." (Chris)
"Okay, sorry I said that" (Luna) looked down, she was sad that I got slightly mad at her.
"Don't apologize to me, aplogize to Naruto when he gets here" (Chris)
"Okay." (Luna) Aw so cute!
"So what are you gonna show us Chris." (Kat)
"Since Naruto isn't here yet we should just start without him. Okay first do you see this tree." (Chris) I pointed to a large tree in front of me
"Yeah?" (Chris)
"I want you both to climb this tree." (Chris)
"Ha! that's very easy Chris, I can do that with my eyes closed and one leg tied behind my back." (Kat)
"But you have to climb it without using your hands" (Chris)
"What!!!" (Luna and Kat)
"What's wrong" (Chris)
"You must have hit your brain or something because it's impossible to climb such a big tree without using your hands" (Kat)
"I agree as well." (Luna)
"But it's super easy, look at me" (Chris)
I then turned around to face the tree and started climbing it with my own two feet like it was a walk on the park.
" :O " (Luna and Kat)
It's pretty easy for me since I can control my chakra easily, even the usless Sakura was able to do this on her first try. (Surprisingly)
I got off the tree and stood in front of them.
"See easy" (Chris) 
"How did you do that!" (Kat)
"You have to put some chakra in your feet, you have to use just the right amount or you'll trip and fall. But if you do manage to get the right amount, then you will be able to climb this tree very easily" (Chris)
"Okay I understand." (Luna)
"I guess I do too" (Kat)
"Excellent then start climbing, but first wait a bit Kat." (Chris)
"What's wrong?" (Kat)
"You said that you can do this with your eyes closed and one leg tied behind your back, I don't think that even I can climb this tree with one leg, so you will have to climb this tree blindfolded." (Chris) I said and gave an evil smile,
I'm gonna show her that if she doesn't respect me than there will be terrible consequences. Ahahahahahaha!!!!!
"Damn!" (Kat)
I then used 'creation' to create a black blindfold and put it on Kat's eyes, I was only gonna make her wear this for an hour or less.
"Okay start now." (Chris) I said
"Yes?" (Luna) tried to mimick me but used a bit too much chakra on her foot, now there a small dent on the trunk. And she fell and hit her head. "Ow" (Luna) said in pain.
"Luna, use a bit less chakra, at least less than half the amount you're using." (chris)
Since i'm very sensitive with chakra I can feel just how much chakra they're using exactly, this way I can give them pointers and their progress will be faster.
"Where is that tree *Slam* Ow! my head" (Kat) just hit her head against a tree, she was blindfolded so she couldn't see where she went.
"Kat stop playing around and get to practicing" (Chris) yes I am gonna be 'That' coach. (or teacher for this matter)
"Chris you blindfolded me, can I take it off." (Kat) said while rubbing her head
"But you said you can do this blindfolded." (Chris)
"I was only kidding." (Kat)
"didn't sound like it to me." (Chris)
"But but but." (Kat)
"If you say you're sorry then I might say yes." (Chris)
"I'm sorry." (Kat)
"Sorry I didn't hear you, what did you say." (Chris)
"I said i'm sorry." (Kat)
"No! you're supposed to say 'I'm sorry sensei, I will never doubt your awesomness ever again.'" (Chris) Lolz!
"Never!" (Kat)
"Then I will never take off your blindfold, you can ask Dom for pointers, that is if he isn't busy eating like always." (Chris)
"Okay you win, *sniff* I'm sorry sensei, I will never doubt your awesomness ever again." (Kat)
"Wow I was just kidding Kat, I was gonna take it off in a minute or two." (Chris)
"YOU MEANIE I WILL NEVER SPEAK TO YOU AGAIN WAAAAHHHH!!!!" (Kat) took off her black cloth and was crying on a trunk. I thank the man upstairs for putting me with such cute girls.
(You're welcome my son)
I didn't want to see a crying girl so I comforted Kat a little, I lightly patted her back.
"There there Kat there is no need to cry." (Chris)
"*sniff* but you keep bullying me." (Kat)
"I know and i'm sorry, as long as you act nice to me i'll stop bullying you, and i'll also be nice to you." (Chris)
"Really." (Kat) that was easy...
"Yeah really." (Chris)
"Okay, are you still gonna teach me how to climb the tree." (Kat)
"Of course I am, hurry up otherwise Luna is gonna leave you far behind." (Chris)
"AH! you're right, I better not let her best me at this." (Kat) said while going to the a tree to practice.
After a few minutes Naruto finally arrived, apparently he overslept but he did make it. At first he was surprised to see Luna and Kat here but got used to it.
He wanted me to straight up teach him the rasengan but I told him that he first needs to go over the tree walking exercise, he was a bit reluctant at first, but soon gave in as soon as he thought the awesomeness of the rasengan.
So for the next few hours they have been going at it hard, (that part sounded a bit sexual to me) I prepared food before hand and let them get a taste of my cooking skill at MAX level. Even Naruto said that this is as good as Ichiraku's ramen. And even the girls asked for fifth's, they didn't even care about their weight.
After a long day they did manage to climb the top of the tree, (thanks to my pointers) Luna and Kat were both surprised that Naruto finished the same time as them, they had underestimated Naruto by a lot.
I told them what we would be doing tomorrow, walking on water (like Jesus. Maybe this is how Jesus walked on water, he used Chakra. :O)
After that we all went to sleep.
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