《Antithetic: Spire of Wonder》Chapter 10 - Impulse of The Immature
Advertisement
“Heeerrre you go.” Peak handed me a sandwich—or at least something like a sandwich—full of food that I still had very little knowledge of. At this point, I’d just accepted that I’d have to eat a bunch of stuff without second guessing it. Fortunately, Peak had been considerate enough to try and alter his recipes to stuff more towards my Earthly tastes.
We’d stopped on some rocks in a clearing by the tunnel entrance to refuel with a quick lunch. As always, I inhaled my food at a speed that left me mindlessly fidgeting as I waited for Peak to catch up.
“You know there’s no need to rush, right? It’s not like the food’s going anywhere.” With a mouth full of spewing, half-chewed food, Peak tried to condemn my haste.
“Tsk, tsk, tsk. Peak, you clearly don’t understand. It’s not that the food is going anywhere, or anything like that. The issue is where it could go if I ate it at a paced speed: namely, out of my digestive system, back up my throat, and all over the ground, as my taste buds would cue my body to reflexively expel the seemingly toxic materials you’ve fed me.” In a leap of reasoning that bounded so far that it would put even olympic gymnasts to shame, I stated my retort with an unfittingly proud look on my face.
“Yeah… anyways, I’m done eating now. So, I’d say it’s about time to go over our actions henceforth in more detail.” Disregarding what I said, Peak shifted the conversation’s focus.
“Urgh… more planning? We already went over a bunch of stuff like a week ago or whatever. Can’t we just go in and hope for the best?”
“Ahaha, I figured you’d say that. No need to worry, though, April. I’ll make it quick. I’ve already sketched out our route on the map—” As Peak was talking, he started shuffling through his bag, before coming to a sudden halt.
“Hm…? What’s up?”
“Welp, it seems we left the map at the house… But it’s no big deal, because I remember the route like my beard remembers its signature edge. I mean, I have ran it every other month for five years. Just stay close to me and you’ll be A-OK.” Despite his—or potentially my—mess up of leaving the map behind, Peak, true to form, bounced back in no time and concluded with a plan that both did and didn’t satisfy my need for adventure.
“Hold on a second, just how close are we talking? One of those fancy retractable dog leashes that cost way too much for what they’re worth close, or step siblings in anime close? Because there’s a big difference between the two.” If there was one thing I hated, it was the idea of having to dote on someone in, what would arguably be, the coolest place I’d see yet. Merely looking at the mountain skyline sent my heart aflutter with excitement towards the trek.
“Firstly, what? Secondly, you shouldn’t have to be all that close. I’d say within an arm’s reach should just about do it.” There it was. Said more casually than jeans on a Friday. A single, innocent statement that inflicted more emotional damage upon me than any of the life threatening scares I’d encountered thus far.
“That’s too close, Peak! Too close! I don’t even keep my family that close! At the smallest possible interval of closeness, they’re a holler’s distance away.” Much like a large amount of my excitement, I’d snapped and shattered, instinctively hitting the rock below me to try and prove some sort of point. I tried my best to keep my composure as a shot of pain coursed from my hand and throughout my body, only slightly wincing from it.
Advertisement
For a moment after my display of utter immaturity, Peak looked nothing more than perplexed. However, it wasn’t long until he sighed an admission of defeat, and started talking again. “Look, just… stay safe. Okay, April? I’d never be able to live it down if you—or frankly anybody—were to get seriously injured under my watch. ...But if you promise not to do anything reckless, then I can settle for keeping you within eyeshot.”
“That’s what I call a bargain. You have yourself a deal, Peak.” I gave Peak a thumbs up, then popped up into a standing position. “Anyways, I’m getting a bit overzealous here, so can we go ahead and get go-go-going?!
“One last thing, what are the rules I gave you earlier this week?” Peak, now also stood up, proceeded to ask me to recite something from our previously established plans. The plans that I sorta just sat and nodded my way through.
“Uh… Steer clear of strange flowers, moving lights, unknown liquids, and distinct odors. Don’t approach random holes and crevices. And…” Abusing my above average memory for all it was worth, I struggled to recall the countless warnings Peak had told me.
“And if we somehow get separated, stay still and wait for me to find you.” Peak finished the review for me, and then went to put his classic ear-to-ear smile once again. “Every time we’ve done something like this before, I’ve known the risks and how to help you get out of trouble if it were to arise. So, if I’m seeming overly cautious now, that’s why. Thanks for cooperating.”
“No problemo, Peak. We are partners, after all. Even if it is only a temporary arrangement.”
“Ahaha, I suppose you’re right! I won’t keep you waiting any longer. Let’s go!”
And just like that, full of energy and excitement, we took off towards the tunnel’s entrance—dashing straight into the maw of the ominous, but admittedly cool looking, caves.
Once we were inside, however, we had to slow down as the tunnels became pitch black, blocking all light. Although I had better than average vision, I still found myself walking blindly into Peak’s back as he stopped ahead of me.
“Owie! Lemme know if you’re gonna randomly stop in front of me.” I rubbed my recently hurt nose.
“Sorry about that. Just figured I should get us some light, don’tcha think?” Peak stayed turned around, as he whispered something under is breath. I wasn’t able to make out what he said, but afterwards a gentle breeze brushed through the room.
“What was that about—” As always, I was left in the dark about what was going on, and was gonna look to Peak for answers. However, that was interrupted as I saw a multitude of spots on Peak’s body blotch over with a radiant green light. “Peak! ...Are you alright?”
“Hmm… Oh yeah, I’m just fine. Why do you ask?” Clueless as to why I was worried, Peak turned around at me inquisitively.
“Why do I ask, you ask? Because you’re lit up like a glowstick on Halloween night! That’s why I ask!”
“Oh, is that all? This is just kinda what happens when a Sprite makes contact with external magic. Convenient, eh?” Peak waved off my shock like it was nothing and continued on… meaning I had to run up to him to ask further.
“Sprite… that’s one of those races or whatever, yeah? You’re a Sprite? Since when?!” Still staggering to keep up with the briskly walking Peak, I pointed an accusatory finger as I demanded answers.”
Advertisement
“Since always… Wait, what did you think I was?” Finding what I was saying amusing, Peak finally slowed his pace to match mine.
“Well, I thought you were human, dingus! You look human enough.”
“Ah… That’s a fair mistake for someone who’s not from around here to make. My bad, I didn’t even think about how confusing that might be for you. To be fair, though, I didn’t think you’d know what a human is, either.” Peak and I were just nonchalantly talking, as we walked through the starting corridor of this supposedly hazardous place.
“Ah… That’s a fair mistake that someone who’s never been to Earth could make. Oh, Earth is my old planet’s name, by the way.” As I spoke, I could see Peak grow more interested in the conversation. Despite knowing each other for over a week now, I’d never really talked about my life back on Earth. “My world’s society is of exclusively humans. We don’t exactly have anything unique or interesting like you guys do.”
Peak stopped for a second, stroking his beard in thought before saying. “Yeah, I guess that makes sense.” And then he just continued on, completely accepting what I said.
“Don’t just walk on! Now it’s your time to spill some info! Like, what even is a Sprite, other than a refreshing beverage to be enjoyed with a meal of your choice?” Peak was acting weird. Normally, he’d be down to goofily stand around and talk about whatever came to his head, but now it was like he was in a completely different mode. Whether it was because we were in a dangerous place, or because he was growing increasingly apprehensive the nearer we drew to Shelter was unknown to me. Maybe it was a mixture of both?
“Oh, Sprites are a race of creatures with bodies made out of deeply stored magic. Other than that, they’re pretty much like humans. Besides, y’know, the whole body glowing thing.”
“Yup. Don’t understand at all.” Everything Peak was saying was no more than gobbledygook to me. It was like if you tried explaining how the human body worked to some extra terrestrial race, but you just went “Yeah, the heart pumps blood and stuff, and it makes us live.” ...Actually, somehow Peak’s response was even more barebones.
We kept walking until we reached the end of the first corridor. It was incredibly long and straight… and anticlimactic… and boring… But when we reached the end, it started to pick up more. Not because there were suddenly rampant monsters scurrying about, but rather, the next area we entered. It was… “Beautiful…”
It was like I’d crossed into a completely different realm. A small indent at the end of the starting corridor led into a crystalline world of shine and sparkle. While still too dark to navigate safely without a light, there were random sections of glowing stalactites dripping silver droplets of water, collecting them into an arsenal of glowing pools. Moreover, there were speckles of glowing dust flittering through the air, systematically weaving in and around the room.
“It really is, isn’t it? It leaves me in awe every time I come here. Still, don’t drop your guard. Stay exceedingly vigilant, April. Remember: steer clear of distinct odors, strange flowers…” Peak started his reminder to me, expecting me to finish it.
“Unknown liquids and moving lights…” I looked around the contents of the room once more, now looking at it as Peak was: a room full of potential dangers. No wonder he was tense, even not knowing what there was to fear about these things, I could tell that this room was exceedingly hazardous.
“This is where I’d ask you to stay close to me and proceed slowly.” Peak was on a whole other level of careful. He was taking this seriously, so I figured I should, too. But…
“That doesn’t make sense! Why would you proceed through a dangerous area slowly? Wouldn’t you want to get away as quickly as possible, like we did with the Rapiter?” To me, going slow just gave you more chances to get hurt. Prolonged exposure to dangerous areas wasn’t necessarily the smartest thing, in my opinion.
“Hey, normally I’d agree with you, but not now. This is just the first of many openings in the tunnels, and sure, there might not be any monsters or hidden dangers, yet that doesn’t mean you should throw caution to the wind.” Peak, sensing my eagerness to step forward past him, preemptively held out his arm to bar me off as he spoke.
My view on the room’s danger level had done a complete 180. Where before I’d thought the room was scary and hazardous, I now only thought Peak was overexaggerating.
“Well then what is there to look out for?! Clearly, if something had the chance of jumping us, they would’ve done so already! I mean, seriously, look how loud I’m being!” I gradually crescendoed my voice as I talked until it echoed off the walls and reverberated right back at us.
“April… I’d really appreciate it if you’d listen to me. Now’s not the time to be goofing around, really. Right now, we’re in a zone—an area uninhabitable by a majority of sentient races. While monsters may not live in this room, it still has its fair share of dangers. Think of it like you were in the dungeon already, and act accordingly.” Peak, his voice both becoming more weary and more sharp as he spoke, persisted to try and wane me from doing something he deemed foolish.
“Our agreement was that I’ll stay within eyeshot, so I’m just gonna bounce from spot to spot staying near enough to light where you’ll be able to see me, sound good? Okay great.” Without waiting for a response I took off. The room didn’t appear that big, and I’d seen some of those little lights flicker past a clear exit multiple times. All I had to do was move across a room that could be no longer than thirty yards, resting within the lights without being touched by them. I’d take periodic stops to alert Peak that I was fine, and continue.
“April, hold up! Those lights are really not something you should be hanging around! Even if you’re aware of where they are, they could suddenly move and you’d be screwed!” Peak, throwing all of his prior intricacies and conscientious duties as my guard aside, dashed after me in an attempt to reclaim me.
I’d just reached the first area of light in the stretch and peeked around the corner enough to get a glimpse of him running after me. The ground was slippery, but thanks to my wings, I always had enough drag to quickly stop. “These things don’t even look alive, how are they dangerous? Are they poison barbed or something?” I tossed out a question before continuing to sprint through the room.
Meanwhile, Peak slid into the area by where I’d just left. “No, the lights themselves aren’t dangerous, neither are the puddles. It’s what interaction with them leads to that’s dangerous!” And then he took off in my direction as I stopped once more. He was catching up to me.
“Then what’s the big deal?! What’s dangerous?! Can’t you just tell me that?!” I took off again.
“If I did that, you’d probably run into them on purpose! Our goal is to get out of here tonight, so we can’t take any risks!” The pattern in which we were running was like a zigzag, extending the forty yard sprint into something more like sixty to eighty.
“Why the hell would I do that?! That makes no sense! Unless they happen to give me superpowers or something, there’d be no reason to! ...Wait, they don’t give me superpowers, do they?” Caught up in my own imagination, I stopped for a moment to think, as Peak was about to catch up to me.
“No, they don’t—April look out!” Not expecting me to remain stopped, Peak hadn’t properly adjusted his speed and skid once more on the ground… directly into me, sending me tumbling towards a puddle of crystal water—my wings just barely making contact with the liquid, being an oversized nuisance as always—and veering him into one of the many floating lights near where we were standing.
All of the sudden, my head started to spin. No, it wasn’t that my head was spinning. The room was warping, twisting and turning in unnatural directions. Was I hallucinating?
The next thing I knew, I was laid on the floor, but it wasn’t the same floor I’d fallen on. It was a new floor, in a new place. And… Peak was missing.
We’d been separated.
When I lifted my head up to get a better look at my surroundings, I realized that I was in a place that I’d never been. I was somewhere completely different from where I had been before.
Advertisement
The Dungeon Without a System
The unnamed main character wakes up as a Dungeon Core. Instead of being deep within the earth or in a cave, this newly-minted Dungeon Core finds himself on the beach of an uncharted and uninhabited island. Watch as he explores the uses of mana, defends himself from people trying to kill him and confuses the hell out of all the humans who attempt to understand just why he's different from the other dungeons. New chapters released Saturdays and Wednesdays, 4pm NZDT.
5 1360Demonlordchens Symphony
The world is all wrong. Beings that exist shouldn't exist. And beings that should exist do not. This confuses the young Demonlord Tiacia and she starts gathering likeminded people to claim her Birthright, the world, and to set the world right again. Or she is just a noisy little kid with way to much fantasy who attracts only weirdos as her friends.
8 98Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru
If you were given another chance to spend time with your dead family, would you take it? Would you be interested in living a lie, knowing that reality isn’t that kind? Are you like me also dreaming that reincarnation is real, that life would start all over again? 5 years since the outbreak of the deadly Chivu virus, only 2 people left who had the symptoms of the mysterious infectious disease. Fukuda Surrivan Akira, A 24-years-old NEET otaku had just received a text message regarding Fukuda Akihito's condition, his father. With the sudden message, he felt indifferent towards the death of his last living relative, he was tired, since the last 5 years of the pandemic, every member in his family died. With the feeling of boredom due to his inability to sleep he opened the T.V., "July 18, 2025, the last person who had symptoms in regards to Chivu had already been cured! IT'S OVER!" With bitterness in regards to the news, he turned the T.V. off and went to bed, several hours later he had fallen asleep. The moment he woke up, he was already in a world full of magic and mystery. With the name Surrivan Akira Pridesworth, Sura for short, he began to question reality itself. Born to a new world, Sura saw this chance to live life with his family, loving it like his old ones, but Reality isn’t too kind… Inspired by the works of Rifujin na Magonote's "Mushoku Tensei" and Chugong's "Only I Level Up" Authors: Mottotte Shinji & MalamignaTubig Illustrator: Andreas Rocha
8 93Cheaters Always Win
Chester Everheart knew that life wasn't fair. Some were born in situations where it was almost impossible to succeed, whereas others were born with a silver spoon with everything at their disposal. A scant few were dropped into another world, filled with monsters and magic and forced to fend for themselves. The latter was a rare, somewhat ridiculous trope; but it happened to him anyway. Despite this he followed a motto that applied regardless of the dimension he was in. Playing fair is for suckers, and cheaters always win. Cheaters Always Win is a comedy-adventure that I've had churning in my head for a couple years now. I'd like to think it still has the charm that most LitRPGs have while also being unique in its own way. Every arc of the story will subsequently have a 'Level Complete' chapter that details all the stats, levels, equipment, etc. gained by the main cast of characters. Release Schedule: MONDAY/FRIDAY 12:30PM EST Cover Art by @staticobra on Instagram ★
8 174The Meaning of Life
It all started with that voice. One day, a slightly psychopathic teenager named Krey heard a voice in his dream. A goddess's request, a new world, the legacies of the Divine realms, the never-ending storms in the world of Salratia. With the carefree thought of "I shall live as I please~!", Krey sets out to begin his 'otaku' dream. But it is not smooth sailing. Troublesome divine entities, mortal politics and the relationship with his new companions. How could he, a former assassin and former odd-jobs part-time high school student worker (not to mention an otaku), a perfect example of a loner (though he himself doesn't seem to realize it) be able to handle this problem? "Ei! Whatever, there's still a few more centuries! I'll go travel the world in peace!" [Author here. This is my first time writing a story in RRL. Criticism is very welcome as long as it is educational and has some tips and bits of advice for me. I am still learning]
8 106A Quest of Two Worlds
At 22 years old, Michael has spent most of his life collecting Welfare cheque's and spending most of his days surfing the web and playing games until he finally decides to work for his older, more successful brother who runs a clinic that specializes in body modification. Until one seemingly routine day at work, Michael sees The Barrier; A continent spanning structure built to safeguard humanity is now under siege by the very mythological beasts it was designed to keep out. Michael, now in dire circumstances must make a journey to where no man is safe through uncharted territory in an attempt to stop the invasion and save the world.
8 77