《Deviation》Rewrites or New chapters?
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I've been working on rewriting, and edit the first part of this story to get it to point where I am happy with it. I've been trying hard to flush the story out more, but in the course of not letting anyone read it I've lost motivation. I'm trying to get back into the swing of thing and I was curious if anyone would be interested reading the rewrites and if I should post it here. I've been thinking of it as my final draft and I don't know if I want to reupload all the chapters I've already done.
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