《Dimensional Paradise》Prologue II
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Prologue II
Awakening abruptly, Aleen opened his eyes, feeling the light stinging against his sight.
Unable to remember anything, he tried to adapt his sight to the light strongly shining against him, looking around to know where he was.
It didn’t take long to notice the strangeness of the place. Around him, everything, from the walls to the floor and ceiling, was white.
Aleen was disconcerted and tried to move his body. But at that moment he finally noticed a problem. He was unable to move.
His body was tied with a straightjacket-like object, making him unable to stand from the place where he was lying. Terrified, he struggled desperately, but it was useless.
“Help!” Aleen cried without an answer.
Memories of many horror movies like Saw appeared in his mind, making him struggle with greater strength. But he was unable to move the object in the slightest.
At that moment, Aleen felt a strong pain in his head. It was worse than anything he felt before. As if something was trying to invade his mind. For a moment, he thought that he was going to die, and the pain made him struggle and cry with all his strength. Luckily, the bindings hold strong, preventing him from hurting himself.
After a few seconds that felt like an eternity, the pain began to subside a little. At that moment, something strange happened.
A great number of symbols appeared suddenly inside his mind, changing constantly. Aleen began to struggle again, but before he could understand what was happening, the symbols transformed into English, showing a series of words.
‘Initializing procedure…
Waiting…
Confirming vital signs… No anomalies detected.
Confirming the state of the body… No anomalies detected.
Checking for others anomalies… No anomalies detected.
Status confirmed.
Detected race in database. Determined as human.
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Checking for laws… No laws detected.
Checking for mana… No mana detected.
Classifying information and searching for relevant data, please wait…
Relevant data detected. Following procedure thirteen of law 1513 UDP…
Proceeding…
Detected compatible wave of mana.
Confirming body compatibility.
Compatibility confirmed to 65%.
Beginning procedure…
Appreciated user, we remind you that the following procedure has a 9.8% chance of failure. Thanks for your understating.’
“Wait wait! What is the mean… ing of…”
However, before he could understand, a pain even stronger than before attacked his entire body. Fortunately, or unfortunately, he fainted after a few seconds.
‘Procedure completed.
Confirming vital signs… No anomalies detected.
Confirming participation requirement… Confirmed.
Congratulations host. You will be sent to Dimensional Paradise.
According to your status, you must follow the following rules.
You must move actively towards the completion of the mission. You must end the game with a positive score.
Failure to follow any of the rules will be punished with death.
Welcome to Dimensional Paradise.’
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