《Dungeon of Night》Not A Chapter, I'm sorta stuck... Help Please...
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Ok, so i've writen and rewriten chapter 8 a few times now and just wasn't happy with it...
the main problem is i'm stuck on who gets to be Nox's dungeon fairy. I can't decide between Kate and Selm. Both will play a major part in the stories plot, but at the moment deciding between the two is all but impossible for me.
i keep going back and forth between the two, and weighing the pros and cons between them to see who should fill what role in the story has things coming out to be fairly even...
One the one hand i'd love to have Selm be Nox's dungeon fairy because it would open up a wonderful mentor character while also seting up a future arks point of conflict. It would also leave Kate open to the semi-antagonist role i had planed which could be fun to play around with.
On the other hand there's Kate being Nox's dungeon fairy which would be nice since I purposefully left Kate's character open to future character and personality development. Kate would be a good companion character to develop alongside Nox if not a mentor, and Selm would be an amazing semi-antagonist (My favorite type of antagonist actually...) that i would have fun with.
So there i am... stuck...
I tried debating this out on my own, but i've sort of remained stuck in place. Thus i've decided to turn to the readers for an answer.
Either answer the poll or comment on who i should pick and why, i'll go with the comment that convinces me or the most popular poll option if no comment appeals to me...
I'll also try and get chapter 8 out sometime next week, thus i'll probably end up checking the poll over the weekend...
thanks for the help, and sorry for the delayed chapter...
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