All right let me lead off with the fact that Lizote is not, will not, and has never been in Alt's harem. she loves the guy, sure but not like that. as a charactor she only really has feelings for Natasha.

next, there has been no NTR, as i take NTR to mean partners forcibly taken away from the one that loves them. Natasha hasn't had that happen, and she has wanted a child (specifically one with her best friend) for a LONG time. hell that's the reason she adopted Alt in the first place, go back and read Natasha's POV of chapter 7, so of course she lept at this chance. Also Alty KNOWS this about her, i mean he HAS lived with her for 6 years..... he kinda figured out the main use for her PERSONAL servants a long time ago...... and keep in mind, this is a DIFFERENT world, with a DIFFERENT sense of values Natasha sees nothing wrong with being in love with both Alt and Lizote, which one she loves MORE is kinda obvious, but she has feelings for both which both have come to realize and accept. also note that casual sex for Vampeerus is not the same as it is for other races, I.e: it doesn't always equate to love, like and friendship sure, but not always love.... AS SUCH i am sticking to my no NTR policy, but keep in mind that different races and cultures in this story's world don't always view things the same way that you may. in fact there are more cultures that PROMOTE polygamy or some form of open relationship in this world than enforce monogamy (though those ARE present and may be seen later on....). so have a little trust people DAMN...

moving on, DUH there were emotions last chapter. have you ever thought about how emotional it would be to have someone know EVERYTHING about you. if you think Alt who DOES in fact have emotions, even if they are twisted and kinda evil-ish, would be able to brush off something like that your wrong. psychology tells us that even confirmed sociopaths react to total acceptance of who they are and what they have done, so deal with it. FEELS come up periodically, sue me if i cant make my MC into a flat emotionless robot of a character, BUT NEVER PUT ME AT THE LEVEL OF FUCKING TRUMP!!!!!! i swear, if he somehow wins the election i'm moving to Canada before he starts race purges........

Yes Alt will be Cute forever, if you cant deal with that or feel that it will somehow change who he is, was, and/or will be as a character then that's your opinion and you should probably drop this series now........ Charm is literally his highest stat throughout this story, you don't GET that without it changing the way you appear to be more.... well charming. this form he is in is the one that was deemed (Deemed by who? the one who ACTUALLY reincarnated Alt. hint it wasn't Hellatia) to be the most appealing to both genders, animals, spirits, and the divines themselves, and this premise itself is a major plot point. minor spoiler: soon he will come to accept this fact, and even be grateful for it as he focuses on something FAR more important to him.....

no the twins aren't related to Alt, the potion just needed his diluted and treated blood as a catalyst, by the time Lizote was done with it, it wasn't even really BLOOD anymore.

and lastly the central harem, as in the characters with mutual love (in THAT way) for each other, and who actually MATTER to Alt and co., will never exceed 10, why? because i can only really give depth to ten characters and have them not be flat-cut-outs that are just there. cant just flood the story with ultimately meaningless side chapters getting everyone to CONNECT with every side character. an example of this is Philas, she is, was, and will be a disposable piece in Alts mind. useful and fun to have around? yes. does he love her? no. will he grieve if she were to die? not really.

there now that THAT little rant is out of the way, i hope that answered all your questions btw cuz i am NOT going over all that ever again, we can move on to the editors contest.

here's what you have to do. the sentences below are fucked up, and YOU have to fix them, BUT in a way that keeps the sentence as close to the original as possible while still being correct. message me on RR with the corrections, and your character concept and i will announce the three new editors and ultimate winner in an upcoming chapter. the competition ends Sunday (whenever i bother to check the messages), so the faster you are the better your chances will be.

GOOD LUCK!!!!!!

On Sunday, Anthony went over to Nicks hose to play basketball. They played a game in one-on-on. Anthony made six baskets, but Nick made eight. Nick was the winer After the game, both boys went inside to have some snack and watch television.

Do you know what Ryan do last weekend? He went to the beach with he family. First, Ryan built a huge sand castle. Then he collected seahells and rocks. After that, his went swiming with his brother Ryan has a wonderful time at the bach.

Last knight my father made us a spaghetti diner. He makes the best meat balls in the world! I eated lots of spaghetti. My brother spiled sauce in his whit shirt. we all laughed. I love where the dad makes spaghetti!

On day i helped my nextdoor neghbor clean up hi backyrd. Our raked and put leaves n blue bag to recycle them. Then we sawed some branches of of a tree this was leaning aganst the house After we worked in the yard all afernoon, we sat down in his back porch and had lemonade. I felt god that day because I helped my neghbor.

Chapter might be out later today............ maybe..............

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Auther out.