《Everyone is a Superhero! Apart from me》Changes to the story
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Hey!
So I've been collecting feedback from readers for the past couple days, and I've made some changes to the story and how I'm planning future chapters. First off, I'll make the POVs more consistent. The vast majority of chapters will be written in the POVs of the main characters (Eugene, Melodi, Azra), and the POVs will stay for many chapters instead of jumping around every few chapters, unless there's really a need for a jump. To accommodate this, I've changed Chapter 3 from Lek's POV to Melodi's. I hope this will provide a better reading experience and avoid unnecessary confusion.
I'm also updating character and world information in the very first chapter, as well as reworking the stat system. There's a lot of information to be added so it will take a while.
Let me know what you think in the comments!
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