《Everyone is a Superhero! Apart from me》Can you spare a moment?
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Hello everyone!
I'm Daniel Newwyn and I'm the author of "Everyone is a Superhero! Apart from me". I'm writing this because I know that you guys—the readers—are a very important part and I want us to take this journey together. That is, some power to you! I'm a total noob in this genre, so I'm thinking of letting my readers decide aspects of the general direction I want to take with this book, and it starts with gathering some feedback. This chapter will always be pushed to near the very end whenever a new chapter is released (the newest chapter will be on top always to notify readers of new chapters).
Right now, I have questions as follows:
1. What do you think about the two main characters (Eugene and Melodi) so far? Do you think they are interesting enough characters?
2. Is the litRPG elements in this world adequate? So the status screens and stats doesn't equate to this world being a 'game'; it's just that Soulbound Companions are able to quantify the power of Flair users and turn them into stats. This is my first ever attempt at writing a story with litRPG elements, and I'm in dire need of some feedback.
3. How's the general prose? Is it funny enough to be worth the tag 'Comedy' or should I remove it? Are the fighting scenes good?
I do have a general storyline plotted out, but I don't want to ask questions regarding plot just yet. When we hit about 10 chapters, I'll start gathering feedback.
I'd love to hear your thoughts. Thank you!
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