《A Fantasy in Time》Inquiry
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I know I promised to not do any more notices, but I've come to realize WHY I haven't been able to produce chapters as quickly as I had at the beginning. I've read so many other great stories and learned more about where I am lacking. In addition I've had several ideas that just don't mesh as well with the current character growth. In truth, the main reason that I am even creating this story is to gain a fan base that will hopefully buy my other series that I have been writing, once I complete it. When comparing the quality of this story with my other story, it is greatly lacking. My intention is to keep the same storyline while improving the back story, character growth, gaining of abilities, and just plain logic and reason.
I will leave my current version of the story up until I finish revamping what I've written so far. If anyone wants to give some advice as to where I can improve then I would be very grateful to input and suggestions. Once I'm done with revamping all of it, then I will release one chapter (that may be made slightly smaller or larger depending on where a good breaking point is) every day until I've reached the end of what I've currently written. I know the frustration of seeing someone revamp an already decent-good story when the price is waiting, but believe me when I say that it will be MUCH better afterwards. My guess is that is will take about a month, but it may be shorter since I've already done most of the work of creating the first draft.
The Title of the improved story will be Elemental Soul
Again sorry for the disappointment of the wait. But it will be worth it.
I will regularly check the comments to my announcement to see where I can improve the story.
Also, you will know that I have begun uploading the improved story when this one disappears. It will be nice to have a fresh slate in terms of reviews and voting. :)
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This Game World is rigged against Mobs!!!
I suddenly got my past life memory back, what to do (asking for a friend...)? *Real synopsis: Alean Steelight, son of Baron Steelight, 4th generation of frontier knights, is somehow a mage? And mages can only be supports? In the frontier where dangerous beasts and monsters stalk the land, mages who can't pull their own weight in combat are considered trash. After being dumped by his parents at the Royal Academy, Allean must somehow survive the most heinous place known to mankind, high school. Now if only he didn't suddenly remember that this world is going to end, it would have been much easier on his mind at least. =====================================================*Disclaimer: This is my 1st novel, and English is my 2nd language, so expect some spelling or grammar mistakes. Also plot holes, and generally bad planning and such. Feel free to point out mistakes so I can grow as a writer. Update whenever I have time and inspiration. If you think the name is familiar, I do take inspiration from " The world of Otome Games is Tough for Mobs" and other academy-type novels. *Warning: This novel features references to self-harm, depression, suicide, etc. Viewer discretion is advised If you are uncomfortable with LGBT+ elements in a story in any way, then this novel might not be for you, sorry. The main character is straight/bi-curious, so yeah... Yay teenage hormones and confusion.
8 129The Death Simulation
Please note that there is no sexual content in normal chapters except for chapter 7 which has moaning only. Chapters with nsfw will have [NSFW] listed in front of them A boy and two of his friends find themselves selected to be punished in the place of his last generations for the disturbance the rebellion of two cities has caused. The punishment was that 20,000 children aged 10 - 16 years of age had to enter a simulation type MMORPG where they would have to kill 10 bosses to exit. If you die in the simulation, you die in real life. 300 days, to clear the simulation. 10 bosses. He enters the simulation and forms the strongest guild, will he be able to clear the simulation?
8 135Hegemon of Another World
A doctor transmigrates into a world of magic. Devoid of modern technology but not of mysteries beyond science. Follow Ronan as he uses modern knowledge to his advantage and masters the magic to become the Hegemon of Another World.
8 176Cursebreaker
I'm not writing this anymore unfortunately, and I probably won't ever continue it. I guess writing is more difficult than I thought Reto Mason woke up on a mountain, and it was all downhill from there. Until they hit floor, at which point I'm surprised they didn't die to be honest. That is, they didn't die yet. We'll see what happens This is a LitRPG which does have levels and stats, but is more focused on Accomplishments, although expect some more classic RPG stuff in the future. The main focus is on skills, and skill modification/evolution in that regard. Expect some weird 4th dimension stuff eventually, and the weird things that come from there.
8 139You Booster! (Tian Lang Xing)
That amazing view of the planet, from its high orbit… And that person, glowing in light, smiling as he confirmed something from him. Soon, he bid him farewell. ‘We’ll meet again… Old friend,” So said that person. The same dream, kept repeating. Yet, not knowing what it really meant, Xin Shi could do nothing about it. He had other concern anyway. Unwelcomed by their own clan, he and his mother moved out to meet their only ‘true’ relative in this world... Yet, in this martial world, things so rarely went according to plan… The boy’s life, changed entirely that very night. The night when, he realized, how powerless he was.
8 76crossed over
modern day au x no white star au og cale is busy feeling sorry for himself when he winds up in a modern au where he's dating alberu. meanwhile, his modern day self is now stuck in the fantasy world he came from with no idea how or why he got there just a lot of chaos because i enjoy hurting og cale taking some suggestions for other characters/relationships if they comply well with the story outline i have
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