《A Magic Sniper in Another World》Poll#1: To rewrite or not to rewrite
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Okay so this whole page is just dedicated to this one poll. It's just that i've read some books here in RR as well as some reviews about them that made me reconsider continuing this series, thankfully, since I already have the magic theory created and written in my laptop and i'm too lazy to delete it, I am now considering whether to rewrite or not.
The rewrite won't make any HUGE changes, just little bits and bops. Also i'm thinking about dropping the whole harem thing... I've thought of the first romantic interest for Zack and got good romance and character development in my drafts, but after that, I can't think of a way to introduce other girls into his story.
Also, that huge info dump in chapter 4... or was it 5.... anyway, that huge info dump didn't look that pleasing to my eyes.
The only things i'll change will probably be the structuring of my writing, I don't know whether that that could be called as a rewrite though... anywho, the things i'll be focusing on in this series is grammar, the structure and style of writing, and for the future i'll focus on chap. 6 and writing longer chapters.
Please vote in the poll, but do know that I am indecisive and the results of the poll may or may not affect my judgement, but it will still hold an opinion.
Lastly, if you want me to add/remove something or to fix something in this story, please comment your suggestions.
[EDIT]: No matter what this poll brings the harem is OUT until further notice. The romance part of the story is still far out.
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