《Rose of Thorns and Blood》Chapter One Choosing your gifts~ (Revised)
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Choosing your gifts~
~~Narumi pov~~
I was honestly surprised when I started discussing more the reincantion process with him, I never even opened myself before to someone after the betrayal from my parents, choosing to rely on my cold persona, so when people saw me they would only see an unaproachable peerless beuty, an ice queen perhaps, so I didn't have much friends in my long life, coupled with the need to kill I was a sociopath, to keep me occupied I delved into japanese culture, yet this man brings up my kind aura back again I am really glad that I found someone that I can open to, I hope he can be my friend, it would be nice I never had those.
(God) "And so you have the liberty to change everything in the story like I said nothing is set in stone..."
Even so reincarnating as the little sister of the protagonist is getting me excited, even though I felt a lit I couldn't reconnect with him, then after he defeated nagato and was regarded as a hero as i listened to the crowd saying "we believed in you" or "welcome back" while cheering, those FALSE WORDS, not even a single one of them had the guts to say sorry, sorry for the fox hunts, sorry for making your birthday the most hated day of your life, sorrry for glaring at you, sorry for tthrowing you out of the orphanage at 4 years old, sorry for making you scavenge through the trash bins of konoha looking for the next meal, sorry for your malnourishment, and stunted growth, sorry for putting you in a rundown apartment close to the red light district, sorry for sabotaging your studies and exercises in the academy, sorry for selling overpriced clothes and food so your only option is to buy cheap instant ramen and jumpsuits that are eyesores, none of that happened, I felt betrayed, it was their chance of redemption yet they carried on like its no big deal.
I thought when he went to Genbu island to train in the kyuubi chakra, when he finally met yami naruto I thought that naruto would shed his mask and finally show his real self that he lived for so long, after the battle he accepted his dark self but I didn't see any changes in his personality, he never showed any dark emotions after that and I was baffled, he turned into a machine incapable of fealinghatred, jealosy he became inhuman and idealistic to finally become the 'child of the prophecy' another thing I disliked, in the first half he was so determined to overcome the Fate that Neji always talked about but he accepted his role in destiny pretty easily in the second half.
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There are many other characters that I would like to point out their significant personality flaws but I digress, I guess the only characters the viewers could identify themselves as would be Maito Dai, Maito Gai, and Rock Lee as they didn't have any special power or talent, but they made up for it by sheer guts and determination.
(God) "And that is the overview of the reincarnation I will simply put your soul into the fetus at 4 months old now its time to choose the gifts for your journey then you will choose your appearance"
Aan this is the moment I choose the cheat, even though another person might think 20 is too much, but for me who likes a confortable life away from life threatening situations, even though I may go on killing sprees and try to rid the world of trash I do it with brutal efficiency, sometimes the mongrels don't even know I am there until it's too late, I never let the enemy monologue, I mean even though I slew some corrupt corporate higher ups i never let them say things like 'wait I have money' or 'what do you want in exchange from my life' pathetic at least die with some dignity I didn't infiltrate your office with a bloodied knife just to hear you babbling about.
This is my personality no advantage is enough for me I will always take everything to succed those who didn't live on the streets starving shouldn't look down for our choices, if I see an opportunity to better my life then I will take it, that part of life Weed from moonlight sculptor had the right idea, and it worked for me I took my chances and became the owner of an international company and one of the richest persons in the world, the days I passed sleeping in a cardboard in the cold semmed like a long nightmare, one that I might suffer again in a few years it seems but I can endure again if need be, from the experiments I already have eidetic memory so that will not be necessary, and he did say that my traits were imprinted on.
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(Narumi) "My wishes are infinite health, vitality, regeneration, and chakra, perfect chakra control, a godly level of intelligence and comprehension, I want to learn everything 10x faster than any prodigy that ever existed in all areas of life be it shinobi skill or others, I want to be immune to genjutsu, and any mind control or mind altering seal, i want to raise above the peerless beuty and become the most beutiful woman ever, I want a heavenly body without limits, I want to have the capability of becoming a perfect sage, I want to have dead bone pulse, and all chakra natures, and their sub-elements I want the rinne-sharingan but instead of ocupying the whole sclera the rings must be tightly fit on the center resembling an iris the rest of the sclera can be the normal white, and finally you as naruto uzumaki with the same gifts as me as well as those kekkei moras that were imprinted on my soul"
(God) " while infinite is not possible i will make it as close as possible the other gifts i can grant easily as well but are you sure about the last one?" he said with a spark of excitement in his blue eyes and a slight smirk.
(Narumi)'hum so it must be boring siting all day here he needs a little adventure, why not give it to him, i don't want to lose my friend so fast so i will drag him with me'"of course you are the only person who i opened up in dacades, it was a long time ago where i displayed my emotions like this i'd like to think you were my very first friend' i didn't notice it then but i had a wide smile on my face, he widened his eyes before blusing and looking down avoidng eye contact
(God) 'Damn i can't look into her smile without blushing like a tomato what's wrong with me' "Alright if you are sure let's move to your appearance"
he clicked his fingers then i felt something strange with my body then looked ahead where a mirror appeared, what was before me was a blonde haired whiskered girl, so beutiful i was lost in a daze, there were not words to describe her face and her figure but perfection, i then realized that i had minor control over her, i started to make some changes to her appearance like making the red rinnegan with tomoes purple again, this time a royal glowing purple, the i made my hair a myriad of colors resembling a sunset instead of the sun kissed blonde i then looked at god with a look that said i finished it, but he was blushing a storm and drooling a bit, hey your appearance is drool worthy too, now we are even.
(Narumi)" hey you are there? I'm finished already"
(God)"Oh sorry" he wiped the drool off his mouth" then let's go"He clicked his fingers again and it all went dark, but I was not anxious anymore because I can feel his presence close by, it's really reassuring.
Now let's start my life here in the elemental nations.
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