《Clock Link: A Story of Magic and Murder》Message from the Author, Feedback, and What's Next
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Hi. I started brainstorming for Clock Link almost three years ago. At that time, the idea of finishing a book seemed like an insurmountable task, but I decided that I wanted to try. Over this last year, there were many times I felt like I was terrible at writing. Times when I felt like I couldn't even get a single word down on the page. Thankfully, I think these are problems every writer faces at one point or another. With the support of many of my friends and fellow RRL members, I was able to pick myself up and reach the end. I still have a lot of room to improve as a writer, but for those of you that have read my story (or plan to read it), I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
I'm now thinking to the future, and I'm considering self-publishing. Before I can reach that step, I need to do a lot of editing. Any feedback, positive or negative, would be appreciated! What parts of the story did you like? What didn't you like? Did you walk away still feeling confused about anything? Were there characters that you wanted to see more of? Development you feel they should have gotten? If you don't want to write a comment here, you can always write a review on the fiction to let me know your thoughts. Anything is helpful! (Warning: If you haven't read the story, keep in mind that spoilers could appear in the comment section)
Peace out, and keep Portland weird!
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A Virus Life For Me
Poor Mark just cannot catch a break. First he dies saving another person and is summoned in front of the "Overbeing". The "Overbeing" gives Mark choices for his next reincarnation due to his selfless act. However, all is not as it seems. Just before being sent off to experience his next life as an evolver Mark overhears another person talking to the "Overbeing". It seems Mark was somehow a threat to the "Overbeing" and was eliminated and sent on his way before he could cause problems. Now that Mark knows what happens he vows to attain enough power to overcome the "Overbeing" and thus fulfill what he was eliminated for in the first place. However, to do that he must master his evolver abilities and make it through a new world where magic and monsters are real. Man reincarnates into a simple virus. Must figure out how to evolve into more dangerous and significant things. Hijinks, hilarity, and hopefully action occur along the way.
8 83Great Ascension to Godhood
To all readers, I will be taking a break to start up a new project. I may or may not continue this novel so just informing the loyal ones. Thank you for your support! Living in the year 32xx, the Great Speech is a thing of the past. Using genetic manipulation to colonize on numerous planets, it's an era where the human race reigns supreme. But there is only one thing unknown and unexplored — the Oblivion Gates.Brigan Heartforce, who happens to be an average youth is soon forced to venture one of these strange portals. Within the gates, he will realize that the myth to become Ruler of Mortals was never false in the first place.Read as he takes the realms and planets by storm, all the while attaining a place above the masses — a throne fitting a god.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.WARNING!,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.[IF YOU ARE UNABLE TO HANDLE SUSPENSE, THIS IS NOT A STORY FOR YOU.],.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.Release Schedule - 6:00am Eastern Time (GMT-4)Release Frequency - 1 Chapter DailyWord Count Per Chapter - 1000~2000Story Support - https://paypal.me/Reading0Books,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
8 176Once a Hero
Welcome to Scott Smiths world. Retired Marine, living in the suburbs, has the hots for the local Beauty, regular neighbors, a very very boring life so to say. But what if life throws you a curve ball and resets you back a few years? What if your life became a game? What if you were not allowed to die in this game? Come venture with Scott as he ventures forth in Once A Hero.
8 65Accidental Time God
In a world of swords and magic, one man strived for the perfect clock: a pocket watch like no other. Supported by intricate gears within the casing and innovative magic formations etched onto the mana core at its center, never would it rust as it ticked along in perfect sync for eternity.But mana is a tricky thing, so incredibly simple yet far more complex than anyone will ever be able to grasp fully. After many years and many owners, powered by a constant flow of raw magic energy, the uncountable memories and emotions directed towards the little watch since it was created with such devotion finally took form. Fragile and naive, a new type of being came into existence in the midst of war. Watch him as he learns about the world, his owners, the effects of time, and, most importantly, himself.
8 178Another Naruto Fanfic (Not For Fun)
A remake for a novel I wrote half a year ago called Another Naruto Fanfic ( just for fun ):- https://www.webnovel.com/book/13414708506788005/Another-Naruto-Fanfic-(-just-for-fun-) The story begins with Voidne, who hadn’t socialized for a long time, getting desperate to socialize and become a functional member of the society. What Voidne didn’t know is that, the people in society are always led by benefits. In this cruel world, there is no friendship, there is no love, only they seek is benefits. After a long fight against desperation, and an ever increasing pressure from his family, Voidne, against all his believes, gathers the will to commit suicide to end all of his suffering. Not sure if hell is awaiting him as mentioned in his religion or not, Voidne anticipates that his journey will only be get harder from now on... Just to find that he was now being conceived by his new mother... How will Voidne’s adventure carry out in the new world? It is all up to fate~~ (AKA ME) I do not own Naruto, nor do I own the cover picture. Cover picture link: - https://www.pinterest.com/pin/464644886535751958/
8 191Tanjirou x Reader One-Shots (commissions open)
You read the title. Commissions or suggestions in comments. Anything will do. Have fun!If you want more just check out the full story on my main page.(Sanmiittai_Katudo #Reminders)~Slow updates~author-chan out~!
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