《Clock Link: A Story of Magic and Murder》Message from the Author, Feedback, and What's Next
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Hi. I started brainstorming for Clock Link almost three years ago. At that time, the idea of finishing a book seemed like an insurmountable task, but I decided that I wanted to try. Over this last year, there were many times I felt like I was terrible at writing. Times when I felt like I couldn't even get a single word down on the page. Thankfully, I think these are problems every writer faces at one point or another. With the support of many of my friends and fellow RRL members, I was able to pick myself up and reach the end. I still have a lot of room to improve as a writer, but for those of you that have read my story (or plan to read it), I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
I'm now thinking to the future, and I'm considering self-publishing. Before I can reach that step, I need to do a lot of editing. Any feedback, positive or negative, would be appreciated! What parts of the story did you like? What didn't you like? Did you walk away still feeling confused about anything? Were there characters that you wanted to see more of? Development you feel they should have gotten? If you don't want to write a comment here, you can always write a review on the fiction to let me know your thoughts. Anything is helpful! (Warning: If you haven't read the story, keep in mind that spoilers could appear in the comment section)
Peace out, and keep Portland weird!
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