《The Soul of MorningStar》Chapter 11 The path of evolution part 2
Advertisement
I spent the next hours avoiding paths that appeared out of nowhere. I couldn't avoid them for long. Each time I took a few steps in a direction, one would appear right in front of me. I was getting fed up with this place. A new path appeared , I decided to take it and accept whatever evolution it brought me.
Before long, I saw a castle in the distance. I was curious to see what could be inside but I hoped I wouldn't get beaten again. If I hadn't stopped to think about what I should do, I wouldn't have seen it. At times, the castle wavered like an illusion in the middle of a desert. The closer I looked, the more I doubted that it was truly there. I got closer.
Evolution Quest!
Pass the trial of ???.
Difficulty: ???
Reward: ???
I dismissed the useless notification with an annoyed flick of my wrist.
The gate opened into a courtyard where deep red roses bloomed around a paved path. I entered excited. At the door, I used the engraved door knocker to signaled my presence. No one came to greet me. I waited a few minutes and then, I went in.
“Is anyone home?”
Silence answered my question.
“Is anyone home?” I asked louder.
Still no one came. In front of me, there was huge golden double stairs. At each side of them, vases were full of lilies. On the floor, there was a fresco in marble. It depicted a woman sleeping with a a demon on her chest. Well, I thought it was a demon. His red eyes were shining. He had a vague human shape and he was made of black smoke. Tendrils of smoke were going into the woman's head. He had a smile floating where his mouth should have been. His teeth were long and razor-sharp.
At the left of the double stairs, there was an archway leading to a large dining room. The table was made. It was full of dishes each one more alluring than the other.
“Is anyone home?” I shouted again. Meals didn't prepare themselves on their own. I waited again but no one came.
Looking at all this food, I got hungry. It got so hard to resist the temptation of having a taste that I ran out of the room as fast as I could. From then on, it was like the place was out to tempt me. Each room I went in had something I desperately wanted. I didn't understand my own feelings. One moment, I was fine and the next, I thought I would die if I didn't sleep on a soft bed or eat the food on the table or wear gorgeous clothes. It was ceaseless but I resisted temptation.
I came to a library. It was huge and filled with books. Their spines were beckoning to my eyes. I pulled one of them out of the shelves and skimmed through it. It was blank. I checked another one and there was still nothing in it.
All of a sudden, I felt a hand pass on my shoulder. I jumped in fright and turned around. There was no one behind me. I could feel eyes on me.
I nervously made my way out of the room. I wanted to get out of this castle. In the corridor, I stood shocked. It wasn't the same corridor from when I came in. I remembered it. The wallpaper had been blue with gold embroidery. This corridor had a red wallpaper. There was only one door to the library, so there was no way I made a mistake.
Advertisement
I rushed out to where I thought the entrance would be but I only ended up in another corridor. I was in panic. I couldn't find my way out. I entered a random room and went to the windows, when all around me, the furniture vibrated. Drawers opened and closed on their own. Vases floated to the ceiling. Chandeliers flickered in and out.
My fear went away. I stayed rooted to the ground and laughed. Whoever was doing that didn't have a great imagination. We weren't actors in a bad ghost movie.
“Hello! You can come out, I know you're there.”
A woman appeared inside the room. She was gorgeous with flowing red hair and a voluptuous figure. She looked like a wannabe Jessica Rabbit dressed in medieval clothes.
“Who are you?”, she asked me.
Not again. I was getting tired of that question. “I'm myself.”
“No seriously, who are you? It's been centuries since someone came in.”
“Huh? You're not like the others. They just asked the same question over and over again and refused to say anything else.”
“Pfft. Those weaklings are too serious for their own goods.”
“I'm Everheart. You must be the owner of this castle.”
“Yes, I am. So tell me what brings you here, Evie?”
“Everheart. I'm going through my evolution. I followed a path but it annoyed me so I ditched it and wandered around until I found your castle. From outside, it looks weird so I just decided to come in.”
“You're the one who's weird. If you found a suspicious place, why did you come in? Normal people would have run the other way. And why did you laugh when I tried to scare you?”
“It's scarier to face the unknown but when you started playing with the furniture, I knew you didn't want to harm me. Otherwise, you'd have done it already.”
“I don't follow you're reasoning. I could have been a monster who wants to eat you.” She pouted like she was disappointed that I didn't find her scary but her eyes gave her away. They were smiling.
“I don't think so.”
“Ha ha ha ha. I like you. You can stay.”
“Are you going to make me pass your trial?”
“In a hurry?”
“Nope, I just want to be ready in case. Two beating in a day are good enough for me I don't need more.”
“Oh? So you took the air spirits path?”
“Are the others different?”
“Yes. In the water spirits path, you have to listen to lectures about the universe. In the fire spirits path, you have to get out of labyrinths by answering riddles. In the earth spirits path, you have to sit still.”
“It's a joke, right?”
“Sorry.”
“I'm truly the unluckiest person in this game. I had to answer stupid questions and got beaten for nothing.”
“Don't beat yourself about it. No matter which path you'd taken you'd have had to answer the same question. It's unavoidable for a spirit evolution.”
“What do you mean?”
“A spirit's main powers came from his mind. If your mind waver, you won't be able to do anything. That's why you need to be clear on fundamental questions such as who you are, what you want, where you come from and where you are going.”
“That kinda make some sense.”
“Are you hungry? Let's eat.” She led me through the castle back to the dining room and its table full of food.
Advertisement
“Do you live here alone?”
“Yes.”
“It might be rude to ask that now but what are you?”
“I'm a spirit. You can call me Maron.”
“Maron. Why are you different from the others. They all looked like me?”
“I'm not from the four common paths. As I said before, it's been centuries since anyone came here. I've been alone for a long time and having someone around got me a little overexcited. I might have tried too hard to impress you.”
I smiled at what she was saying but I didn't miss the fact that she didn't really answer my last two questions.
“I'm so grateful to have met you. I didn't understand anything since I've been here. No one answered anything to me.”
“Ask me any questions you want. It would be my pleasure to answer.”
I didn't hesitate to take her on her offer, I asked every question that came to my mind.
“Why did the others look like me when I passed their trial?”
“To make you waver. It's something to be asked those questions by someone else but it's a different matter altogether when you're the one asking yourself.”
“Why do they beat people in the air spirits path?”
“ Air spirits are selfish. They don't like to spend their time on other people. The beatings are as much a punishment as an incentive to get on with you evolution faster.”
I wanted to complain but I restrained myself and kept asking questions. I didn't know when she would change her mind and stop replying.
“You said you weren't from the four common paths. So what is your path?”
“My path is whatever I want it to be.”
“Oh! It looks interesting.”
“You still haven't eaten. Please enjoy yourself.” She made a vague movement of her hand toward all the food on the table. She was trying to change the subject.
“I'm not particularly hungry.”
“Lying won't help you, you know.” Her smile slipped from her face.
“I know the gray guy told me that the truth will help me.”
“Hmm? So you've met Janus.”
“Janus?”
“The spirits in charge of gates and passageway in the spirit world. You look tired. Do you wish to rest in one of the rooms?”
It was suspicious, she was too eager to cater to my wishes.
“Oh no thank you. I've already bothered you enough, I'll be on my way.”
I decided to make my exit. I went to the door that was not too far away from the dining room. As I was about to open it, a razor sharp gust of wind came from my back. I threw myself on the side avoiding being cut in half by an hair breadth.
“You're not bothering me at all.” She looked down and a blush crept on her face. It would have been quite convincing if a second earlier she hadn't tried to kill me.
“What do you want from me?”
“I just want you to enjoy your time here.”
“Sorry but I had to get on with my evolution.” My instinct were spot on. There was something fishy about Maron.
“Didn't you want to pass my trial?”
“Maybe some other time.” I discreetly advanced toward the door while we were talking. She was using magic, there was no way that I could win without any skills.
When I was close enough, I rushed to the doorknob. The door didn't open.
“Didn't I tell you to enjoy yourself?” Her face changed. Black tendrils of smoke came out of her shadow and wrapped around her. Her eyes turned an eerie red color. Her teeth grew and became razor sharp.
I didn't wait to see what she would do. I ran away. I passed several rooms in my escape. In one of the rooms, I came upon a window. I couldn't get it opened. It was like there was something behind it that prevented the shutters to open. I threw a chair at it but it didn't break.
She rounded the corner walking leisurely. Her face was back to normal.
“You can't leave. What are you going to do?” Her smile was creeping me out.
Two answers came to mind as soon as she asked this question, fight or flight. Whatever I chose I would be in deep trouble. I chose the third option. I threw my hands in the air in sign of surrender.
“Good choice.”
“I'm tired. I'd like to take you on your previous offer for a room to rest.”
“Sure. Please follow me.”
She left me alone in one of the bedrooms. I flopped down exhausted on the bed. Sleep was pulling at me but I resisted. I had a bad feeling. It was like I knew how to get out of this castle but the solution was just out of my reach. I racked my mind thinking about it. The solution was just there, I knew it.
It had to do with Maron's nature and actions. She could kill me with no difficulty but she didn't. She didn't want to hurt me either. She must have a reason to keep me alive and whole. She only attacked me when I tried to leave. As soon as I gave up on leaving, she became nice and eager to please me.
Her appearance when I tried the door was the most suspicious. I had seen it before. As I kept thinking about it, I remembered the fresco on the floor. I cried excited. The answer had been in front of me since the beginning.
I stood in the middle of the room. I took a deep breaths, I closed my eyes and concentrated.
“Out. I want to get out. Out. Out.” After a few minutes of this mantra, I opened my eyes.
The castle was nowhere to be found. I was back outside. Right in front of me, Maron was glaring at me.
“What have you done!”, she screamed.
“I'd like to pass your trial now.” I was confident that I could do it. I knew what she was.
“No! I refuse!”
She was scared. She looked around her for a place to run. Realizing she had nowhere to go, she crumbled on the floor and cried. It wasn't the pretty kind of crying but the full blown tears, running nose, and hiccups. The type that made you want to run in the other direction and forget you ever saw something.
I stayed my ground and waited for her to stop. Her hands were on her face. She was glancing at me through her fingers.
“Please ask the question. I want to pass your trial.” She said it herself, no matter the path, I had to answer the unavoidable questions.
“No! I won't let you!”
As her scheme to get me to pity her didn't work, she went back to using force. Her face distorted. The human appearance she had kept until now vanished. Her body became immaterial. It was made of back smoke. Her red glowing eyes were glaring at me. She let out a deep roar and lunged at me.
The expression on her face when she went through me was hilarious. She prepared herself to come at me again. I raised my hand and imagined a fireball at the tips of my fingers. I made it grow as much as I could. And then, I throw it at her. I thought of her burning in the fire. And it all happened.
“How?” she cried after the fire died out. She was back in human form. She was badly burnt.
“I just had to put all the pieces together. Why did the other spirits refused to talk to me? Why did all the information you gave me looked so truthful? Janus said it, the truth is the only solution I have. So the answer was that you can only tell the truth.”
“I underestimated you.”, she said through gritted teeth. She clearly had something up her sleeve.
“No, you overestimated yourself. If you hadn't given me so much hints I would have never understood anything. And by the way, I am going to leave this place and I am going to live how I see fit.”
“No!”, she screamed as the black mist got absorbed inside my body.
You have completed the trial of temptation!
Do you wish to become a mara?
“Yes!” As soon as I answered my vision dimmed and I lost consciousness.
Previous / Next
Advertisement
- In Serial44 Chapters
Horizon
Emiluna is about to turn 16 and gain access to her first two classes. Living in a small village in the middle of nowhere, she always wanted to become a Hunter. Having learned a bit under her parents, a miller and a seamstress, she was sure she could never pick a class that meant staying inside all day. But being a Hunter is more than just a class. It means providing meat for the village, culling small pests near the cultivated fields and most importantly guarding the village from predators and monsters. But Emiluna is not a normal girl and her destiny far bigger than she could have ever imagined.Join her as she finds out what awaits just behind the horizon.[Word from the author]I am looking to create a fantasy world that has some logic to it and stays believable even as characters gain power and progress in levels.Classes and level quantify the people's progress, but they do not artificially inflate their power to demi-god levels. I am primarily trying to write a captivating story, not "power-porn". That means it will be slower than the fast burning litRPG you might be used to, but it won't burn out that quickly either and I won't drop half of my plots at the wayside. I should mention that English is not my native language. I hope it is mostly unnoticeable, but sometimes I manage to slip some awkard sentence structure in there (German sometimes puts things together in reverse).It it also my first time writing an actual fantasy novel and the first time writing anything at length in English. Any constructive feedback is very welcome.Credit where credit is due: Cover picture by Paul Bica (Licensed under CC 2.0)Check out his amazing photos here: https://www.flickr.com/photos/dexxusYes, my cover picture is a photo, not a drawing. :D I might try my hand at some Paint-ification later to add the title.[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
8 186 - In Serial14 Chapters
Cores
Magic came to our planet, along with gates to another world. When creatures are found to have an organ known as a core, an extremely dense energy source, Lucas finds his chance to avoid the tedium of a desk job: monster hunting. All he has to do is not die.
8 462 - In Serial24 Chapters
To The Land of Nyx
When Hyde ends up inside a carriage with his sister and a butler, he knows that his carefree days as a young nobleman are becoming out of reach. Tasked to journey to a kingdom far from home, he finds himself looking for ways to make their trip less unbearable and even enjoyable. Accompanied by soldiers he considers as friends—there's hope for them! But things are not as they seem to be. A slice of life fantasy fiction that updates sporadically!
8 197 - In Serial96 Chapters
Indomitable Marvel
-This is a wish-fulfillment story that is in the MCU universe and will follow the MCU in my own way. The goal is to blend my story in and around the MCU. -It will be a while, a very long while before I get to the actual MCU storyline. -The story may seem a bit slow depending on what you're after. -Updates will be slow. -He does not start op. -Be warned I'm a below-average writer, I need to work on my details and wording, and probably everything else. Expect quality fluctuations. -((( Useful feedback is much appreciated. ))) -This will have a harem since my last story didn't have one. --Expect badly written lemon scenes. They will be marked for an easy skip for those who don't want to read it. If you can handle all that, then welcome aboard. -The Asgardian Theoric is about to get a second chance. [[[ https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Theoric_(Earth-616) ]]] -The story starts before the MCU where he will grow his abilities on his way to becoming indomitable. -1st volume: Prologue -2nd volume: Troll War - (ch.12-59)-3rd volume: Hidden Forces - (ch. 60-???)-4th volume: Olympians-5th volume: Mutants-6th volume: MCU-7th volume: Darkness???-8th volume: ??? ___________________________________To help answer some questions people might have. - No beast companions and as of right now no plans for beast companions. (But then again Hela does have Fenris...)- No kingdom-building,- The beginning of the story puts a lot of people off because I didn't go the normal route people would like, and they don't tend to like the troll arc.- He also starts a little rash and seems a little weak because his powers easily drain him, some of this is explained later though and fixed by Gaea, but many miss this and only concentrate on the fact that he isn't being and doing what they think he should.- I should also explain that he has some memories that were locked away and then deleted because of his rashness. This was simply a way to end the whole locked memory thing, the Acanti soul was a plot point to give him future memories of the MCU, beyond that it served no more purpose so I got rid of all the other useless knowledge, He was in no way nerfed as some would like to believe.- I made him a little more emotional then I would like at the beginning, it was my attempt at trying to give him a personality after being criticized for the lack thereof in my last story. - Ruthless? I don't think so, I'm going more the route of a fair Mc. He'll do more of an eye for an eye type stuff, gender does not matter to him when it comes to this.- While the harem isn't the end all be all goal, it's true that he's going around getting women.- I do have a story beyond the harem though and will not focus too heavily on the harem beyond the obvious. Mostly he just goes around sleeping with them and beyond that is anyone's guess whether they stick around or not, I do try and make it feel a little more real, but it is a harem. ___________________________________ -I have also posted this story on Royal Road and Wattpad.
8 129 - In Serial6 Chapters
THE WHISPERS IN THIS DARK, CRUEL, AND GHOSTLY WORLD
(Vampires & Humans Vs. Werewolves & Ghosts???)It is the year 2201, and the human race is at war with not only the next evolution of the human race, werewolves, but also against Nature itself. An Ancient race of underground dwellers called vampires live and tries to protect humanity by bringing the human population underground in their habitat. The humans and Vampires live in fear of the werewolves, but that is not all, If this was the worst of it all, then it would have been a rather nice end for a good bedtime story about humans and vampires leaving in harmony underground, but this was not the end and neither is this a bedtime story. Nature (planet) still had big plans for the world, even with the creation of its henchmen, the werewolves (who have no control over themselves at all, merely acting based solely on their biological instincts), that was still not enough for nature. Nature still needed one last thing, something that could give those werewolves orders, tell them what to do, guide them, something that would be a personification of nature itself, something that would be nature's full power, with its wisdom and knowledge, something that would be its symbol. Ghosts.
8 75 - In Serial60 Chapters
Chronicler’s Tale
When two universes are merged together due to the betrayal of gods, chaos descends on the newly reborn universe. This is the story of one young man who is thrust into a new and dangerous world beyond his wildest imagination. He must learn how to navigate this unknown world and how to survive his encounters with its deadly inhabitants.
8 210

