Hi, Origin fans! I know you probably came here hoping to see a new chapter. You will get one of those this weekend.

This update is to let you know that I finished the minor retooling and updating of the first volume. There are expanded scenes, hopefully far fewer errors, and a lengthy new scene that needed to be shown. I also had to retool the status windows and such because I couldn't convince my tables to become proper images. However, while doing so I found a few small math errors in my stat calculations and fixed those as well. :)

Also, there is a cover to this story now. It is fairly decent, but I do want to save up money and get some anime style illustrations and a proper cover in that style done. So, supporting the arts might help with that in the long run (It takes months for me to get royalties from either of these sites. Maybe I should make a go fund me or kickstarter thingy if any of my stories take off and become truly popular?"

It is now up on Smashwords.

Edit: The Amazon version is now available. :)

So, if you want to read only the free rough draft version here on RRL and only comment or review here, that is perfectly fine and I appreciate your thoughts! The final version will have a few differences here and there for each volume, but that is the difference between a rough draft and a finished version, right.

Anyway, thanks for reading! I'll start up volume two some time this weekend. I need to update a few other stories up here that have been languishing. :)