《Impera》Author's Notes
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Finally did it, didn't I?
After many rewrites and even more unpublished drafts, I finished a book's worth of a novel... And it was... Hard... I hope the readers who stood this long around will be satisfied with this conclusion, and we can get to discussing the mentality behind it all. Stick around if you want to get a better grasp of what all of this was about... In case my low-tier writing wasn't enough to explain it.
If you are wondering what was the reasoning and inspiration for this, it's simple really. There just isn't enough fantasy novels with a Roman setting, and I was tired of searching for them, damn it. I decided to give a try in writing one, both as a time killer and an experiment to see what it was like to write a novel. The goal was producing some that was both above average for the standards of RoyalRoad and satisfied my low expectations of my author """talents"""
It took me 2-3 months to come up with the concept and finish it, so I suppose it wasn't all that time consuming. I enjoyed coming up with some of the most colorful characters and introducing a story where the reader was at least able to somewhat sympathize with the characters, understand their motivations, and have some suspension of disbelief. You know, all the things that make reading something worth it.
Whether I have succeeded or not is hard to say, as it isn't for me to decide. You, as the reader, is fully empowered to dictate if I have. I would greatly appreciate if you, who have read all chapters, could post a comment saying your impressions, or better yet leave a written review. It is uncertain if I will continue the story or not, and I wish to have some feedback before making this choice.
Thanks for reading!
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8 276The Primordial Tower [Re]
The Eternal Lion, Conqueror of the 98th floor, Lord of Destruction watched in horror as his companions were slain, one by one. Humanity had made a fundamental mistake in assumption from the beginning, for this was no fair trial. His rage knew no bounds, but alas it was to no avail. The only reason he still drew breath was because of a being stronger than even God offering him his twisted pity, making him watch as his companions, his sworn comrades, were slain one by one in front of him as a punishment for daring to affront Him. He only saw one final glimmer of hope to overturn this accursed outcome, which lay in the reward for completing the hidden piece on the 98th floor. [The Inheritance] Allow your knowledge and experience to flow back in the river of time, back to the beginning of the Primordial Tower's awakening on Earth. Entrust the fate of humanity to one of your kind. Cost of Activation: Erasure of existence from the river of time. To think that all his efforts would only lead to becoming a stepping stone for another. With a final roar in defiance, he activated the skill. "Let the roar of the eternal lion tear through the boundaries of time." Get ready for one hell of an adventure. Now do it all over again! Follow Noah Smith's journey, a young man struggling to find a job in a sluggish economy, as his life gets overturned and the fate of the world is suddenly thrust upon his shoulders! One opportunity to change his very perception of reality, will Noah rise to the occasion and give Earth the savior it needs, or will he watch from the sidelines as it heads to damnation? Sometimes, an ant can see what the mighty lion, in hubris, overlook. Updates Friday.
8 183The Emergence Of Spheres
Sciolyn is the central continent in a large disconnected world where the art of magic lies dormant, disappearing thousands of years ago in a great war between Men and Elves. Many of the ancient Elves left the broken land, disappearing in portals and never to return, until now... Tycon is a wanderer - a bounty hunter who makes a living bringing in degenerates and criminals to face the full extent of the law. He takes a job as he would any other, it seemed simple enough; Capture or kill three criminals but he soon finds himself following a spiral of events that lead to the re-emergence of monsters and magic and the return of the ancient Elves. The world will burn before they see Men above them once again.With dreams that follow him like a shadow and a looming threat incoming, will he decide to stop it or turn his back on the humans after a lifetime of prejudice against the remaining elves? The cover image was commissioned by me and drawn by Abesdrawings, you can find him on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/AbeDaSquid.
8 220The Journey of Atlantis- The Children of Earth
Captain Levi Metcalfe must lead what is left of life on Earth after a neutron star decimated the solar system. Can he get them to a new home before their luck runs out? Humans find out the hard way that you have to leave behind more than your family and home to preserve the race. Can Levi and Sonny, the ship's A.I. guide them to a new life, not just their old life on a new planet?
8 153Volturi kings mate
Maya has been hiding nearly her whole existence. She is an angel, and no I don't mean she acts like one, no she actually IS an angel! The angel of death to be exact. She makes sure that vampires that have abused their powers were punished. It's funny how they always seem to beg her to please stop and instead hand them over towards the volturi instead. It might be because she is ruthless when she is handing out her punishments. Not only were they tortured for long period of times but in the end she killed them as well. Since she is extremely powerful she has gained a lot of enemies, but to her luck no one knows her secret to whom she really is.When however one of her oldest friends asked her to help him fight against the volturi, she agreed! Not because they where after her ever since they heard of her, but because Carlisle is her only true friend! What will happen when right on the field all three of the volturi kings find their mate in her? Will she ran away? Or is she going to stay?
8 96New Escape
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