《Alviona (undergoing Rewrite).》Mistake and an update
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Good evening dear readers. I apologize for not catching this mistake earlier, but chapter 26 is a 2-part chapter that I intentionally separated. I forgot to add the Part 2. It will have a different name.
For those that got confused why Alviona used a [Fireball] even though she said she would not, "chapter 27 - Mana is a form of power," will question and explain it.
Now, for the update.
Chapte 28-32 will be a small adventure Arc, where I hope to show readers how MC'S thought process works. Some already expressed to me their distaste towards the girl's indifference to lives in general, while others said that she is overly violent. I can't say much without spoilers so instead I will say that if you can not take her point of view... I can not do much. There are worse things that will be depicted than the criminal scene from earlier. The world is a harsh place, especially for someone who was created to be a living weapon to defend herself.
Also... Alviona is not evil. It depends on the viewpoint. However, she is labeled as an anti-hero. So, don't expect her to save everyone.
Post your thoughts and comments below and we can discuss anything up to this point, if you would like. ^_^. Also, let me know what do you want to see from the MC. I am curious of your opinions and thoughts. Thanks everyone for reading my dream fiction.
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