Childhood Arc:

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Training Arc:

Prologue: Writing (150%) Editor (0%) Proofread (0%)

Kiryun Arc:

So it has come to my attention a few weeks ago, that my story has severe problems. Mainly that there is a lack of a plot or goal and even feeling in my characters. So I will be taking the next few weeks to go over and rewrite the story. Some things that I expect to change is...

Childhood/Training arc:

Since I wrote that Michael's family lives in a big house, I feel that there's a need to have some maids. Mainly to take care of the house. Only 3 but they will be making some casual appearances in the story.

Michael needs more scenes so I'll be writing about his interactions more. Especially with Liera.

Removing the Time Skip and actually writing about the training. This means I will be giving him new stats as well.

More information about the continent of Gaia. I was about to write about nobles in Chapter 18 but it was incredibly awkward and I think it would be better to put all the information I need into the Childhood arc and Side Stories.

Introducing a new cast of SS characters. Players whose names I have taken from chat. Only in the last SS of the arc.

Better curse. People don't like the halved stats so I'll be changing it a bit.

Michael will be going through some internal problems as well. Well, more mental than internal bodily problems.

Travel and Kiryun Arc:

So a big problem about this arc was the various descriptions I give out and the lack of action. I will move most of the descriptions to either the childhood arc or to SS.

Actions. I will be describing fights in greater detail.

Liera. She and Michael will be talking alot more. She will get more screen time as well.

Jemma. Some scenes from her POV will be added.

Lerisa. More of an antagonistic role in the story. Like that gag villain. More backstory too.

3 Editors and 4 Proofreaders! Recruitment completed (2 days :P)

If you want to apply, please email [email protected] although I really doubt people will >.>

Questions and concerns and even some suggestions? Please comment below or email.

Also review my fic so I can see what the problem is. AND RATE!!! This has been a blatant advertisement from Argos. Even though I'll ask for a score reset later >.>

The new fic stuff.