《The Unnoticed Dungeon》Chapter Nine: The Lay of the Land
Advertisement
Chapter Nine
The lay of the Land
Toot crawled out of the crevice and squinted in the bright sunshine. He knew that he was in the town of Goulcrest, but didn’t know what street he was on. He surveyed the area and took stock of where he stood and where the crevice laid. He realized that the cavern was fairly small, but there was a rock formation that made building there not impossible, but definitely not cost-effective. Which suited him right down to the ground. No one would want a piece of land that they would have to pummel with picks and sledgehammers to level out and then fill in a sizable hole on top of all that effort.
He noted that the space took up the size of four lots. Which meant he could put up four individual stores all at once if Dev agreed to it. The way he saw it they could do a weapon shop, a clothing store, a shoe store, and something else to be decided later. He’d cottoned on to the idea of the mortuary. It offered so much potential. That was getting new bodies and information, memories, skills, and a host of other things without having to kill a single person. Killing was something the overseers would be on the lookout for; that and the presence of adventurers. They would not be looking for shoppers.
The mortuary thought brought him a revelation. The fourth shop could be for refuse. Dev could provide a copper coin in exchange for a bag of trash. People threw away everything. Clothing, cutlery, food, ceramics, the list was endless. They could bring in the trash themselves so that he wouldn’t have to gather it, and they wouldn’t need to design a minion to do so either. Dev wouldn’t care about the copper, and would be getting all kinds of frameworks to replicate or experiment with. Broken things could be redesigned or pieced back together. He could see now that Dev hadn’t been thinking big enough. His idea had more potential than either of them had initially realized.
Dev, Toot thought, can you hear me?
Ah, yes, the shocked reply came. How are you doing this?
We are bonded companions, Toot thought at him, this isn’t all that special since I need to be able to communicate with you instantly inside of the dungeon, but outside of your confines the range will diminish quickly.
I see, Dev said with a hint of surprise at this revelation. What do you need? Are you testing your range?
No, Toot replied, I have a feel for where our contact point will end, and it isn’t far. What I am asking you to do is going to take some effort, but you need to do it as fast as you can.
No problem, what do you need, I was just looking over the enchantments I just got.
Toot knew that was a lie. He could still feel the core’s focus on the gold coin, but he didn’t care.
Please expand your territory to the opening of the crevice by the time I get back, If possible claim the empty space around it too. Just stop at the other buildings. This is going to help in a couple of ways. First, by having a direct connection to the outside your mana intake should increase slightly. Secondly, if you manage to claim those spaces then we’ll be able to rapidly build our stores. Otherwise, we’ll have to do it the hard way by hiring people.
Advertisement
And waste gold for labor? No thanks. I’ll get there even if I have to choke down a ton of granite. Dev’s tone carried sincerity and seriousness.
Good core! I’ll see you when I get back. Hopefully, I’ll be able to get everything I need done by the day's end.
See you then, Dev replied sounding like he had a mouthful of rocks.
Toot dusted himself off. He noted that he was on a street named Oleander Lane. His memory told him that the town hall was two blocks east, and so he started in that direction. He would be able to buy the lots there since they were owned by the town. He’d also be able to get his merchant’s license, a builder’s permit, and possibly a store blueprint for his new lots. H would even post a notice about accepting trash for coin. After that, he would head out to the other merchants and either buy some of their wares or gather their scraps. His goal today was to get everything he needed to set up shop on the morrow. If Dev could do what he’d been asked of then they were well on their way to hiding in plain sight.
It was a daring plan, and Toot respected Dev for having come up with it. He knew they hadn’t even come close to realizing the concept’s full potential, but they were just getting started. Who knew what they would come up with in a week? He whistled as he went, the world was his oyster and Dev the crowning pearl.
<>
Dev gnawed on the ground. He’d managed to add an additional three feet to his space. He was hedging his chances of getting to the small crevice opening by focusing on taking in small one square foot spaces in the direction of the opening. He could feel that he was supposed to expand spherically, a little at a time, but that would take far too long to get where he needed to be. He knew this because his vision in the rectangular space he was carving was blurry. It was like looking down a very small tunnel. He had no idea of what was outside of that expanse at all, and he didn’t care.
He could hear the sound of dripping water, but he hadn’t heard Toot splashing through it when he came or left, and so knew that he didn’t need to go there. Instead, he was following brightness. Where he’d been the only light had come from the funglows, but as he advanced he could see a steadily increasing luminesce on the cavern’s floor. That was leading him to the opening. Hopefully, he would make it there in a few hours, and then he’d be able to expand his sphere to match where he had gone.
Dev would have much preferred to have spent more time with his gold coin and could have done so by just setting his expansion to something called autoguide, but he wanted to steer the course properly. The way the autoguide worked was that it would let him grow his territory without having to think about it. It would just increase his area incrementally in whatever direction he specified, but he would have no control over it. He couldn’t tell it to head towards a light source; all he could do was give it a cardinal point to go, or just increase his sphere’s size and he was done. So, he had to do this job manually.
Advertisement
Even when he finished with that he was going to have to figure out how to disentangle the enchantments on the sword. He needed to add powers to his repertoire quickly. He had to take solace that he was resting on his beloved golden treasure and that it wasn’t going anywhere. He would have alone time with the coin soon enough, he rationalized.
A pang of guilt shot through Dev’s core. He hadn’t even considered what Toot was going through. The old man was out in the world, away from the safety of his dungeon core. Who knew what terrors he was facing as Dev complained that he couldn’t nestle up to his coin and snuggle it? The thought of the coin nearly made him forget poor Toot. Brave Toot, who had broken rules by bringing them both to a different world, and had cheated by finding a place with things he would have struggled to attain normally. What horrors was he facing even now?
<>
“What do you mean the lots aren’t for sale?” Toot gave his mustache a forceful smoothing and flicked his end at the clerk in irritation.
“Those lots,” the clerk pointed to a map of the town, “Have been listed as dangerous. There is a gaping chasm there that is a menace to the public safety.”
“I heard you the first time, lad,” Toot said through gritted teeth, “And I told you that I plan to take down the stone outcropping and fill in the ground beneath it. The only danger would be to me. I’ll get it done quick enough that no one will fall in.” His voice carried a low growl and said in no uncertain terms that if the clerk wanted to see a public menace there was one right before him.
“The town council has ruled that it is not financially feasible to do what you have planned. The costs would be enormous to consider. I have a nice pair of lots over on Jackson street that wouldn’t be a fraction of the fees associated with those lots.” The clerk pushed up his glasses and pointed to a spot a good distance away from the crevice.
Toot’s muscles tensed as he tried to get himself under control. It wouldn’t do to have him lose his temper over something like the purchasing of some land. He knew why they didn’t want to sell him the property. It had to do with the pile of skeletons near the entrance of the cavern’s opening. The spot was used by someone for dumping bodies. The man he’d give to Dev had just been the most recent one. He’d left the others for Dev to find on his own. It was a sort of surprise gift for the core. It was something that had been going on for a while, and a secret they wanted to be kept under wraps. He could understand that. If some traveler or envoy vanished without a trace then no one could accuse the town of having disposed of them, they probably met a grisly end somewhere on the road later. Regardless, he didn’t have time for this.
“I want to speak to the mayor.”
The clerk sniffled and rolled his eyes. It was clear that he was becoming annoyed with dealing with Toot. He rolled up the map of the town and slipped it underneath his window counter.
“I am afraid that his honor does not see visitors from out of town without an appointment. I would be happy to schedule one for you. I have an opening in six months. Would you like to secure that date? Of course, the mayor may have urgent town business come up, so I cannot guarantee his availability,” he said with a smug grin.
“No, I’ll see him now,” Toot glared back wanting to wipe that look off the clerk’s ratty face. “You tell him I need to see him in regards to the numerous bodies contained in your little murder hole, particularly one that had a knife wound in his underarm. Feel free to rush. I’ll wait here.”
The clerk turned pale and grew even paler as Toot spoke. By the time Toot had finished his sentence the little man was running to what Toot assumed was the mayor’s office. A predatory grin crossed his face. He tried not to let it show, and his mustache helped, but it would have sent shivers down the spine of anyone who saw it.
Two minutes later the clerk reappeared, his face was red and dripping with sweat, and his voice quavered as he spoke.
“H-h-his honor has an opening right now. His office is down the hall and is the last door on the right.”
Toot gave the man a curt nod and headed in the direction he’d been instructed to take. He didn’t like letting the animalistic side of his personality slip out, but he’d just been so aggravated that he couldn’t help himself. Hopefully, the mayor was going to be in a better disposition for talking business.
If not, then he had no qualms about letting the beast out.
Advertisement
-
In Serial38 Chapters
Lawless Ink
Bullets meet magic in an alternate-history wild west. Near Butcher Hills is a mine where magical ink grows. Monsters spawn from the deadly depths. Chase Craig's only goal is to do right by his dead daddy and earn enough money to get momma away from this dangerous area. The best pay means mining the upper levels for ink, and the Rangers who police The Mountain have their own plans for the young man.
8 166 -
In Serial47 Chapters
Phantasmic Light
The world is corrupt.Nobles and royalty step on the common people. The common people have no choice but to join the military or live a life of poverty. The military is brainwashed to only obey orders, even if it's to conquer and pillage innocents. When living a life of poverty, you're treated as livestock, killed after deemed useless. When a boy summons the power damned by the gods, will he destroy the entire world like they say? Or will he end the current regime and bring about a new era of peace? AN: This is the first time I'm writing a story like this. If you don't mind my poor grammar, weird name choices, and sloppy mistakes feel free to stick around (and correct me please.) Constructive critism is welcome! However please do not just bash my story as I do put a lot of effort into it. I want to make an enjoyable story for myself as well as all of you. Ps: It's time to come back and rewrite the entire thing, since it kind of went off the rails and then I abandonded it a couple years ago. Thanks to my friend for drawing the cover art for me.
8 184 -
In Serial24 Chapters
Cloud Shrouding the Sky
Everyone will gain a blessing from God when they reach the age of 10. As an orphan I, Cloud, also went to the temple as the others when I reach the age of 10. When I was about to get the blessing, I met God. God tell me that he got something extra because my evolved soul. Later I learnt that what I got was a cheat skill. With this cheat skill i will be able to create a better future, if i can get into it. But really, kicked out from the orphanage and living on slums, not getting any job because my age and skills. Forced to pickpocket nobles and merchant with risk of getting arrested, sold as a slave or even executed. What a life, the future is bright but the present is so bleak that i almost blind. Then she came into my life, although it is i who first save her from danger but later on she gave me all i can ask for. A job with good pay, a place to stay, even her father sent me to the world famous Academy with her. She is my lady of luck, all skill i got was because i met her. Without her, even with cheat skill probably i wont be the present me. She changed my present and ensure my bright future. Right now i pledge that i will always stay by her side and guarantee her hapiness as her servant or companion. With me, Cloud, here even the sky were to fall dont you even have a slighest worry because i will definiteley protect you. This is my first time writing a story, i dont know if you guys will receive it well or not. I started to read LN from NU and RL, and it enchanted me. But unfortunately the author and translator are humans too so they couldnt keep up with my reading rate. From what i had read, i started to imagine what if the world like this, or what if this character had an ability like this or what if the decision the character made was different than the stories. All of that keep coming up as i read, and then a few weeks ago i started to write what i imagine into a new story. Through writing the story i learnt that making a story isnt as easy as imagine. I must think of name, plot, character personalities, the environment, etc. Then one day i decided, fuck it lets post it first and see how it is going to be. To tell you the truth i like chinese martial arts story better but i cant make chinese name since i dont know the language. I learnt from the internet that creating a random name in Chinese is dangerous so i make this story to be Japanese like western story. But i still want to add martial arts and cultivation element to it. I will write what my imagine is like, something will be changed along the way thats for sure but i hope you guys will understand it. Each chapter will at least have 1500 words but i am not so good at english so correct me if there is something wrong with my grammar. I post this so that i can share what i imagine. One last thing, i like OP Main Character and although i dont hate training plot but i dont like weak main character. I hope you like what i write, any critics and suggestion is welcomed so write it on comment section so we can discuss it with the others. Warning For you guys that dont like OP Main Character, bad language, violence, and maybe in the future there will be NSFW content, dont read it For those who seek perfection, you wont find it here Strategy, Business Management, Trickery not my forte so dont seek it here but i will try to make it if possible Character skills will randomly appear as i tried to think what op skill i want for my character so bear with it Plot will be good, well i hope so if not then bear with it
8 902 -
In Serial33 Chapters
Monstrous Heroic Decimation
Can a single person rise above everything the world throws at him? A world where a single person's life is only worth the amount they're able to carve out of the other's body... a world where the veil of society is held together with a thin veneer, in tiny pockets of a world they once inhabited... Sam is about to hit the coming of age ceremony, and his life up til this point has been good with two caring parents attending school everyday, yet will he throw all that away because of what's about to come? A cultivation-esque, monster taming/evolution story.
8 161 -
In Serial84 Chapters
Outsiders of Xykesh
In the center of Asher's most treacherous waters lies the island nation of Xykesh. Hundreds of years ago, the tyrant Digax fled to it as a refuge after his defeat. Since then, his power has shrouded it in storms and wards which let few people in, and none out. Nearly the whole of the island is now his domain, and what is left is wilderness full of monsters. Though the Mad King himself is a distant figure, his Chosen rule with unquestioned power over their subjects. But their hold is not absolute. On the day Digax claimed Xykesh as his, a blind prophet foretold that an outsider from beyond the island's shores would come, and they would end his reign. And so the King has dreaded their arrival ever since. Many outsiders have arrived on Xykesh, either by accident, or in search of the truth behind the mysteries and myths that have sprung up around the island. The populace has been long conditioned to distrust these new arrivals, but so far, none have proven to be the ones the prophet spoke of. At least, just maybe, until now. Four parts per episode. Twenty-six episodes for volume 1. Updates Tuesdays and Fridays.
8 153 -
In Serial5 Chapters
FUTILE DEVICES
How fast a time changes. One night changed the whole life of the two boys. No one remembers except the one who suffered.They say your faults will be punished but what wrong did by a little bean inside someone. :: It's a collaboration . I'll mention the the other later in the end::
8 75
