《ATL: Stories from the Retrofuture》Please Fill Out the ATL Reader Survey [News Post]
Advertisement
Hi, a request from your Friendly Neighborhood Thedude: Please fill out the ATL Reader Survey.
As of this writing, there is only one response, so I’m really hoping for more feedback to help me change up ATL and make it better. You do NOT have to be caught up in the story to fill it out, so if you’re behind or you only read some, your feedback will still be heavily appreciated. Anyone who’s finished, though, PLEASE give me your thoughts, because the stats tell me there are only 7 of y'all lol.
The ATL Reader Survey should only take about 5 minutes. Most of the questions are optional, too, if you want to skip it. I really want to hear opinions from ATL readers! Share the link: http://tinyurl.com/atl-reader-survey
In other news…
I’ve done some preliminary work on ATL’s rewrite already. The story will focus less on standalone story arcs, and instead gear itself more to traditional book-length stories. The original version has 8 story arcs in “Season One,” but the new ATL will have 4-5 interlinked stories per book, each one telling a complete overarching story in the series. It’ll still have different mysteries or villains for each section, but there’ll be a lot more cohesiveness than the original.
This isn’t set in stone, but I also intend to make chapters much longer. Social Media Killer was 34 chapters at about 1,800 words each, for 60,000 words total; a remake Social Media Killer might have, say, 15 chapters at 5,500 words, for 80,000 words total.
And, importantly, I want to make sure the characters are all amazing and super memorable. You won’t like all the characters, but every character will have their fans, for sure. This also means, though, a smaller recurring cast overall, I think. The ATL Reader Survey will go a long way to helping me figure out which characters are worth changing or cutting.
Advertisement
And overall, the timeline for this remake is still unclear. In 2022, I plan to release copyedited versions of Systemless as ebooks, an original fiction remake of Glory of Bowsette, and of course I will finish Golemancer. Depending on the rest of my life, I should have all that done in the first half of the year, which means I think I’ll start working on RE:ATL around next fall. But life is always unexpected, so there’s a big chance I won’t even get to start until close to 2023.
Once again, sorry to active readers who were really enjoying ATL, but it’s clear that I really messed up somewhere, because I lost basically all readers and stopped getting new ones. I’m going to change that somehow. In the meantime, please enjoy my other books, even if they don’t have the sheer power of Morgan Harding, our favorite kid.
(Please fill out the ATL Reader Survey)
Advertisement
- In Serial8 Chapters
The Calculator - Supervillainess Time Loop
What makes a terrifying villain? Is it ruthlessness? Is it how powerful they are and how many buildings they can down in one blow? Is it how hard they are to kill, contain, or get rid of in any manner? Is it their knowledge of a hero’s true identity in a world where secrets must be kept? Or is it perhaps how they seem to be perfect in all their actions, defeating the hero at every step of the way throughout to the last one, only to humiliate them one last time before declaring themselves the winner in the grand scheme of things? Isabella Blair is perfect. She knows all your moves before you even make them. All your ambushes are faced with traps and she dodges all your blows like it’s child’s play. Catching her is impossible because she’s always ten steps ahead of you. She says she calculated everything, but she messes up in every fight. She loses far more than she wins, sometimes a hundred times for just one small victory. Yet, she is perfect. How is that possible, you may ask. That’s because she has the uncanny ability to return to the past whenever she makes a mistake. All that’s left in the end can only be what’s perfect if all the realities in which you’ve lost are gone, after all. And that makes for one hell of a terrifying profile. Crossposting on ScribbleHub, SpaceBattles, and Wattpad. Don't mind the "Pre-Rewrite" Volume. It is there for reference until the story catches up to the chapter count via the Rewrite (and to justify the current reviews as there would be no context to them otherwise). If you are a first-time reader, feel free to start from the other Volume.
8 201 - In Serial31 Chapters
Orphan Queen Valkyrie
Val Valicent had been an orphan for almost as long as she could remember - ever since religious zealots stabbed her mother in an alleyway when she was only six. Six years later, Val is a street-smart orphan doing odd jobs for chits and eking out a living. Only it seems like bad luck follows Val wherever she goes. When Val takes a job helping out a local bounty hunter, she finds herself being pursued by the fanatics of the Pale Order, and they want her blood. Literally. They want to bleed Val dry, and she doesn't even know why. Follow Val's story as she contends with religious fanatics, power-hungry nobles, and an incredible family secret. Will she finally find a family? Will she be among those Gifted with magical powers? And will she make good on her blood oath to make the Pale Order pay for what they've done to her and her family? Find out in Orphan Queen Valkyrie!
8 160 - In Serial10 Chapters
Technically Sentient
Technically Sentient is the uncomfortable answer to the Fermi Paradox: bureaucratic inertia. There's also a shark cop in there too. And a human meat tank and a bunch of greys down on their luck and a viral bioengineered killing machine and a T-posing AI and a cat. But they're not important, in the grand scheme of things.
8 187 - In Serial8 Chapters
Rise of the Green
This is set three hundred years before my other fiction, Journal of an Adventurer. With the age of disbelief coming to a close, people shoved to the side and rejected from mainstream sociality came together to form an organisation. If they worked together, they would protect their way of life, which conflicts with their technological mindset. In Favinonia, a place of learning and advancement. Where the world’s new technologies are created and studied. University Engineers reworking various new designs of past do-dads and gismos to serve the need of the populous. In a world still filled with magic, the Favinonian people have turned away from magic to embrace this new reasoning. Deprived of faith, the populous was yes advance but lacked humanity and needed to move onto the next step, losing emotion and losing touch with the higher realm. These cause some to fall for other means, pursuing that need to fill with devil and demon cults. In the chaos and ignorance came a community of healers with ancient knowledge before the Massacre of Magic. These few will eventually found the church of the Trinity whose three aspects of Green, life and death with healing and agriculture, Orange, retribution and protection with the flame of passion and Blue, knowledge and law with the clarity of the mind.
8 136 - In Serial16 Chapters
Apollo and Daphne (Modernized)
What happens when the nyphm Daphne got her wish? To be normal again? Does it have consequences? Yeah, and a whole lot of them. Can Daphne ever return Apollo's love? Would Artemis ever succeed in helping her brother? Would the war of the gods have an end?Read Daphne's adventure as she flee's to New York and how Apollo chased her. Again.
8 117 - In Serial7 Chapters
"Wii Are Together" (WDY AU)
In this AU, Eteled and Austin were about to fight, when suddenly, the wii gets corrupted, causing them to fuse together.(BTW Brandon and Logan are the nicknames me and my friend gave for these versions of Henry and Austin-)
8 169

