《Universe Online》Volume 1 PDF Previews - Now looking for PR's!
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Okay guys, here's the deal.
I'm currently proofreading and editing Volume 1 of UO, and I just got done with the prologue. 14 pages is actually quite a bit of work to read over and edit, as well as changing the table over to something Google Drive actually recognizes.
Thankfully Google Drive tables are carried over properly when published as a PDF.
So for those of you who want to check out the edited prologue, here's a link:
UO Vol. 1 Prologue PDF
You guys will have to download it, sadly. I couldn't find a good hoster that'd let online viewing.
I hope you enjoy it though. I ended up changing quite a few things and streamlining it a bit. It actually turned out to be slightly longer than the unedited version. Heh.
Feel free to leave messages, comments, questions, etc. here in this thread! I'll be posting a few more links as I get the chapters done!
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Someone made the suggestion that I advertise for proofreaders who might be interested in tearing through UO and fixing all the nagging little things that get on their nerves, and I'm inclined to agree for the simple fact that proofreading these volumes is going to be just as big an undertaking as originally writing them were.
I'm an author, not a proofreader or editor. Heh.
So if any of you are interested, hit me up with a forum message and I'll give you a link to my google drive where I have everything set up.
I cannot promise any sort of pay though, besides a big THANK YOU on the dedication page. Every person who helps will get their name on it. It is the least I could do.
So just let me know!
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