《Loser of Tarinath》Note from the author
Advertisement
Hi all,
I thought I would say a little about the story you are reading, and explain a bit about the formatting.
The concept of VR life has been done quite a bit by now, but I wanted to try my hand at building a story around the idea, and you have been reading the result. This work is not meant to be something you would pay money for, so I have been making the plot up as I go along, which you've probably noticed.
Feedback is always appreciated, positive or negative, though I would most like story or plot related criticisms or praise. I find the whole text entry system on Royal Road to be aggravating and aren't interested in spending the time figuring out how to make it work for me. I have been copying and pasting from Pages into a text editor, then into this webpage. It strips all the italics and bold print out, so a lot of emphasis or highlighting is lost. The stat pages and such are in italics in my original, making it a little easier to read.
Jake has actually turned into a bit more of a hero than I had intended, but what can you do? I am considering following a different character for a while, a mage, one you haven't met yet, so you might see that down the road.
Anyway, I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and hope you take the time to leave a little feedback.
Thanks,
S. Zaplosky
Advertisement
Dragon's Soul
Synopsis of my story, A young boy faces the end of his life, born a genius, gifted with an incredible memory and a passion for knowledge. As he takes his last breathe his life flashed before his eyes , from an early age he had been like a sponge soaking in all the knowledge around him, science, history, culture, literature, and even military strategy he absorbed it all. But as his life was coming to an end he scorned all his knowledge, what was the point of knowing everything when you weren’t even able to protect yourself or the ones you loved. As the boy closed his eyes for one final time,he laughed at how blinded he had been about the world and people and thought that if there was indeed a next life he would obtain power, power to protect himself and his loved one. And so this marked the end of his life, but for some, the end is only the beginning. My first story so it won't be too great so bare with me as I try to get better.
8 392The Core in a cave in a mountain
A new Core and his informative System take on the task to nurture this new dungeon.A Core learns the ways of the dungeon and grows his power. Will he live a long life or be devoured by power-hungry individuals?
8 132Chaos Wave
The year is 2055. Virtual Reality has been around for nearly forty years, and the Full Sensation Dive System has been around for about thirty. The various countries of Earth have long since given up on Warring against each other in this dimension when it turned out that with the FSDS (Full Sensation Dive System) virtual worlds became real, especially once Richard Alonzo Albeque's AIQNPC (Artificial Intelligence Quest and Non-Player Character) System was released and spread like a wild virus across all the active MMOs. People vanished from their Dive system, leaving nothing behind of the person they were, and the Characters they were in game become locked out, and no longer responsive to the System. In addition to this, they are suddenly showing up on ALL servers of a game at the same time, almost as if they were now an NPC. The governments put a stop to all distribution of FSDS Technology, and keep an eye on these 'Digitized Players'. Ten years pass and one of the first ever Digitized Players, a Level 500 Catgirl by the name of Atreya the Dawnbirth, created a stable portal between their MMO and Earth. With the return of one of the players, the governments remove the bans on FSDS Technology, which has still been researched heavily while under the ban. Wars break out over control of Virtual Worlds, but these wars are all fought ON the Virtual World, so the Earth isn't polluted further. Immortality is now available to all who seek it, if you can find a World to call your own. Of course, nobody paid attention to one of the few warnings Atreya brought back with her... The NPCs sometimes became sentient and disobeyed coding laws.
8 184The Tales of YAP: The Superhero Series
“Listen well, and listen kindly, for my story is a story of contradictions; of the dead becoming alive and the weak becoming strong. Likewise, those nominated as the strong are reduced into the weakest of foes. And lovers, those sweet companions, are nothing but crazed psychopaths. This is the type of story I will tell. The story only I can speak of for it is solely mine. And now, as I recount it to you, thence forth it shall belong to all that hear of it. Listen well, then, for I shall begin.”Sooo, that’s it. The world isn’t what it is. The dead are alive. The weak become strong. And bla bla bla. The normal days of a superhero-in-training, I suppose. I hope you have a bit of patience because my story is a long one, and it starts out in the same old, boring world.My name is Yassi Anne P. Sorento, and this is my story before I became the superhero I am today. (First posted on Webnovel with the same title and under the name, Hua_Li_An.)
8 6812 Days in the Psych Ward
This is a poetry/journal book about my experience in the Psych Ward. It's all true accounts with names changed for privacy. I wrote this while in the ward, except for the last day. Please take care in reading. If topics of suicide, depression, rape, molestation, and other possible topics are triggering for you, this may not be suitable to be read.[This poetry book is completed ✔]Ranking:#1 in poetry#4 in poem#10 in nonfiction#16 in Short story
8 188Kakashi x female reader
In the process of writing! Will publish at least 2 times a week Warning : will include lemon in some chapterWarning : will include mature language sometimes You are y/n and you are on team 7. You are a typical funny teenage girl, and you live alone, but what happens when kakashi pays you a visit unexpectedly and you fall on him and he discovers you secret !?? What happens when a masked man shows up and you're forced to make the most important decision in your life.Includes other love conflicts not just kakashi, but kakashi is the main one lol
8 85