《Prehistoric Barbarian》Book 1 - THE END of Book 1 - Author's notes
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My dear readers,
The first book is finished, but the story isn't.
First and foremost, I'd like to thank every single person who read through my mediocre story. I sincerely appreciate it and the motivation my readers gave me. I never expected that so many people would be interested in something that I wrote. I hope you had fun reading Aium and Genna stumbling around. Again, thank you for reading!
Prehistoric Barbarian was my very first story and looking back I can't help but feel bad about the quality of early chapters. On the other hand, I think I managed to improve during this journey. I'm far from anything good or noteworthy, but I'm not the worst either. I'd like to continue writing as a hobby in the future and hope that I can use the experiences I gained from this book to make the next ones that much better. If anybody has any suggestions or opinions about what they liked and hated about the story or my writing I'll gladly take them. I want my next story or the second book of PB to be better! Feedback is extremely valuable to me.
The story of Aium and Genna is far from over. Sometime in the future, I'll continue with a second book and maybe a third, too. I have plenty of ideas in store for them. However, for now, I'd like to give them a rest and try my hands at a new, different story. When I have enough chapters of my new work for a mass release I'll make an update here for those who might be interested in it.
If you have any questions regarding PB, the new story or even about me, just drop a comment and I'll answer.
Sincerely,
Mangroowe
PS: How's the new BioEnhancement of Aium? *winks towards the title*
PS2: I like Scrubs, but it isn't my favorite sitcom.
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