《The Scourged Earth》Just a Poll and some music suggestions.
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So, my ranking had been going down lately. The entire point of this story is that I grow as a writer. Haters please tell me why? Never let it be said I am not open to critisism.
Everyone gets two votes.
As a bonus for contributing, here is some alien invasion themed music I don't hate. (It's New wave/Synth wave/Dark wave stuff.)
Volkor X - This Means War [FULL ALBUM] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BcDES8Fjr-w Hollywood Burns "Invaders" [Full Album - 2018] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-S0Xi0ktC4Q Perturbator - "Dangerous Days" [Full Album - Official] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Vsf3zYppP4&t=671s
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