《Eldest: Awakening After the End》5: The Human Wastelands
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Grae didn’t hesitate any longer. His Mana flooded into his hand, and he tried something new, pushing all the Mana he could down into the forming framework of the Water Bullet. Droplets of shining water hovered around his outstretched fingertips, circling, forming a spiral. He could feel…
There was Mana around him.
The air was full of hidden magic, out here.
As he started to use his own, it flooded into him. A single spark drew dozens of others from the air.
Magic was easy, up here.
The Water Bullet formed and leapt from his palm. It exploded into the Ragdoll’s core, blowing it into pieces with a thunderclap of roaring, turbulent water. Soaked fragments of cloth washed against the walls, leaving the thing collapsed in a great puddle.
But Grae didn’t believe that was the end.
The Inspection mentioned it could ‘split and divide.’
And right now, the fragments of cloth were beginning to flutter and pick themselves up, moving slower due to being soaked through.
It also mentioned a heart. Grae might not know what an Estate was, or why it created such a sad little creature…
But everything needed a heart to live.
In the center of the mess of ruined clothing, there was a lump. Shawls and coats and shirts all wrapped around something roughly fist-sized, swaddling it to keep it safe.
Grae lurched forward and stomped down. Something cracked under his hoof, shattering with a brief, bright flare of the most concentrated magic Grae had ever felt. Every hair on his body- and he had many- stood up as electric ripples cascaded through the air and the clothes, waterlogged as they were, caught alight.
Flames licked back and forth, and Grae stepped back.
That ripple of magic was still expanding outwards. It rose higher and higher into the air, a signal going outwards. And something was changing. Smaller flares of magic rose across the city. It was like invisible fireworks bursting in the sky.
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Grae had set something in motion. He looked up, around, trying to spot where the threat was coming from. Trying to see what was happening. The chaos and confusion made him feel suddenly vulnerable, in this wide open space surrounded by the wind. It was a paranoid, half-mad feeling. His heart beat violently.
But there was nothing.
Nothing but the buildings, the empty road, the strange lanterns lifted up on metal poles.
A sudden cracking noise split the air. Dust drifted from the rooftop of a nearby house, and Grae watched in confusion as the bricks began to break apart. It took him a moment to even understand what he was seeing…
The house was standing up.
The bricks were rearranging, fitting together like puzzle pieces. They formed legs. They formed arms.
The house lifted its head, which was made from roofing tiles assembled into a tall, conical hood, four windows arranged in a ring just underneath- like empty eyes gazing out in all directions. The door stood in the center of its body.
It picked itself out of the crater left by its foundation and took a single, earth-shaking step towards Grae.
Grae didn’t stop and try to think this through. He turned tail and ran. His long, lanky form dropped to all fours and he pushed his body to run, run, run…
Huge footfalls followed him. The swinging momentum of each step took time to build, but its long legs carried it across the street at terrifying speed. When a foot crashed down, dust emerged, the red dust of cinderblocks leaking from its body; the earth shook and the cobblestones cracked underfoot.
Grae ran and ran. He could see more buildings lifting themselves up, their heads rising above the rooftops. He could hear their footsteps closing in on him.
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He reached a crossroads in the street, turned, and one of the house-beasts had already reached him. It swung its fist, the brute stump of its arm filling up the world as it hurtled down towards Grae. With a final desperate lunge of motion Grae flung himself out of the way, wrapping his body in the protective charm of Barkskin.
Fragments of street cobbles exploded in all directions as its fist hit the ground. They bit into the back of Grae’s hide, scraping him over with sharp wounds. Grae stumbled, nearly fell, but recovered. He kept running. There was nothing in the world anymore but the exertion of his limbs, the road ahead, the desperation to survive.
He could see smaller creatures scuttling out of the shadows. Spiders made of windowglass; horses made of wheels.
The entire city was coming for him.
He understood, finally, why there were no humans here. Why the dungeon had dried up; what had happened to the world. The city had come to terrible life. The humans’ beautiful creations had turned on them.
Their home had closed around them like a trap.
He saw a wall ahead, and beyond that wall, a sea of green. The end of the city. Grae pushed his body harder and harder and simply jumped high over the wall, launching himself across.
He crashed down into soft soil on the other side. His feet punched through layers of dried, mulched leaves.
Safe.
Maybe?
Maybe, but he wasn’t risking that. He could still hear the buildings moving within the city. He picked himself up and continued forward on shaky, exhausted legs. On all sides there were pillars of rough, dark plant-matter, blossoming into green as they branched out above; trees.
He knew trees.
There had been a drawing in the dungeon.
But he never knew they made such soft, calming noise. The wind struck their leaves and the world was filled with a gentle sound like paper scraping against paper, shaking through the branches. Grae gazed up in wonder.
Grae wandered with his head held high, over-awed by the beauty of the forest.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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