《Semi-Powerful Underling》The End, for now...
Advertisement
I've been thinking about doing this a for a while now, but I think I'm taking a hiatus from the book for a long time.
Yes, I know, that scentence make a lot of you a little sad, although, my analytics say that only like 20 people have read this far anyway, and the majority of readers don't make it past the first 12 chapters anyway, and there in lies my first reason.
I do believe the first couple chapters are decent introductions, but they are riddled with underlying issues that would require hours and hours of fixing, and after wrapping up the second draft, I feel incapable of doing something like that again. It would require fixing so much, I didn't even realize how deep these roots go, since if I move one thing back, a bunch of other shit has to be changed in the future.
Then there's the mess all over the book. My notes are a fucking nightmare. The worst I've ever had on any writing project ever. Hands down, without a doubt. For an example, I have just like 30 or something scetences of just different events that have happened, will happen, or have been written about. This was make sure I remember the specific details on these events so I could draw from those things to create interesting moments and see how characters would react. It worked, but it's a fucking mess.
In turn, this mess translated perfectly into Quincy's journey. The first couple chapters are a fucking fetch quest for Pete's sake! And the web of things is so confusing for me, and I assume even more confusing for someone who can't draw from my trashcan of randomness that is my notes doc.
So, with all that said, my rating is also dropping, despite recieving multiple reviews recently (two of them were wholeheartedly negative), and I'm killing myself slowly staying up late trying to make edits and write new stuff while keeping up with my release schedule.
Advertisement
It's time to stop.
What does that mean though? Will Semi-Powerful Underling make a return? I sure as fuck left you guys with a bunch of questions in the story with Thursday's flashback chapter. The short answer is maybe. It'll be a long time, since I need a break from this story, since I can't take it anymore. Quincy is sure a fun character to write, but I also fucking hate writing him. It's hard to say, but his narration has to be filled with jokes, due to his sarcasm. it's just the way he talks, but I definitely know it ruins emotional scenes. But, Quincy aside, this is just a lot of stress to write anything in this book, due to my dumpster of notes.
So I need a do over. I need a new project. It's overwhelming, I'm tired, you are tired obviously. So I will write this book off as a massive success, but also a learning experience, and move on to my next project. It will be here on Royal Road, without a doubt. I've not writen a bunch of it yet, but, it's gonna be good. I promise, it at the very least wont have this mountain of notes I have to deal with. It will also have a slower upload schedule, once a week. It will probably have longer chapters instead though.
It's been a journey with you guys, and I've met so many nice people. I've also met a bunch of assholes, but that's the internet. I'm glad we reached rank 5000 peak, and even though it's only gonna drop from there, I feel proud of this, and hope one day I'll feel capable of coming back with a fresh mind.
I just wrote half a chapter of jargon, have fun reading through it lmfao
See you in the future.
Advertisement
- In Serial26 Chapters
Life Is But A Game
There are things everyone understands about life. It's chaotic, messy, and most of all, it doesn't give a damn about what you want or need. Even in a world that would be considered fictional, this idea still holds true. Dropped into a universe of demigods and incredible monsters, one young boy has to face the fact that his wants and needs matter even less than they did before. (Young Justice/DC Universe Gamer SI)
8 217 - In Serial27 Chapters
Countdown to Inferno
"Everybody wants to rule the world... even if it's a destroyed one." Three great powers divide the known world. One of them is on track to offset this power balance as it seemingly undertakes the grand task of unifying the world. After 100 years of brutal economic, military, political, and even religious campaigns, the Republic of Dalreida has achieved a vast empire stretching from the Cargan Ports to the Aramathian Desert. May they be gods and goddesses, or princes and princesses, the rising republic has embarked on depriving nation upon nation of self-governance. In the midst of all these, Dalreida's primary personality, Lord Piso, has been serving as the republic's dictator for six years. Entering his seventh year in office, he shocked allies and enemies alike with a hazy calendar reform. Along with it is a pledge to pass on the reins of power after the so-called "longest term." Then again, to whom will it be passed? Or will it be passed down at all? With so much at stake during the "longest term," what does Piso's gamble entail for Dalreida and the world? Will it bring heaven on earth? Will all hell break loose instead? Or something else in between to purge the world of everything it ever had? The Countdown to Inferno has begun. ***** Countdown to Inferno by Al Raposas Planning Commenced: 28 January 2019Writing Commenced: 20 February 2019Book 1 Announced: 3 August 2019 Original Run: 20 January to 10 February 2020 Royal Road Run: 14 July to 28 July 2021 Author's note: Original work. This is my first shot at a fantasy novel, so please, please be gentle and enjoy reading! Cover art is not mine. Peak rank in category: Second (2) 1st place, Gemstone Awards (Fantasy)1st place, Love Yourself Awards (Mystery/Thriller Category)2nd place, Chaos Awards (Mystery/Thriller Category)
8 192 - In Serial21 Chapters
ribbon of fate { jshk x reader } - [ COMPLETE ]
on the night two lifeless bodies were found in the yugi household, (y/n) yugi, the female triplet of tsukasa and amane, hung herself with two black ribbons in the music room of kamome gakuen. her story quickly spread as the tale of 'mystery no. 8, jisatsu-san of the music room' with the help of sakura nanamine. but little do the yugi twins know, (y/n) is the one with the role of jisatsu-san, hiding among the school and desperately trying to bring back the pieces of her past together again. ! this story contains manga spoilers !! under slow progressing editing !{ a collaboration with @Big_Brain_Author }{ jshk triplet au }[ best rankings ]#1 in #tbhk #1 in #jibakushounenhanakokun#1 in #toiletboundhanakokun #1 in #minamoto#1 in #tsukasa#2 in #readerinsert
8 62 - In Serial44 Chapters
Mundus Subcavus - or: "Caves are a geomancer's dream, but how do we get back out?"
Havellan is an aspiring mage and architect. On the recommendation of his old commander, he joins the Geomancer Professor Ottegar Scutolith on a journey to a volcanic island to investigate its sudden inaction. Together with the Alchemist Anne-Liese, the wilderness guide Beredalion and the Golem Chrysita, they venture deep underground into the completely drained system of magma tubes and chambers. They soon come across a weird phenomenon and in a desperate situation, decide to take a leap of faith further down than they could have ever imagined. DISCLAIMER: This work is published on RoyalRoad and Inkitt as well as Audiobook on Youtube.
8 250 - In Serial8 Chapters
Andy and Sam takes place during Kevin fords manhunt. No marlo and no nick. andy and sam have been dating the whole time.I don't own Rookie Blue or any of the characters
8 93 - In Serial15 Chapters
Pluto x Reader
Thank you for picking this story. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed creating it ❤️ Love you xx ~Kathy
8 131

