《Longshots》13 - Dodge
Advertisement
There’s a chain hotel off Commercial Street with a parking garage attached. I figured I’d crouch down between the cars and wait for someone to park for the night. That way the owners wouldn't notice anything missing until tomorrow morning.
But of course I had no clue how to hotwire a car. That's just not a skill that a small-town handyman has any cause to learn. So this wouldn't be easy.
Three cars entered in twenty minutes. The passengers of the first two didn’t head for the hotel. The third car was a junker that probably wouldn’t make it the highway, forget about Manattan.
Five minutes later, the four car parked, a late-model Dodge SUV, and a middle-aged couple stepped into the echoing garage. I heard the bee-twee of the car lock, then the click of heels, his and hers.
They were heading into the hotel. Perfect. I lowered my hood, attempted an entitled expression, and trotted into the lobby behind them.
The girl at the desk said, "Sir?"
Shit. I really needed to work on my entitled expression.
I sent the smallest orb to flit around the girl’s face. She startled and stepped backward, flapping her hand, trying to fend off the huge flying bug.
Because that’s what I’d discovered: even on the Rock, people’s minds looked for other explanations for the orbs. A strange silent beetle bumbling around your face made sense, while a remote-controlled anti-gravity orb did not. A speck of dust might catch in your eye, but quicksilver spheres didn't follow you down a corridor, flashing from hiding spot to hiding spot with a human intelligence.
I mean, that’s just crazy.
So the clerk waved away the beetle dive-bombing her hair, and I saw the elevator doors closing behind the couple. I lunged into the stairwell. The orbs swarmed upward, checking the floors above me as I ran behind, waiting for the elevator to open.
Advertisement
Second floor, third floor. My heart pounded. I led a pretty active life, but by the time I hit the fifth floor my legs were wobbly and my lungs burning. And still the elevator rose.
As if in reply to my desperate, silent plea, it stopped on the sixth floor.
An orb opened the stairwell door for me and I staggered panting into the hallway. Nobody in sight, but a sense of dislocated awareness tugged at me. From one of the orbs, down the hallway. I caught my breath, then jogged to the corner and caught a glimpse of the middle-aged couple keying into their room.
A few seconds later, I hurried past, minding my own business: and when they stepped inside, two orbs joined them.
Then the door clicked shut and I stopped.
Standing in a hotel hallway. Unable to go farther than twenty feet in either direction. Just ... standing there like an idiot. Embarrassment warmed my cheeks. I hadn't planned on being trapped outside their room, but of course it was a necessary consequence of my oh-so-clever plan.
I started walking, to explore full range of my freedom. And fifteen feet further on, the hallway opened into an alcove with a ice machine. Thank God. I slipped in and sat on the floor with my back against the wall, my eyes half-closed. I felt the impression of a hotel room. Big TV, heavy drapes. Splashes of color on the walls. Then a sudden light, and water splashing in a bathtub.
I needed to find their car keys, but I couldn’t direct the orbs based on vague feedback and half-formed instinct. So I breathed slow and steady, and waited...
What did those kidnapers want with Dewitt? It couldn’t be a case of mistaken identity, not with a guy named Dewitt living on a tiny island in Mayne. Did they want Shandra too, or had she just been in the wrong place at the wrong time?
Advertisement
Hiring mercenaries and a yacht and helicopter to abduct a handyman seemed like overkill. Like an insane level of overkill. There was nothing special about Dewitt except his Storm-borne mnemonic ability. Which meant he listened to a lot of audiobooks, and knew the complete works of Shakespeare by heart: hardly a threat to national security.
Of course, if the government wanted Dewitt, they would’ve just knocked on his front door. And nobody knew about Dewitt’s ability. Or mine. Or anyone’s. What happened on the Rock stayed on the Rock. Except for Maddie, making a life for herself in New Park--so untouched by the Storm and the island, and by me, that she could leave forever.
And yeah, as I sat there, of course I wanted to save Dewitt. Obviously, that's what drove me. He was my best friend, my brother. I'd do anything for him.
But let’s be honest: I also wanted to roll into New Park, rescue Dewey, and have Maddie fall into my arms like some conquering hero.
I mean I’d be the conquering hero. She’d be the …what? I wasn't quite sure. Maybe the grateful helpmeet who’d organized bake sales and waited for her man to return? Yeah, sure. And she'd greet me at the door naked except for an apron and heels.
Frankly, I was more the bake sale type than Maddie. I made a mean blueberry muffin.
I wasn't so good a car thief, though. So I sat there blankly until the ice-maker rumbled and gave me a heart attack.
Then I sat there some more.
Finally, I felt a wash of safety. I focused on the orbs, and noticed darkness and quiet. The middle-aged couple must've fallen asleep.
I cracked my neck and stepped into that unstirring silence that fills hotel hallways.
I drew the two orbs that were already inside the couple's room closer to the door. One nudged the deadbolt lock and the other pressed down on the handle, unlocking the door from the inside.
I opened the door a crack and entered. A shaft of light spread in the darkness. I slipped throgh and closed the door behind me, and the soft clicksounded like a rifle shot. My heart pounded. Standing in the darkness, trying to control the trembling. I'd never committed a burglary before. It wasn't as fun as I'd expected.
The woman said ‘mm?’ and the mattress creaked.
For two minutes, I didn’t move. Then she started snoring, and I crept toward the clutter on the bedside table: a wallet and an eyeglass case and a jagged lump. A keyring.
Somehow, I got across the room. Somehow, I snagged the key and backed halfway to the door before a thought struck me: the parking fee.
I didn’t have a cent. How was I going to pay for parking? Or for tolls? I gritted my teeth and returned to the bedside table. I grabbed the wallet, swiped six twenties and a video rental card--for ID--and slunk away, my heart pounding.
Down the elevator, through the lobby. Into the parking garage. The car unlocked with a bee-twee.
I adjusted the seat and turned the key. The engine purred. My hands felt steady on the wheel as I drove to the exit. The parking attendant didn't seem to notice the neon CAR THIEF sign flashing on my forehead.
There wasn't much traffic on Commercial Street. So far, everything was going according to plan.
But when I pulled the Dodge beside the dumpster, Shandra was gone.
Advertisement
Messummer (Capstone Writing Assignment)
|3X Wattpad FEATURED| Messummer's life changes when a futuristic boy stumbles into her ancient world. She must now help him front to his own time before his love for dinosaurs traps him forever. *** Ever since her father's death, Messummer has wanted nothing more than to prove she can survive in her fragile world. She decides to enter her valley's Great Flying Race as a rite of passage. It's a race only the bravest flyers attend. While Messummer is preparing for it one day, she meets a creature she has never seen before. His name is Daniel Matton. He stumbles into her world after a malfunction with something called a "time machine". Fascinated by this new species, Messummer kidnaps him (not that Dan has much of a choice) and takes him on a journey like none other. Of course, that's only after Dan concludes she's not going to eat him. Just when it seems like the two friends' connection is growing, disaster strikes. What starts off as a bonding experience is now a fight for survival. Will Messummer and Dan escape the horrendous Tyrannosaurus Rex, or will the 11.0-magnitude earthquake swallow them before he can even try to kill them? Will Messummer find the courage to tell Dan who she truly is? Will Dan ever return front to his own time? Above all, is their friendship going to survive the calamity? *** *Cover by @AnecdoteofAstrina on Wattpad!* Word Count: 7,000 🥉 3rd place in the April Awards' Short Story Category.⭐ Featured on @Speculative Fiction || Breaking the Space-Time Continuum Reading List.⭐ Added to @Speculative Fiction || Featured Speculative Fiction Stories Reading List.⭐ Featured by @Ooorah in their Tevun-Krus #100 || Dino Punk section.
8 162Tesyrion's Call
“Achieving your dreams can make your life more complicated than you expect” Since the accident that took his parents, all Dale Hall wished was a change that could rip his world apart and rid him of the overwhelming feeling of loneliness and boredom. But when he finds a strange letter, ancient machinations touch his fate as he starts learning that his wishes have consequences. Dragged into a new world and thrust into a wicked game, Dale will have to face eldritch horrors and discover the mysteries of this unearthly place to find the truth about his past, evolving to fight for his life against horrible and unimaginable creatures from beyond the void. Tesyrion's Call is a progression LitRPG story in which the characters are taken to a world filled with eldritch beings and other monsters. It's my first attempt at writing and I've been planning this story for a while now, so I hope you're as excited reading it as I am writing it. If you like stories where the MC grows steadily through overcoming challenges without suddenly becoming overpowered, you've come to the right place. Release schedule: M - T - W - TH - F (one chapter a day)
8 206The Power and the Glory
How to study necromancy, accidentally start the zombie apocalypse, and discover the skeletons hidden in your family's closet: a guide by Abihira Sinistrah. (Or: why you should always read the fine print before raising the dead.)
8 93On Venus and Mars [Vol. 1]
"Most people say their first words when they're one or two years old. The grown-ups would get all excited and they'd tell stories about that day years later. But I said my first word at twelve years old and there was only one person there to hear it. This is the story of us." - EllieCover Artist: @CBMokediFellow Editor: @KylieTraskTW: Harsh language. Child abuse.
8 203Smutty Fanfics
I'm just writing a bunch of smut in a girls pov if y'all somehow convince me to do a guys pov good luck it will suck but yeah smut everyone yay!
8 192You're Safe with me // RICCI RIVERO
a girl who has a lot of tough experienced in life and met her cousins friends that treasure her as their princess in the group. she was very thankful to have them. (THIS STORY IS BASED ON IMAGINATION!!!)
8 112