《INTO THE ARCHAILECT》A BRIEF TALK
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Hi everyone, I wanted to address a prevalent issue with the series I'm seeing from various readers, It was my intention to do it at the end of the series but I might as well do it now.
Going through my own writing, I've been able to break it down in a series of sub issues:
1) grammar
2) plot direction
3) sub genre
1) GRAMMAR:
first of all, I would like to apologize for the numerous grammatical errors across the series, going back on earlier chapters (that I'm slowly editing btw), I've come to realize were really bad, ranging from slight misspellings to large faults.
Again, I would kindly want you all to realize that I'm a one man editing and writing team and while it's one of the reasons I delayed the publications of the first fifty chapters, I see it and I really want to apologize to you all as concerning it. Like I said, this is my first time at trying out full writing like this and I really want to apologize 😔.
2) PLOT DIRECTION:
As regards to this, I've also come to realize that most readers went from completely liking the first progression pace of the story to completely disliking the current plot/arc of the book. Now while I understand that my view could be totally different from the views of the readers, I would GENUINELY love to hear your views to see what I'm missing.
Again, I cannot reiterate that this was my first trial at writing and I'm going through great effort to work on all my weaknesses and strengths whatever little they might be in the new book I'm writing.
So please, I'd really love to hear your views.
3) SUB GENRE:
This one I totally understand, the more I wrote, the more I realized that while I did enjoy the whole concept of a game system and infact still do, I had little patience for the number crunching aspect of it and sought to reduce it to small but useable pieces I could bring together.
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Please understand that I in no way, manner or form, sort to decieve you all or use the book as a money making scheme in any form or way(cause really, someone over at patreon said that and it bit deep, lol).
That's all I guess, but please, if there's anything I missed, please reply, this is as much a call for help from a new author to those who are still sticking to the story as any other. Mistakes will be made, and I can only show that I in no way or form meant for such to constantly happen, the views I get from readers and those who comment whenever a chapter drops as well as those who decided to trust my writing by subscribing to my patreon mean a whole lot to me.
Thank you, and I hope to hear from you all😞❤️
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