^^ The rewrite is proceeding smoothly. Arc I is done, and Arc II got its final chapter now, where Asami joins the ANBU. The scene and dialogues got adjusted to reflect the changed Itachi/Kisame fight.

Here the overall changes of Arc I:

-stronger focus on Okaa-san - she got more screen time and scenes

- sword chapter is moved ahead - additional birthday scene -

- ninja academy rewrite - changed from conscious choice to join, to basically conscription with medical examination -

- entry exam and Sasuke POV modified - a bit more serious -

General changes:

- lightning ability removed from Asami -

The only thing now missing is the promised chapter for Arc I with Asami and her sandcastle. ^^ It will arrive together with a new chapter for the main plot line. You will ergo probably get a double release.

*Asami and her sandcastle*