《Si Vis Pacem Para Bellum -‖- [Naruto FanFic]》Update news: Rewrite II
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^^ The rewrite is proceeding smoothly. Arc I is done, and Arc II got its final chapter now, where Asami joins the ANBU. The scene and dialogues got adjusted to reflect the changed Itachi/Kisame fight.
Here the overall changes of Arc I:
-stronger focus on Okaa-san - she got more screen time and scenes
- sword chapter is moved ahead - additional birthday scene -
- ninja academy rewrite - changed from conscious choice to join, to basically conscription with medical examination -
- entry exam and Sasuke POV modified - a bit more serious -
General changes:
- lightning ability removed from Asami -
The only thing now missing is the promised chapter for Arc I with Asami and her sandcastle. ^^ It will arrive together with a new chapter for the main plot line. You will ergo probably get a double release.
*Asami and her sandcastle*
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