《The Criminals》Bonus Chapter: Big Day - Part 2
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Ramirez noticed the Black Škoda had left him, so he accelerated it and drive to another route which will lead him to the Docks. While he was driving he was thinking: "Who were those guys anyway? Perhaps tourists? Probably. Or the Police? No. It cannot be. These guys thought I died a few years ago after I faked death, but even if they knew, how did they find out my home address? Whoever it was, maybe it was just tourists who got lost. This shit is always happening every day.". Ramirez has taken a turn, and he is directed to the other side of the countryside because there is a Highway which will help him drive to the Dock area.
While he was driving to the Highway which will drive him in the Dock Sector. The entire road the Highway was outstanding and also smooth because there were no cars, trucks, just nice drivers who were driving their American style cars into a normal highway, smoking a cigarette and driving on some classic American music, which nowadays is just people with autotune installed in their throat.
Ramirez arrives at two kilometres of this highway, and nothing bad has happened yet, not a single call on his phone. No people who have provoked an accident. Or crazy women ramming into other cars because they think they are a man which equals to them the equivalent of racists.
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Meanwhile, on the place where the Dock is located, a black Škoda it is parking behind a building. Those two are leaving the car, entering the building they have parked, and wait there until the deal will happen. The building Carmen and his brother have entered it was an abandoned three floors office which has to be destroyed tomorrow, and this is the perfect opportunity for our Detectives. This building also has guns in there for a simple and valid reason... The owner was an arms dealer and needed a place to hide his semi-automatic and also illegal weapons which should only be used by Army and one of those weapons it is a sniper rifle, which Carmen will use it.
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His brother will just stay on the other window, watch the action happening while his sister will be on the left side and be ready to shoot anyone on sight.
"Do you think this guy will tell his comrades?"
"No. I do not think he will do it." says Carmen who is looking at the visor.
"Why do you think it is like that?"
"Look."
Her brother takes out a pair of monocles and saw there, close to the crane three Yakuza men who are looking around while all three of them are holding a briefcase filled with money. This Yakuza is wearing the classic outfits of those gangs you often see on the dark streets of Japan, and one of them was not looking like a Japanese like the rest of them, more like a Korean.
After a few seconds while they were looking at them at a very big distance, a person comes there, and that person it looks like it is Gary Smith who is just walking at a normal peace to them. When he approached them, the Yakuza was looking at him and decided to talk with him. Carmen and his brother could not hear what those two were talking because the distance between them, it is approximately eighty-nine meters and also they are on the third floor of its small office.
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"You got the goods?" asks one of the Yakuza in a good English to Gary Smith.
"It will be here any minute, man." responds Gary Smith to that Yakuza while he is looking around and being nervous. "He will be any moment here."
"Well... We really appreciate the thing you are doing."
"You do?"
"Well, no. But at least you had guts to sell your weed to us. And also, you haven't been followed by anyone haven't you?"
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"Me? Followed? don't be absurd. I just took a taxi who has let me three hundred meters distance from here."
"Aha." says the Yakuza who is being sceptical about this situation.
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Three minutes later, Ramirez arrives with his jeep at that sector where Dock it is located and he parks the jeep in a parking lot close to the gang and Gary. After he was about to leave the car, The Yakuza acted quickly and they are looking at the weed there. Those who haven't spoked in English are looking in the back while the third is questioning Ramirez.
"Have you been followed by anyone?"
"No, sir." lies Ramirez to the Yakuza member.
"Good." says the Yakuza member who left him to check the goods and trust the thing Ramirez has said.
Right when the Yakuza member was about to ask his colleagues about the stuff there, Gary has quickly taken out his pistol from his underwear and start shooting a Yakuza member. This yakuza have reacted slowly, and there was too late because Gary has shot another two bullets, which has hit their heads.
Ramirez has quickly left the car and he is looking in shook at Gary.
"What the fu-" but he got shot in the leg by Gary Smith with his Glock. "ARRRRGHHH!"
"Sorry, man! Money is more important than friends." says Gary who is quickly entering the Jeep and start pressing the accelerate step to leave this place. While he was driving from this place he heard some gunshots who were shooting at him and he realized that those were from somewhere high which is close and also very far in terms of height.
He pretty much dodged a few sniper rifle bullets which were heading to him, and he drives in an accelerated speed from the Docks area and heading whenever God knows. And on the Dock, those two brothers were shocked by the thing this deal has turned off, a man killing the dealers and even his own friend, just to steal the weed and drive God knows where exactly.
They saw the guy named Ramirez continued to move so they have decided to act quickly. There are running downstairs of this building, running to the zone where Ramirez and this three Yakuza are down and proceed to start their job, call an ambulance for Ramirez, but also arresting him because he has quite a big file of crimes he committed on this City.
- THE END OF THE FIRST PART -
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