《The Criminals》Bonus Chapter: Big Day - Part 1
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Today is the day, the day when Ramirez he will do this big deal with someone dangerous which might even kill him, today he will do a business with Yakuza. And this day, will also probably his last day of being a criminal and becoming a fully civilian person. While Ramirez was packing his cannabis in the jeep, he was thinking about what he can do after he will sell all of that weed. Probably e will go with his best friend to a Dinner Restaurant and celebrate by drinking beer and eating steak.
After a few minutes, Ramirez has finished with the packing his jeep with cannabis, he takes out his phone and starts calling Gary Smith, the man who has talked with that gang which will buy Ramirez weed for a reasonable price.
"Hello, Gary!" says Ramirez after Gary has picked up the phone. "At what hour should the weed be sold?"
"Hey, Ramirez!" says Gary who is feeling like a person who wakes up right now. "C-Cannabis, right?"
"Yes. Are you alright?"
"Fine. Just a little hangover," says Gary Smith on the phone. "Now... Probably at 7 PM."
"Well... It is already 3 PM."
"What? 3 PM?!" yells Gary at the phone. "Shit! Why haven't you called me after 3 ?!"
"Because I had a job to do!"
"Right, right. I forgot you wanted to do this last business and then disappear. Alright, be ready and we will meet at the Dock area? You know where it is, right?"
"Yeah."
"Good. We will see there." and he closes the call.
Ramirez turns off the phone, he hops into his jeep on the driving seat, turns on the car with the key which was in contact three hours ago and leaves his farmhouse, which now will just be a normal house with a barn and a planting field.
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While Ramirez was driving his jeep to the place where he has to deliver the cannabis and arrives at the main street which connects the city part with the countryside part, someone from another car was following him, and that car was a black Škoda from Europe, and in that car was someone or a few people who were following Ramirez at 50 meters distance.
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On the black Škoda who is following Ramirez, there are two people there, a man who is driving, and a woman on the left seat. Both of them are following the car because they are detectives and they got the location of their biggest case they have ever had which was literally under their nose.
"This is the guy we are looking for?" asks the driver which resemble a bald man in his twenty s.
"Yes." responds a woman voice which is similar to the one of Carmen.
"Great. So... How did you not notice it was him? The one who delivered you to the Hospital?"
"I was nervous and also terrified by the fact that my Aunt could die at any time."
"Well... at least you are saved, Sister."
"Yes. But, we are not going to kill him."
"Of course we won't. We will just follow him to that place and if we found out who is in this business we will everyone from there. I already called someone from Police to prepare me a backup."
"Good. And after we will solve this mystery we will have to do something?"
"About what?"
"About that Pizzeria where a man named Alex Rodriguez is working."
"What's up with it?"
"I have to talk to the manager about a case which has happened at three houses distance from his place."
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"Alright... So, you want to hear some jazz?" asks the driver who was about to plug his car which contains one thousand most popular jazz songs of all time.
"Sure, but not loud."
"Okey, dokey, Sistah!" says the driver who is rising the volume of a song called "Sky is Crying" by the legend named Gary B. B. Coleman.
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A few minutes later, Ramirez, has noticed that a black Škoda was following him, and he did not say anything or accelerated it, instead, he has tried to do something he saw in a movie, changing the directions of where he is driving. Instead of taking a left side, he took the right side, which was leading him to the Scrapyard, which is using for depositing the cars and also, was a Biker gang territory, until one year ago, when a few guys from the new Government installed in Ruby have decided to kick them out form this island.
That black Škoda has taken the same turn Ramirez has taken, and they did not realize something is wrong, until they arrived at the beach, the countryside beach, which was not far away from the Scrapyard. And at that time, the Škoda has decided to go into the Docks Areas and wait there.
How do they know about this information and the fact that they knew where Ramirez was driving that jeep with cannabis? Well, the got a piece of information from a Hacker who was working at the farm Ramirez has invaded. So, kids, be careful in which house are entering, you might go to the FBI watchlist.
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