《The Criminals》Bonus Chapter: Carmen - Part 3
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A few minutes later, Carmen comes back to his aunt room, and she has brought her s cup of natural yoghurt and also a cup of tea from a coffee machine, who apparently makes tea too. Carmen was carrying all of these things with the help of a plastic salver. She put plastic salver on the left counter next to his aunt.
"Thanks, Carmen."
"No problem, Aunt," responds Carmen who is sitting on the chair next to his aunt. "Now, what are we going to do?"
"About what?"
"You know. About the mysterious person who grew cannabis in this countryside," says Carmen to his Aunt who does not seem that he cares about this case.
"Nah. Police will probably get him."
"That is the problem. Our sources told us that the guy who is growing that cannabis has never been searching by Police or FBI. We have to do something because we are detectives and every case it is vital for our agency... And also we have to catch him to get those funds we need it."
"But, you do know that mysterious man identity?"
"Yes. I have a picture of him," says Carmen who is taking from her pockets a picture of the suspects and she is handing to his aunt.
The suspect in the picture looks like Ramirez, but a much younger version of himself, and Carmen has not even noticed this thing when she got delivered by him to this hospital. The Aunt handed the picture to Carmen after a few minutes of looking at it, and then she says to her.
"When was the picture taken?"
"Three years ago." responds Carmen. "When the suspect was not in this artificial islands and it was in Chicago." responds Carmen to her aunt.
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"Just be careful. More criminals are changing their looks over the years, just to escape from the justice system and also leave a quiet life."
"I will and I promise, that whoever the man is, he will be served in Jail."
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Later on this day, the van Ramirez is driving, arrives at the depot where he takes the goods and delivers to the little companies who need it and ordered. He parked the van in the garage and he goes to the boss office to ask him about another route, but right when he was about to enter he got greeted by someone.
"Hello, newbie!" says an old person who is staying on a chair and having on the left hand a cup of coffee.
"Hi." says Ramirez looking at that old person who is sitting on a chair, and then he walks to him.
"Good. Now I know who is the mister newbie is." says the old man when Ramirez sits on the next chair that old man is sitting by himself. "Your mother never reached your good manners, little man?"
"... Can I sit here?"
"Now you can."
The older man is taking a sip from his plastic cup of coffee, and then he asks Ramirez.
"What do you think?"
"About what exactly?" asks Ramirez looking at the old man who hasn't introduced yet.
"About working at this company."
"Well... It is nice. I just need some money and also, want a peaceful working place."
"You got one then. It is just you and me. The only truckers and delivery man in this company so far."
"What do you mean by this?"
"Have you ever saw anyone working on this company besides me and you?"
"... No."
Then the older man, stands up from his chair, he takes his cowboy hat from the table on his right, he puts it on and he says goodbye to his co-worker, who is going to the boss office, while the older man is getting in his truck and leaves the company having a trailer attached at him.
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