《The Criminals》Bonus Chapter: Carmen - Part 2
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Our mysterious woman arrived at the room where her aunt is located and she is there to rest until she will be better because she got into a big car accident in this countryside. The mysterious woman arrives at the front door at the room where her aunt is resting, but before she is about to enter the room, she takes a look around her to see if anyone follow her or if somebody is in the hallways. But today there is nobody on this morning in these hallways because most of the staff and patients are in the Cafeteria.
The mysterious woman knocks on the door, but to her surprise, someone answers to her knock and she enters the room. When she has entered the room she saw an old lady who was covered in bandages, not precisely like a mummy, but just on stomach and her arms, but the lady who was not the bed was not responding to her call, she was one of the nurses who was accompanying her to make the patient feel better because she has gone through a lot.
"Good morning!" says the nurse, standing up from the chair. "Who are you?"
"Good morning! I am Carmen Rebecca. The person who is on the bed is my aunt."
"Oh. I understand."
"Good," says Carmen, looking at her aunt. "How is she felling?"
"It is in great condition. Except for the fact that her arms are completely broken, and her stomach is a mess with bones."
"C-Could you let us have a moment?"
"Yeah. Of course." says the nurse who is leaving the room to let Carmen Rebecca who is sitting in the chair next to her aunt.
Carmen remained in that seat for a few moments, until her aunt started to open her eyes and look at her. Her Aunt was so happy to see Carmen because she was the only one who wanted to see it right now.
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"Hello, Carmen." says the Aunt feeling ill.
"Hello, dear Aunt!" responds Carmen to her Aunt. "How are you feeling?"
"Well... I had it worse. Anyway, did you know who is the target?"
��It is Mr Button, right?"
"Him. He is the one who did this."
"And how do you want him to suffer?"
"... No mercy."
"Got it. Later I will drop at him, but first, do you need something?"
"Well. A Yoghurt and tea would be nice."
"Understand," says Carmen who is standing up from the chair and she walks to the Cafeteria to take from there a yoghurt and also to bring her a tea because tea in the morning, it is a great experience to drink tea in the morning while are you feeling ill.
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Meanwhile, in the company Ramirez is working, he is already leaving while he is carrying into the van of the company ten crates who contain beer who was delivered from Florida and he needs to be delivered to two stores which are in this area. When Ramirez has left the garage and he arrives at the street with his van, he takes a right turn and he drives two hundred meters straight until he arrives at a Bar which is called "Chucks Drinks and Beverages", a nice bar where you could drink at a cheap price and also the Bar Ramirez and Gary are visiting to play Poker with Uncle Sam (no correlation with him, but everyone from this countryside calls him that) and Frederick. He goes with the van on the back of this small building, he leaves the van and he goes on the back to take out two crates from there. Before he was about to open the backdoors of this van who looks like Pony from Grand Theft Auto San Andreas, one dude in on his middle age, leaves on the backdoor and he is looking at Ramirez.
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"Ramirez. You are the one who delivers now?" says the guy in his middle age.
"Yes, Samuel." responds Ramirez, opening the van's back doors and he takes from there one big crate who contains "Corona Beer". "You ordered two crates of "Corona Beer" from "Florida Express Drinking" ?"
"Yes." responds Samuel, smiling at Ramirez who is entering his Bar with that big crate who contains "Corona Beer". "Where is the other one?"
"I will bring it." says Ramirez after he puts down the crate with "Corona Beer" and goes to take the other one. "By the way, what is new ?"
"Well..." says Samuel, who is going to Ramirez to help him carry another crate, but this time bigger, and one person cannot carry such a hard crate. "I have some great motorcycles tonight, and they have been fighting after one of their men has cheated on the poker. Now the Bar it is a mess."
"Ouch... Well, good luck there."
"I will need it."
Those two put that big crate next to the small one. Samuel gives the money for this delivery to Ramirez, Samuel thanks Ramirez, and Ramirez leaves the Bar using the backdoor and he hops in into his van to deliver the last eight crates to a bar from the Ruby City. And after he drives from the Bar, Samuel closes the backdoor and he continues his cleaning in the Bar because tonight he will have some clients who will most likely want to play slots, poker or get drunk and forget that they have responsibilities to do.
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