《It Started with Slime》Moving Forward - It Started with Slime - Not a Chapter
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Hey all! Thanks so much for all your support and in reading my story. I have received a lot of great feedback and really useful constructive criticism on my story. it is my first bit of writing and I did not really have a plan going in but just started writing. This was obviously a mistake and shows in the first section of the story (up to chapter 50) then in book 2. I feel I have found my rhythm as I move into book 3 but I think there are just too many issues with the start of the story and so I am most likely going to stop posting as I work on rewriting this story.
I want people to enjoy the story I want to write and at this stage the rewrite is going to be a lot of work. I think I will probably just call the first 50 chapters another story and move forward with it but we will have to see.
Thanks all for reading!
Keval
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