《MaAn : The fairytale》22:- Celebration
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Hand in hand MaAn comes at the entrance of Kapadia sadan....
And looking at them the "oohs" & "aahs" session started....
Everyone present there started teasing them....
And from between of all of them mukku comes near them
Mukku - (fake coughing) ahemm ahemm...... So how's the surprise bhai...? 😁😉
Anuj - umm... Good... Nice...
Bas nice... Bhabhi? Mujhe toh laga tha bhai aakar kahenge... Ki mukku tujhe pata hai aisa huwa, vaisa huwa... Hum yaha gaye waha gaye
Mujhe itne gifts mile.... Par.. Yeh toh hai.. Ki....
Maine socha tha bhai ko aaj bahut chidhaungi....
S - mukku.... Aate hi pareshan karne lag gayi na... Tu.... Chal unhe pehle andar toh aane de.... Ab cake cutting ka time bhi ho gaya hai....
They come inside.... Mukku goes towards anuj's side and whisperes...
Bhai... Bhai.... Suno... 0arty ke baad mujhe saare gifts dikhana... Aur jo mujhe pasand aaye.. Vo mujhe de dena... Okk..thank you...
And before anuj can say anything she left from there....
S - chal anuj pehle cake cut karle... Phir sab dance karenge....
They comes near the cake....
Mukku - chalo bhai ab ek wish maango...
Anuj close his eyes and makes a wish
' hey bhagwan, mujhe mere liye kuch bhi nhi chahiye.... Bas mere parivaar aur mere doston ko hamesha khush rakhna.... Aur mujhe meri anu ko hamesha khush rakhne ki shakti dijiyega.... Main use hamesha khush rakhna chahta hun..... And at last.... Thank youuu for every... every.... everything....
Mukku - bhai.. Ho gaya ya... Abhi kuch aur bhi maangana hai.... Matlab soch lo... Abhi mauka mila hai... Fir poora 1 saal wait karna padega... 😁😁
Anuj - aree... Bhagwan mujhe pehle se hi itna kuch diya hai....ab aur jyada maangunga toh lalchi keh launga....
Hearing him everyone laughs...
S - Achcha... Chal bahut mazak ho gaya... Ab cake cut Kar...
Anuj - okk.... Mummy papa.... Bachchi
(he signs them to Come with him and hold the knife)
Mukku's eyes filled with tears....
Bhai.... Ab nhi badloge na...
Anuj - kabhi bhi nhi....
Mukku looks at anu and then anuj...
She thinks that anuj forgets anu... But hamare Kapadia ji kabhi apni anu ko bhool sakte hain kya....
He holds her hand... And drags her beside sunaina....
And they cut the cake....
First he feeds sunaina, then his father, then Mukku and anu...
Anuj whispers to anu - sry anu.... Vo mummy aur papa.... Mere liye sab barabar hain par....
Anu cuts him - anuj... Maine Kuch Kaha kya.... Maa aur papa mere liye sabse pehle aate hain.... Aur agar tum mujhe pehle cake khilate toh... Toh shayad mujhe bhi Achcha nhi lagta.... Toh isliye don't feel guilty.... Aur rahi baat Mukku ki... Toh... Vo toh humari bachchi hai...
Anuj - thank you anu.... Mujhe itne achche se samjhne ke liye.... I am really blessed to have you... Sweetheart....
Mukku - aree bhai.... Hum bhi hai.... Aapko diya tha na itna time akele.... Ab Humse bhi toh baat karlo tum dono....
Anuj - areee mukkku.... Aisi koi... Koi... Baat nhi...
Mukku takes a piece of cake and feed him...
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Then anu also feed him....
Mukku - toh ab hum dance karenge.... Main aur bhabhi...
Anuj - aree main bhi toh hu....
M - bhai apka birthday hai.... Toh aap vaha shanti se baith kar humara dance dekho...
Anuj - aree ye kya baat huyi.... Birthday mera hai... Toh main baithun, cake khaun, nachun, gaaun, tumhe pareshan karun... Kuch bhi karun.... Tumko kya.... haan....Meri ma..ra...ji
Saying he holds thier hands and takes them towards the dance floor....
Back facing towards audiance... He holds the mic....
And started lip syncing....
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Anu snatches the mic from his hand.... And ruffles his hair
Then Mukku comes from another side
And then both Mukku and anu push him forward
Koi Mil Gaya.. Koi Mil Gaya
Mera Dil Gaya... Mera dil gaya
And they does the famous koi mil gaya step....
At the end.... Everyone present here started dancing.... In the tunes....
And anuj mauke ka fayeda uthate huye... Back hugged anu.... And kissed on her cheek....
( aree ab bas bhi karo...jara bado ka toh shram karo.... Aaj kal ke bachche bhi na...)
After the super performance.... Devika and bunty... Holds anuj's ear....
Anuj - aah... Devika... Buntyyyyy......dard ho raha hai.... Kya kar rahe ho tum dono...
Devika - Achcha ji.... Ek toh tab se ignore kar raha hai... Aur ab pooch raha hai... Hum kya kar rahe hai... Tu bata...
Bunty - haan....bata bata...
Aur anooo.... Tum bhi... Sirf yahi akela nhi hain.. Jo hume bhool gaya hai... Tum bhi...Hume bhool gayi na...
Anuj - aree... Nhi bhule hai yaar... Ab mera kaan chod... Dard ho raha hai...
Bunty - bilkul bhi nhi... Mat chodiyo..
Kanta and sunaina comes...to rescue him...
Aree chalo chalo... Humare bachhon ko chodo... Jab dekho chedte rehte ho...
Devika - nhi... Aunty... Ab toh jab tak ye mujhe mera gift nhi deta... Main nhi chodne wali...
Bunty - aur jab tak anu mera gift nhi deti.... Main anuj ko nhi Jaane dunga..
Anuj - Ek sec... Tujhe toh anu se gift chahiye... Toh mera kaam kyu pakadwaya hai...?
B - ab tera kaan pakdu ya anu ka... Ek hi baat hai....
Anuj - devi.... Chod na...
D - ja... Le chod diya... Ab gift...
She said stretching her hand
Anuj - chal... Kon sa gift...
D - hww... Cheater...
Anuj - main cheater nhi hu
D - tu cheater hai....
Nhi...
Hai...
Nhi....
Hai...
Hu...
Nhi hai...
Anuj - vo toh main jaanta hun....
D - ay... Mera matlb hai..
Anuj cut off her in mid...
Ha.. Ha sab samjh gaye... Chal ab bas...
Bunty - chal Jaane de na devu... Agali baar hum isko chodenge nhi... Aaj birthday hai.. Chod dete hain...
D - birthday hai... Isliye chod diya... Par Agali baar... Chodungi nhi..
Anuj - ha. Ha... Dekh lenge...
Mukku - attention attention.... Agar aap sab ka ho gaya ho toh.... Ab main kuch bol sakti hun?
Abhi - ha... Bachcha bol...
Mukku - thanks papa... Okkk.... Toh ab khana - peena ho gaya.. Hai... Naach - gaana bhi ho gaya hai... Toh ab game time...
( she said by hitting the glass by spoon)
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Anu - theek hai... Par game konsa hai
Anuj - antakshari...
Mukku - kya bhai... Old man..
S - Haan... Ye game kitni baar khela hai.. Kuch naya idea diya karna...
Anu - Haan... Ye old fashion aur iske game bhi old fashion...
Mukku - chalo... Bhai ki baat ko ignore karte huye... Main aap sab ko ek game batati hu...
So, first of all.... Ye game ek couple game hai.... Jisko yaha par mujood couples khelenge....
Bhai aur bhabhi....
Mumma aur daddy...
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Etc etcs...
Okkk....
Anuj - aree game toh bata...
Mukku - poora bolne doge... Huhh...
So... Iss game me.. Dono couple ke pass ek ek board hoga... Aur hum unse kuch sawaal puchenge..jo ki unke partner se related hoga....aur Jis couple ke sabse jyada jwaab match karenge... vo couple winner hoga....
Aur iss game ka Naam hai...
"How well you know me"
So... Aap sab apne apne seat ki taraf prasthaan Karen....
Anuj - (to anu) dekhna jeetenge toh hum hi anoo...
Anu - Haan... Vo toh mujhe bhi pata hai... Akhir tumhare Saath main jo hun...
( savage anu😎)
Mukku - chalo... Ab sab apna apna board pakad lo.... Aur Pehla swaal puchegi Devika...
Come on Devika...
D - okkk.... So normal que. se shuru karte hain...
Boys ready...
Tell your partner's fav. snack..?
Everyone started writing...
M - time up.... Pehle papa mumma... Aap dikhao..
They turned thier boards...
Abhi's board = samosa
Sunaina's board = samosa
M - very gud... So mumma papa ko 1 point...
Next...
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AT last she told Maan to turn thier boards
M - bhai bhabhi... Turn..
Anuj = Imlie
Anu = Imlie...
M - yeah.... 1 point...
Bunty writes thier points...
M - ab next main...
So... Tell me your partner's favourite actor
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M - turn....
Abhi = Mithun da...
S = Govinda...
M - aww.... Papa... Galat Jawaab...
Abhimanyu whispers
Aree...Humne toh Pehli picture sath me mithun da ki dekhi thi na...
S - han... Toh aapke favourite govinda hain... Toh mere bhi tab se wahi ho gaye...
M - no... Discussion
Ab bhai bhabhi... Turn your boards...
Anuj = Ranbir kapoor
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Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk...
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Anu = Ranbir kapoor
M - not bad bhai..... One more point....
B - ab meri turn....
So... Tell me your partner's favourite song...
Anuj - Ohh... Ye thoda difficult hai...🤔
M - 1...2....3..... Stop... Stop
Mummy papa...
Abhi - aree... Pehele anuj ko bol... Har baar main nhi...
Anuj - ye kya baat huyi.... Papa aap bade hain... Chalo turn...
M - Haan... Papa... Pehle Aap... Now turn..
Abhi = Pyaar hua, iqraar hua, Pyaar Se Phir kyu darta hai dil....
Sunaina turns her board shyly.
S = 🙈
Vaha maujood sab log taaliyan bajane lagte hain. Mukku, anuj aur bunty seentiyan bajate hain...
Mukku - anuj - aree wah mummy papa... Supppperrr.... 😘
Aur sunaina-abhimanyu blush karne lagte hain...
( ye commentary bhi achchi hai... Hehehehe 😅)
M - bhai ab aap... Turn...
Anuj - vo... Mukku..
M - bhai... Vo.. Ye nhi... Turn...
Anuj turns his board
- Pehla nasha... Pehla khumaar...
Anu -
As they turn their boards...mukku starts singing
M -
She hold devika's hand
Anuj - bas kar besuri... Achche khase romantic song ka kabada kar diya...
M - bhai... Jao.. Main point hi nhi dungi... Zeroo..
Anuj - aree.. Mazak kar raha tha... Bahut achcha gaaya... Pls.. Zero nhi
M - jao.. Maaf kiya... Lekin aaj raat ko main aapko gaana suna kar sone dungi..
Anuj - chalega..
He murmured - aaj toh sone ke baare me bhool ja bete...
M - chalo ab aage...
They asked many questions... Some are about husband ( or would be) and some about wife ( or would be)...
D - okk... So last question...
Tell me your husband's habit. Which you don't like..
M - tick tick 1...
Tick tick 2....
Tick tick 3....
Stop...stop... Chalo mummy aap dikhao...🤭...
S - geela towel bed par daal dete hain...
Abhi - aisi koi aadat hi nhi....
Abhimanyu looks at her board...
Abhi - aree... Ye kya baat huyi...ye galat hai... Sara-sar jhooth..
S - koi jhooth nhi hai... Aap aisa hi karte ho...aur mukku bhi aap par hi gayi hai..
M - aree mummy... Main nhi karti.. Ye jhooth hai..
S - dekha... Dono baap beti.. Ek jaise hain..
Anuj - han.. Ye hain hi.. Bilkul same... Papa ki pari..
M - bhai...
Anu - aree mera toh dekho...
M - bhabhi... Achcha chalo.. Dikhao...bhai bhabhi.. Turn..
Anu - khrrate
Anuj - khrrate...
Everyone started laughing......
Devi - anujjjj....tu Sach me bahut jorr se khrrate maarta hai..
Anu - han... Bahut jorr se..
M - par aap dono ko kaise pata...
Anu and Devika - kyuki ye class me bhi so Jaata Hai...🤭🤭
Mukku - okk... So ab total karte hain...
Mummy papa... 1,2...,3,4..5..6
Not bad...
Ab...
They count other's numbers also and at last
Bhai bhabhi...1, 2..3...4..5...6...7...8..9.....
10...
yeahhhh.....toh aaj ke winner hain.... #MaAn....
all started clasping for them....
K - sunaina ji... Ab kaafi raat ho gayi hai... Toh hum chalte hain...
Devika - Haan... aunty... hum bhi chalte hain...
S - Achcha theek hai... Aap sab achche se jaayiyega... Jai Shri Krishna....
Everyone - Jai Shri Krishna...
K - anu... chal...
Anu - Haan... Maa... ekaj minute...
she goes towards anuj... and stands in front of him...
Devika - anooo... hum sab tumhe nhi dekh rahe... Toh tum apna jo karna hai kar sakte ho...
K - lekin jaldi haan... Ghar bhi jaana hain.
And all giggles...
here.. anu hugs him...
Happy birthday Anoojjj....
Anuj - thenkww... darling... Aur aj ke surprise ke liye bhi Bhut bhutia thenkww....
achcha... Ab ek kiss... pls...
She kissed his cheek and left....
Anu - Achcha Maa... Ab main chalti hu... Kal aaungi... aapse aur mukku se milne...
S - Haan... jaroor aana... hume bahut achcha lagega...
Anu - Jai shree krishna... and she takes blessings from sunaina and abhimanyu... and left with her family and friends...
M - chalo bhai.... gifts timeeeee.....
Anuj - uffffff..... nhii....
Sunaina and abhimanyu smiles looking at them...
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Hola... Peeps...
I know... I'm a little bit late..... But derr aaye durust aaye...
So... How's the update... Hope Achcha ho.....
#MaAn moment abhi update nhi karungi...
Future me shayad kardu... Sorry for that 😅...
PS - want suggestions for the next update... Pls...
Bye....
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