《Say I do》chapter 27: 'hello brother'
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*unedited so may contain grammar mistakes*
"I am totally a party person!" I chirped while I stood in the corner facing the wall.
Liam snorted causing me to whip my head around and glare at him. He held a firm smirk on his lips while holding the phone against his ear.
We've been screaming back and forth at each other for the past 10 minutes because I refused to be anywhere near people and I just want to be home And- I just want to hung up cause all my credit is being used up by this idiot.
I still don't know why I agreed to come to a night club with him. I never thought he'd meant this when he said let's do it for 'real'
"Hey can we go home yet?" I asked, staring at him from the opposite side.
"Its been 5 minutes" he replied.
I lick my lips. "Exactly"
I could have sworn he rolled his eyes at me and I was so close to slapping him back to reality.
"Are you going to stand there all night?" He asked, annoyance and frustration in his voice.
"Until we get home yeah"
He snorts. "You can stay there all night then"
I groan and he hung up the phone before I had the chance to swear at him.
If it wasn't for the fact that he was sat leaned back with both of his arms resting on the top of the seats while his right leg was crossed over the left and his head leaned back while his jawline clenched sharply enough to cause a damn paper cut and- what was my point again?
-right, if he wasn't so damn good-looking then I wouldn't be too distracted to smack him back home.
The music sudenly turned up causing people to block the view between Liam and I.
I awkwardly try to avoid people as they'd come too close to dance with me. Please don't twerk on me, I ain't ready for that shit.
I literally press myself against the corner of the wall, holding my breath while I prayed they wouldn't come any closer.
"Hi" a man said, pushing past the people causing them to move back.
Not all superheros wear capes
I adjusted myself back in position and smiled at the cute guy.
"I'm Adam" he said with a gleaming smile on his face.
Why does this man remind me of a puppy and how can I adopt him?
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Adeline you cannot possibly adopt this seriously cute little muffin when you're married cause you're husband will woop your ass.
Maybe if I ignore him he'll leave me alone.
"And you are?" He mumbled, trying to continue the non-existent conversation.
Ignore.
"Want some chips?"
Ignore- wait no-
Within a split second of asking me, I shoved my hands into the chips packet and grabbed a hand full which went straight into my mouth. Knowing me, I choked on them causing a scene where people actually became concerned.
"Shit, you okay?" The guy asks, worried.
Oh yeaah, just choking on food that is blocking my airways but I'm good.
"F-fine" I breathed, gasping for air.
Holy cow. Is this how I die? Can you imagine the headlines?
night while choking on chips after attending it with her husband when they finally decided to the marriage a go'
At least I'll leave a memorable impression behind.
Just on que, Liam pushes past people to reach me. He wasn't about to let me die in peace.
"This shit only happens to you" he mumbled, as he slapped my back while I cough. The smirk on his face said it all. He was enjoying slapping me and took the opportunity to do it hard.
I finally stop choking and the food goes down my throat. The crowd suddenly burst into cheers and Liam being the attention seeker he is pretends to bow and act like a paramedic when he doesn't even know what paracetamol is.
"You alright?" He asked, as he guided me back to where he was sat.
"Can we go home now?" I asked, faking a cough and trying to be dramatic with a fake faint fall.
He litrally made no effort to reach out and stop me from falling on the seats. Wow, what a gentlemen.
"You dying?" He asked.
I shook my head confused.
"Then no"
My expression fell flat. You motherfu-
"Here's your drinks" a man said while putting down shot glasses. He glanced between Liam and I and stopped at me "It's on the house. You need it"
Was that an insult because I'm confused
Liam laughed before gulping down a glass. I tried to grab one but he snatched it out of my hand and gulped that down too.
"Excuse me" I uttered.
"Ok" he said.
He really is asking for that reality smack
"Stop taking my drink" I frowned while he snatched the third drink out of my hand.
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"Underage" he mumbled "and I'm not carrying your drunk ass back home"
I huff and before he could stop me, gulped down a glass. I shrieked at the disgusting taste.
Liam chuckled "I didn't know you had the balls"
I smirked. "I do and they're bigger than yours"
Apply water to the burn.
His face scrunched up causing me to laugh. He hates me
I grabbed another drink and shoved it down my throat. One after another and the whole tray was finished and by the time I knew it I was a tiny bit drunk and so was Liam.
"Do you like donkeys?" I asked, curiously, trying to make conversation.
Liam nodded "yeah, sure I like you"
I grit my teeth and try to slap his arm but instead my body swung forward and my head landed on his laps
"Man down" Liam grunted, moaning in pain. Oops
"Two men down" I snort
He cupped my cheeks and pulled them causing me to slap his hand away. "Oy" I growl
He smiles. "You're cute when you're ugly"
Is that a compliment or a diss?
"I'm divorcing you" I grunt.
He chuckled and rubs his knuckles against my head playfully. "Its a compliment"
I roll my eyes. Compliment my ass. I sigh as the noise began to quite down and people began to leave. It made me wonder what the heck we are doing here.
"What happened to making it real?" I asked, frowning.
Liam shrugged and leaned himself back. "This is real. This is what I do most nights"
I glare at him but he smiles. The thought of him meeting woman here and watching them dance seductively made me realise what a couch potato I am.
"Don't smile" I scowl at him. It's too cute
He leaned forward and smiled in my face. "Why? Does it make your heart flutter?"
Oh please why would it-heck yeah
"No" I lied, blushing. The fact that I was slightly drunk didn't help either cause my cheeks were flushing even more.
He chuckled and squeezed my cheek slightly. "You're a terrible liar"
"Hahahahahaha-I need a wee" I announced before running away into the toilets before I gave myself away even further. I couldn't let his cocky self feel satisfied.
I took a deep breath and splashed cold water on my face. I decided to sit in the bathroom and wait for 20 minutes to pass. Liam might think I'm having number 2 or I've escaped.
It wasn't long until 20 minutes was over and I finally walked out. The place became quite and only a few people were around.
I spotted Liam walking out and I ran after him. How dare he tries to ditch me cause it almost worked.
"Hey!" I screamed catching up to him and grabbing him by the ear. "How could you leave me like that?"
He winced in pain as he bent towards me, delicately trying to stop me from squeezing his ear. "Ouch ouch ouch ouuuch"
He turned his face to look at me and I froze. I forgot to breathe for a moment.
Holy shit this ain't my husband but why does he look so much like my husband?
"I'm so sorry-I-I thought you were someone else" I said, apologising.
The guy chuckled as he leaned over me. "You thought I was Liam?"
My mouth parted slightly. How does he know Liam and why am I still here with a stranger when I should go back and find alien- I mean Liam.
"How do-"
"Jase" he said holding his hand out "Liam's brother"
Uh- did I pass out in the toilets and began dreaming because the last time I remember Liam didn't have any siblings.
"Ok bye" I chirped, spinning around to turn away from this odd man. I was suddenly grabbed by the arm and spun around.
"Adeline right?" He asked but sounded more like a confirmation. I slowly nodded my head as thoughts rambled through my brain about how I'm about to be kidnapped.
"My mom's waiting for me" I blurt.
He laughed. I could see a sudden resemblance between Liam and this man.
"Jase" a familiar voice called and within a split second I watched Liam's fist collide with the guys jaw causing him to stumble back. I slapped my hands over my mouth in shock as I watch the drama unfold. The guy 'Jase' wiped a smear of blood from his lips as he regained his posture.
A smirk appeared on his lips.
"Hello brother"
Damon is that you?!
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