《Kuch Ankahi Baatein》Critical
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In hospital -
Vyom Cheetah reached hospital and enquire for Nanu... they went towards ICU and saw Anubhav standing near the door and keep on looking inside with continuously shedding tears...
Vyom: Anubhav... yeh sab kya ho gaya ... tu ghabra mat... Nanu ko kuchh nahi hoga.. hum hai na tere saath..
Saying this trio hug tightly .. Cheetah got water for Anubhav and let him drink two sips hardly...
In an hour...Vivek Vishakha also reached and come towards Anubhav...
Vishaka: Anubhav kaise hai Papa.. aur doctor ne kya kaha..
Without uttering a word.. Anubhav hugs her tightly... I am sorry Mummy... main Nanu ka khyal theek se nahi rakh paya...
Vivek: Anubhav control karo... let me meet the doctor..Vivek went to doctor cabin with Vishakha and Anubhav...
Doctor: Mr Somani... I will not lie but condition is critical... Heart open surgery karni padegi... but unluckily our best surgeon is out of India and we can't take risk with Mr Singh...
Vivek: Doctor.. I know one of the best Cardio Surgeon in Delhi...
Doctor: I believe you should consult him right now... then doctor discuss the case with surgeons in Delhi and it was decided that Nanu should be shifted to Delhi right now for Surgery as best hospitals and equipment were not available here in Ahmedabad.....
They did all preparation and book flights to take Nanu to Delhi.....
Vyom: dekh Anubhav...tu tension mat le.. sab theek hoga.. aur haan jaise hi surgery ho jaye.. tu humein phone kar dena... hum intzaar karenge...
Cheetah: Aur Haan..tu school ki chinta mat kar.. hum sab dekh lenge.. vaise bhi result mein ek hafta hai..
Assuring this Anubhav left with Nanu..Vivek and Vishakha for Airport to board the flight... (all paramedic arrangements done immediately as Nanu is one the biggest business Tycoon and respectable person in Ahmedabad) ......
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Here Haseena reached home with Preeti and went straight into washroom in context to change the dress... she cried hard inside ensuring no one can listen her sobbing.. Preeti got very upset with her behavior..
Haseena came out and her eyes was swollen and red..
Preeti: Kya hua hai Haseena... ab kuchh bolegi ki nahi.. subah se to phudak rahi thi aur ab school se jaldi aa gayi aur tu ro kyun rahi thi.. na party enjoy ki na kisi se baat ki... hua kya hai tujhe....
Haseena hug her back and cried more loudly.......
Preeti : Dekh Haseena mera dil baitha ja raha hai... please bata na kya baat hai...
After her sobs down.. Haseena pour down all her feelings to Preeti that she is in love.. Preeti got shocked...
Preeti : Haseena tune itni badi baat mujhse chhupai... aur voh hai kaun... kya main usse janati hun..
Naina nods in Yes and said : Anubhav.......
Preeti even got more shocked and said: Aur voh bhi tujhse pyar karta hai...
Haseena: Pata Nahi.. humne aaj tak ek dusre se baat hi nahi kari kabhi...
Preeti : Haseena tu paagal hai kya... aaj tak jisse baat bhi nahi ki usse itna pyar kaun karta hai... apni haalat dekh... kya hal banaliya hai tune apna........
Haseena: Preeti.. mujhe kuchh nahi pata.. bas itna janati hun ki agar Anubhav hai to Haseena hai... Maana humne kabhi baat nahi ki par uski aankhen jaise sab bol deti ho... jab jab uski aankhon mein dekhti thi lagta tha jaise meri duniya basti ho unme... Preeti main mar jaaungi uske bina...
Preeti tried to console her : Haseena.. mujhe nahi lagta tha ki meri padaku behen kabhi kisi se itna toot kar.. itna gehra pyar bhi kar sakti hai... tu chinta mat kar... aaj nahi aaya voh to kya.. ek hafte baad school khulenge tab mil lena usse.....
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Haseena still seems very tensed and with wet eyes : Preeti...pata nahi aaj man bahut ghabra raha hai... lagta hai jaise sab chhut raha ho... kahin kuchh to galat hai par kya pata nahi... aaj maine kitna socha tha ki usse baat karungi...apne dil ki aur uske dil ki bhi sunungi par dekh achanak yeh sab kya ho gaya....
Preeti : Arey kuchh nahi... aaj Anubhav school nahi aaya na isliye tere man mein bure khyaal aa rahe hai.. chal ab jaldi se rona band kar aur hans de... mere liye nahi to Anubhav ke liye hi sahi...
Haseena smiles a bit listening her sisters advise as there is no other way for her..
Later Haseena request Preeti to not disclose this to anyone not even to Karishma till everything sort out between them... which Preeti too agreed heartily..
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