《Release Me》Author's Note
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Okay, the ending was not so much of an ending because it's only the first book. I have noticed that I have a lot of grammar mistakes with my book and things I need to rewrite. I also have many ideas on about this book but I need a break.
With a help from an editor, I will correct all my mistakes in this book and give it a few touch ups. After I do that I will write the second book to the story.
Thank you to everyone who took their time to read the book and vote for it as well as comment on it. Especially to those who have stuck with it all the whole time :)
On that note please share this with other people that would be interested in reading it.
Again I am sending my deepest thank you and love to everyone :)
Until next time......
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