{if it's okay I want to write this instead of the scene with Tina and the pool, that's still happening but whilst this is going on. }

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Evelyn is pulled down a long black corridor, tears are still falling as she's brought into a bright white cell.

There's a metal chair suspended in the air over a pool of a dark coloured potion.

Evelyn is brought to the edge of the pool.

"Don't worry, it's quick." The lady says to somewhat comfort her, but badly.

Evelyn stands at the edge of the pool hyperventilating, she's doesn't want to die, especially not this way.

The Lady holds up her wand smiling in a patronising way.

Pointing it at Evelyn's head, she extracts happy memories from her head.

It takes a while to get out Evelyn's memories, for they have been pushed far down, overcome with darkness.

Eventually the memories are put into the pool as they swirl forming colourful images.

Evelyn is seeing Hogwarts for the first time, it's beautiful turrets lit up with light from the tiny windows.

Flying on a broom, the wind in her hair as she admires the view around her.

The sound of laughter and three young girls, Evelyn and her two best friends Eleanor and Hazel.

Her first Kiss with a fellow hufflepuff in her year.

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Whilst this was going on she didn't realise Newt and Tina behind them creeping up.

They were waiting for the right moment to rescue her, captivated by learning more about Evelyn.

Newt almost felt jealousy from seeing her kiss at Hogwarts, he pushes away that thought shocked at what come next.

Something dark was appearing, tears falling down Evelyn's cheeks, the lady next to her looked confused.

The darkness in the potion began blocking out the happy memories, a women and man were shown shouting at her.

"You're a traitor."

"You're no daughter of mine"

The man and women fade away leaving a boy with brown hair similar to Evelyn's.

He lifted a younger Evelyn up into his arms spinning her around, their doesn't seem to be a huge age gap between them.

"Jerome" Evelyn says out loud.

The lady smiles knowing the potion is back to luring her in.

"You wanna get in honey? You want to join Jerome?" She asks, a sickly sweet tone to her voice.

Newt looks at Tina a knowing look upon his face, he's going to make a move as soon as Evelyn moves.

"Jerome" Evelyn repeats.

The pool now shows Jerome with his wand out pointing at her, he's crying.

"Eve please, I can't stop. It's not my fault-" he begins to say before his eyes go dark.

"Crucio" he shouts as Evelyn screams out in agony.

Newt looks at the pool in shock, he recognises Jerome from his year.

Jerome looks as though what he's doing is being forced upon him.

The lady next to Evelyn looks panicked again.

"Jerome" Evelyn says louder breathing faster and faster as she clutches her arms.

That's when Newts moves in he sends a spell towards the lady who passes out on the floor.

He pulls Evelyn into his arms and she gives in for a moment feeling his warm embrace once more.

Jerome's voice is heard still coming from the pool, she begins to resist Newt trying to get to the pool.

It's as though even through torture she'd still stand by her brother.

"Evelyn we need to go!" Newt says frantically trying to pull her away.

She pushes him as hard she can away with all her force much to Newts shock, he falls to the floor with a loud thud.

This snaps Evelyn out of her trance as she looks at her shaking hands.

A hurt expression is on his face from Evelyn's burst of anger.

"I didn't-" she begins to say.

She steps back giving him room to stand, but she's so close to the edge she loses balance.

Newt lunges towards her frantically, as does Tina.

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Hehe sorry that was mean to stop at but, I have to do coursework :( short chapter but tell me what you think anyway? Do you like learning more about Evelyn or should I stick to the plot more? Anyways comment what you thinks hehe. Bysie bye -C xx