《More than Enough》Chapter 8
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Zuhnyiah point of view
We left out the house later then expected. The club don't close until midnight. I mean the club is called Midnight you see what I did there. Ion gone cap I'm lame asl for dat joke.
We waited in line to get inside the club. This is one of the hottest clubs out here in Atlanta dat everyone recommends going to. I mean, I see why.
12 to 15 mins later
We finally inside. Club packed asl smell like fish and must all in dis bitch tf they been doing all dey life.
"That fat ass, wanna be the hulk ass, security guard got me fucked Talm bout "is you of age" bitch, do u see dis body like nigga." Ari said tryna go back out to the security guard but Marie end up stopping her.
"Girl stop letting people ruin yo day. Now let's go get us some drinks" Jayda said as she was walking to the bar. We walked behind her. There was this girl, I ain't gone cap she fine asl no homo.
"How can I help you" she asked looking at all of us.
"I will get the passion fruit with vodka" Jayda said.
"Imma gone ahead and order sum wings with Hennessey" Marie said what ha fat ass. I knew she was gonna order sum food. She always does dat when we go to the club or out anywhere tbh.
"Give me sum Hennessey and 4 shots" Ari said knowing ha ass is a lightweight den the all of us.
"Sex on da beach" I said but some caught my eye. I turnt around to see the same nigga dat fucked up my car. I mumbled "ain't this a bitch" well rolling my eyes. Grabbing my drink. I drink sum of it well we find a section to sit in.
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We sit down. "Y'all tell me why I see da same bitch ass nigga dat fucked up my car here" I told them. But my body froze when I heard his voice . "Shit" I mumbled to myself.
"So imma bitch now" he asked me while I was turning around. I saw two other people behind him while at least he know how to pick out his friends.
"Umm did I say dat" I said while scratching my cheek. Looking everywhere else but him.
"While y'all handle y'all situation we finna go dance" Marie said grabbing Ari and Jayda to the dance floor. I see the two boys dat I still don't know the names of walking behind them.
Dave sat next to me. Next thing I know he got his hand wrapped around my necked. He moved his lips to my ear. "Wat I tell you about dat attitude you have" I shudder cause he was making yo girl drop down there.
"You ain't tell me shit." I told him tryna cover up how turnt on I am. I didn't notice the song that was playing inside the club until now. Like why tf they play this song inna situation like dis.
Tank "When We"
I could be aggressive (I could be aggressive)
I can be a savage (I can be a savage)
I just need your blessin' (I just need your blessin')
Say that I can have it, yeah
When we fuck
When we fuck
Face down, ass up
Back, back, back it up
Lemme get both of them legs
And put em both behind your head
This shit is gettin' deep, deep up in there
Feel your legs gettin' weak up in here
Get a face full of that gushy, I'm close baby don't push me, this is how it always should be when
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When we fuck
When we fuck
When we fuck
When we fuck
I took 2 shot of vodka to the head that Ari had got us. "Aye slow down mamas, ion want u drunk well sucking my dick" he said while he release my neck.
I widened my eyes looking at him "Who said I wanna suck yo shrimp wanna be 11 inches dick" I said rolling my neck mugging him. Cause he got me fuck him, we ain't even together.
"Babygurl now u know" he said I look at him "Nawl nigga ion know shit fytb stop capping all yo life" I shook my head downing my sex onna beach drink.
Well he was rubbing on my thigh talking my fucking ears off. A girl dat look like who did it in why came up to us. She betta stop poking don't flat ass chess up so much shit gonna get stuck like dat.
"Ha daddy u never call me back" I looked at the both of them trying not to laughing but this nigga gripping my thigh so I won't say nun.
"Bitch ion even know who tf you is" he said mugging ha. " yes u do I'm Felicia the one u fucked and ducked the same day" she said like she was happy about it. Ain't this sum ghetto ass shit.
"Bye Felicia" I mumbled underneath my breath. I tried holding my laugh in but y'all know black people can't hold Shìt. I starting bussing out laughing getting up.
"Imma leave y'all ratchet wanna be Ike and Tina hood ass couple here" I heard him say sum but I ain't even listening. I was walking to the dance floor finding my friends. Marie ass twerking on Jayda, while Ari twerking on the darkskin boy dat came with Dave big headed ass ion know where the lil Mexican looking nigga at.
I starting twerking and sum boy came up behind me but ion care I'm finna have a lit ass night dats what I came here for.
Not even 2 minutes pass by Dave ass snatch my ass up finna fight the nigga. "Back the fuck up"he told the boy and the boy left looking mad asf I mean, I'll be mad two. "Tf you on" I say to him. He dragging me out the club. "Let me the fuck go, fuck wrong witchu I'm not one of den lil hoes u fuck around with" My friends saw him dragging me and started walking out with me. "Girl stfu cause I'm finna handle yo ass as soon as we get to my car"
To be continue.....
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