The book for the next two weeks is:

All Fun & Games

Romance

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A one-shot book with completed stories or poems about different scenarios, erotic and romantic encounters, and lots of fun. *Explicit content, nudity, kinks, fetishes and more.

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I've been told I write vivid descriptions of my characters and settings. One such reader commented in pm, "I can almost touch the characters, and be there." Left quite an impression on me.

Punctuations and tenses. Tend to miss a few commas here and there, plus sometimes tenses switch. But I'm learning to improve this flaw. The extra help is always appreciated.

Help with punctuations, mainly commas use, and tenses. Perhaps, helping to write better dialogue during a sex scene or sex setting.

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