The book of the week is:

The Promised

Paranormal Mystery Romance

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Alice doesn't remember much from her childhood. What she does know, is that for her entire life she's known things, seen things, and heard things that others cannot. Labeled as crazy by those around her, Alice can't help but keep people at arm's length. That is, until someone comes into her life that won't take no for an answer.

Now, an evil group, hell bent on bringing on the apocalypse, have set their sights on Alice and her brother Max. Will they escape their evil clutches with their lives or will they be sacrificed to Satan himself?

Explicit sex, language, and violence. Mentions of rape and child abuse.

Engaging and amusing dialogue

I never know what to put here since I think I need a lot of help improving as a writer.

I'd like to know if there are any plot holes. Just general feedback as the story is new and I haven't gotten a lot of actual feedback yet. I want to know what can be improved and what is good as is.

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