《Telmarines// Edmund Pevensie (#Wattys2016)》17
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Susan
" I don't remember this way?!" I exclaimed to Peter as he lead us into an unfamiliar bit of the woods. He had taken over from Rose, - as usual,- claiming he knew the way.
" The problem with girls- they can't keep a map in their heads!" Peter retorted, smirking, thinking it was funny.
" That's because our heads have something in them!" Rose said jokily, as the rest of us laughed.
" I wish he would have listened to the DLF in the first place" I said to Lucy.
" DLF?" Edmund asked confused, jumping down from a bit of rock.
"Dear little friend" Lucy smiled to me and Rose as we smiled at our own little joke.
" Well that's not at all patronizing is it?" Trumpkin said behind us, as we carried on walking, Peter was a couple of metres ahead now, and we intended to catch up with him.
" I'm not lost" Peter mumbled, obviously trying to persuade himself that he wasn't lost, even though he had brought us into a dead end...
" No... You just going the wrong way" Rose said as she jumped off the rock in front of us.
" You last saw Caspian in the Shuddering woods! The quickest way there is to cross at the river rush!" Peter's determination scared me a little.
" Well, unless I'm mistaken there's no crossing in these parts!" Roe fought back...GIRL POWER!
"That explains it then! Your mistaken!" Peter said boastfully, but we all knew that Rose was right, because the DLF confirmed it!
And halfway through my thought track, Peter was already gone and only Edmund was stood next to me.
We walked further and further down the hill, to get closer to the sound of rushing water. But at the time of Peter realising he was wrong, we both looked down the Cliffside, down at the long fall of the river.
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" See! Overtime, the water eroded the earth's soil causing-" I explained.
" Oh shut up" Peter said in ignorance still looking down at the river, Lucy now stood at his side.
" Is there a way down?" Edmund asked Trumpkin more than Rose. He hadn't at all been nice to her so far...
"Yes- falling" Rose exclaimed, seeing ym reaction on how rude Edmund was being.
" Well- we weren't lost!" Peter said, interrupting Edmunds attempt to answer back, Peter still probably couldn't get over the fact that he had lost his point.
" There's a fall near Beruna- how do you feel about swimming?" Trumpkin added- mostly talking to Peter.
" Rather that than walking!" Rose exclaimed as I walked behind her, following DLF.
" Aslan?...It's Aslan! It's Aslan over there- don't you see he's right.......there...." Lucy's excitement turned to disappointment, as we knew Aslan wasn't there- she must be hallucinating...
" Do you see him now?" Trumpkin said, sarcastically.
" I'm not crazy- he was there! He wanted us to follow him!" Lucy exclaimed, sticking to her point. Brother sister alike much.
Me and Peter gave each other a reassuring glance, before he explained to Lucy there must be a great number of Lions in these woods.
" I think I know Aslan when I see him!" Lucy gave Peter a glare.
" Look...I'm not about to jump off a cliff after someone who doesn't exist!" Trumpkin made a very good point....But he DOES exist....or at least did...
" The last time I didn't believe Lucy, I ended up looking pretty stupid..." Edmund said, which was surprising for once- it was usually us sticking up for her...
" Why wouldn't I have seen him?" Peter said, after looking back at where Lucy had claimed seeing Aslan.
" Maybe you weren't looking..." Lucy said, I could see the tears welling up in her eyes..
" I'm sorry Lu..." Peter said meaningfully and walked away, me and DLF following him.
Although Ed and Rose waited, and as I watched, I saw them give her encouraging smiles for her to move on.
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Between Mountains and Moons
Under the light of the three suns, the scorching sands of The Great Desert test any who are brave and or foolish enough to cross its vast and treacherous expanse. With each passing year, it becomes more and more of a necessity as The Great Desert is ever expanding. Omid knew this as he signed onto a caravan crossing. He knew of the dangers and ancient magics that this unrelenting land holds. He knew of ancient kingdoms long lost, buried by the sands. He knew of the strange in-human inhabitants, the true masters of The Great Desert seeking to expand their dominion and drive humanity to the edges of the world. When he is offered the chance to learn magic from a master, Omid agrees eagerly at the chance to discover such ancient arts, and to even dream of defending against a hostile world and all that would claim to rule it. But nothing in this formidable domain is ever easy, nor simple, nor as it seems. Be vigilant, act with cunning, and always remember to choose your words wisely. (Cover art by https://www.deviantart.com/dyrdottir)
8 116Dungeon Core Chat Room.
This is a slower-paced "experiment and dungeon building" web novel that tries to use the idea of peer-to-peer communication with Dungeon Cores instead of Dungeon to slave monster communication to break up the detailed dungeon building. Rank 1 description: (minimum met for system initialization...detailed description as follows) Each race was given a system by the gods to make up for their shortcomings and balance their place in this world. Humans: Abysmally bad at understanding and using magic unable to use more than the lowest of magic were given the "Skill System" magic in the form of premade skills with use, study, and mastery tied to experience. Elves: Intuitively understand magic and have long lives leading to vast knowledge and skill in their chosen fields. However, as a species, they have nearly zero sex drive and less than low fertility, so they were gifted the "World Tree System" with experience gained through the care of natural areas – gifting the chance of children to increase their numbers without dirty copulation. All “natural” or “wild” monsters are given an "Evolution system" designed around killing and consuming as many creatures as possible, slowly increasing strength and, at thresholds, allowing mutations to alter them multiple times. Dungeon cores are different. Unlike humans, they can see, manipulate and live off mana. Unlike Elves, they naturally crystallize after extended periods of time in high mana level areas. However, they cannot easily move or communicate and typically go insane without companionship. As a species other than the odd eccentric they are unimaginative. Brute forcing solutions without the drive to truly innovate. Thus they have been gifted with the "Dungeon Connection System" a magical version of the internet accessible by their peers that allows them to barter and sell: bait, traps, monsters, and knowledge, as well as entertain each other with “adventure streams” using exciting recorded battles and humorous reels of arrogant chumps biting off more than they can chew to often fatal effects. This is the casual story of a dungeon unluckily spawned far from potential adventurers forced to innovate beyond its peers to find its place in this world. Rank 2 Description: Justification. I've been on a dungeon core kick for months and while I love the genre – it's sparse with entries. Often the forced conflict gets repetitive and frantic solving of threats "power levels" the protagonist to god levels to progress the plot – taking away the nice steady progression fantasy I'm looking for. (Progression in this story is linked to how strong of monsters/traps/whatever he can create not his "level"...this is demonstrated by some of his newer monsters beating his older monsters not with discrete "this monster has 10 attack this one has 40") Additionally, the focus on 3rd parties with their drama takes away from the reason I’m reading dungeon core novels in the first place – I'm looking for magical crafting, experimentation and kingdom building – not defence from higher and higher levelled enemies looking to steal/destroy/control the MC. This novel is kind of just me writing the story I wish I could read. I like thinking about the experimentation that can be done in fantasy settings using 'mana' as an excuse to make up rules and try to keep them internally consistent. IE once I define how a rule works, I'm going to commit to keeping it – no breaking hard truths I've given when it's convenient, even if it backs me into a corner. Hopefully, that should make the story interesting to read even if it's SOL and less action-oriented. There will be problems to solve and a clear progression in strength (of created monsters and knowledge) however due to not wanting to force conflict for the sake of conflict the general theme will be closer to slice of life with few action sequences and no overarching goal so please keep that in mind when picking this up as the genre is not for everyone. Finally, I have a clear goal of what I want from this story (not an endless romp but a series of arcs and then a conclusion that's a couple of dozen medium-sized chapters long) I want to commit to finishing it or at least bringing it to a point of rest. I hate all the engaging stories that stop with a “hiatus” indefinitely so in the event I lose motivation I'll work to end this even if the ending becomes rushed/unsatisfying just to give a sense of closure. I’m planning on including several polls in terms of direction and taking feedback heavily into account if I get enough readers (but may choose to ignore it if it deviates too far from the direction I want to take this as in feedback like: “The MC needs a cartoonishly evil arch-enemy that wants to enslave him and force the mc to pump out magic items” or “the MC needs to make a body and learn teleportation then live with humans” will get shot down without consideration.)
8 258Witch's Contract
Samanta, a Mexican university student studying overseas, died in a massive earthquake while returning to her home country. During the last moments of her consciousness, she heard the voice of two girls, they offer her to be reborn in another world but she has to help them free their sister from the seal of an ancestral Hero, after agreeing she is reborn as an Alraune in the world of Zetcera. Now her life belongs to those two girls and she will have to fulfill her part of the deal if she wants to stay alive.
8 177Our Secret Affairs
Marinette Dupain-Cheng, in love with Chat Noir, in love with Adrien Agreste. At a party at the bourgeois mansion, she has an affair with Adrien Agreste. A secret Affair. It was forbidden, little do they know, their not the only ones keeping a secret.
8 81Only you can make me feel better... (Calamity x Drift)
Imagine someone who you see as your own uncle. Someone you can trust. Someone who cares for you. But also someone that has different plans...While Calamity saw Rodas as her own uncle, he thought otherwise. He had way different thoughts about Calamity and her family. She still thought he was there for her.Although.. after Calamity's parents died, Calamity and Deadfire learn the shocking truth about the death of their parents. Something they never expected.Later the two meet Drift and his team. But there was a little spark between Calamity and Drift. That was ignored until Deadfire met his fate...After Calamity and Drift were the only one's left, so much more was waiting for them. A lot of things they had never expected...WARNING! This story contains:-cursing-(small) smut scene's :p
8 153The Fading Sunshine
Everyone knows Karasuno's upbeat, happy go lucky middle blocker Hinata. Or they think they know him. Hinata has a huge secret that not even his team knows about. 7 years ago, Hinata, his sister Natsu, and his mother were on their way to school when a car collided with the family's car. Killing his mother and sister on impact. However Hinata managed to survive and was left in the hands of his father. Ever since then, Hinata's home life has not been the same.******abuseself harm violencerape******{completed}
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