《How to Write Stories People Will Love》Question 93: When to be detailed or vague
Advertisement
asks: My character goes through a long period in the story where she secretly researches how to modify a dark spell to save her people. How would one go about conveying the information she's learned to the reader without it being a big info-dump? And how does one make the research scenes interesting?
The first thing to ask yourself is this: How important are the details of this spell to the plot of the story? You determine this by figuring out what the bulk of the story will be about. In the scenario you present, the story could be handled in a few different ways:
1. The story is all about the adventures had while gathering the things needed for this spell. A lot of video games do this.
2. As the character learns more about the spell, she learns more about herself. The spell is part of her personal journey.
3. The story is about various characters doing things and reacting to each other. There's a strong plot happening, of which the spell is only a small piece.
If your story is more like #3, then you actually don't need to divulge much about the spell. Only relevant details need to be shared. The reader doesn't need to know every single ingredient, just the ones that will change what the character is focused upon. The things that affect the story. Things that don't really influence the story are irrelevant and tend to be boring.
If your story is more like #1 or 2, then spell details will be needed. Just not all at once - that's the key. Think of the spell as pieces of the plot and reveal them piece by piece, ideally when they become relevant.
To look at it another way, this spell could be like a 50-page report you have to write. If you think about everything at once, you start feeling overwhelmed. Discussing all aspects of the spell at once can overwhelm the reader. But if you focus on the first piece--for example, choosing which country your report will be on--it will be more manageable and interesting. The character can explore how she feels about this part of the spell, or reflect on what others might think.
Advertisement
While she does that, the rest of the spell doesn't matter. That's future stuff. There's no need to talk about it until she's ready to deal with it.
For a refresher on info-dumps, visit Chapter 25: Avoid the Info-Dump.
Advertisement
- In Serial107 Chapters
In Range
A young, talented, and aspiring archer makes his way to the Olympic Archery Qualifiers; however an accident prevents him from ever making it. An accident which took the final years of his adolescence, his dream of ever becoming an Olympic Gold Archer, and most importantly someone who meant the world to him. Rehabilitating for a year in a hospital, the despair and dread of being alone and having nothing left worth living for finally got to him. Finding his way to the rooftop, he decided fall, but where he expected death, something else appeared; a blue message. A chill and simple LitRPG story that I just wanted to write. Note: I write with the Dark Theme setting, so if I make a colour mistake it’s probably why. I also strangely prefer using the Imperial System to measure Height, while I use the Metric System for almost everything else (Canadian by the way).
8 343 - In Serial11 Chapters
Shattered World: New Game +
Monsters have appeared and are attacking. The only hope for humanity are the gods who have come to help them. Granting their chosen the power and abilities to fight against the onslaught. Almost like a video game. Specifically, the video game Shattered Earth. A little too specifically like Shattered Earth? [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] Some things about this story. This is a brutal world and a gory story, the gore is described. It is also NOT a power fantasy. This story depicts an Apocalypse, and humanities attempts to overcome it. There is more stuff to be noted that are different but those would be spoilers. Just know, if you are going into this expecting a litRPG power fantasy save the world story, you will not find it.
8 140 - In Serial9 Chapters
Callie and Arizona, simple love story.
hi(: So, this story is just about Callie and Arizona, and how they fall in love with each other. Arizona gets into a car accident and thats how Callie meets her. Will they admit their feelings for each other? Will they end up together? I don't know, read and find out. Please let me know if you like it, if you want me to write more, etc
8 168 - In Serial17 Chapters
Resurrection! (Cheater RWBY X male reader)
"I Awaken". A story that gave me the notoriety I have today. But things are changing. Darkness is consuming Remnant. Oh yes, we're replaying "I Awaken", but things won't be so happy or bright this time... (Disclaimer, I don't own RWBY or any art/songs used in this story)
8 60 - In Serial51 Chapters
I Demand It | TAEKOOK✔
Jungkook is a fearlessly confident, sheltered king. He's young, full of youth and pride, no soul could ever touch a hair on his head - until he clashed with another strong willed soul of cold, who changed his entire world, and taught him the meaning of fear. Anger and Passion.-Love with you is a so coldA rollercoaster that doesn't get old.Our climax is dallied.Our fall is always horrendous.But, I'm not worried. 'Cause baby we're endless.-©Angelic-THE-Goddess
8 132 - In Serial13 Chapters
Teen Titans Season Six Episodes
Cartoon Network's "Teen Titans" was a huge hit. And then they just cancelled it. So, I decided to write Season Six for the love of Teen Titans and for the fans. From the White Monster, to RobStar, to Alternate Dimensions, to a new threat... these action-packed episodes should keep you guessing until the very end.EPISODES RATED FROM G-PG
8 328

