《Shiva Ki Raavi》Part 11
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𝙍𝙚𝙘𝙖𝙥:- Raavi-"Tu sach mein janna chahta hai?"- she asked
Shiva nodded in yes.
Raavi:- "Thik hai, pan pehle mere ek sawaal ka jawaab de."
Shiva gets confused.
Shiva:- "Haan puchh na jo puchhna hai tujhe".
Raavi stayed silent for few seconds and kept looking at shiva.
Then she spoke:-"Tune mujhe talaak kyu diya tha shiva".
Shiva gets uncomfortable by her question as he didn't wanted raavi to know the real reason.
Shiva:- "Tu-tu bhi yeh sa-sab kin baaton ko leke baith gyi. Hu-hum uss baare mein thodi na baat ka-kar rhe hai. Tu apne baare mein bata na"- he said trying to divert the topic.
Raavi:-"Nhi shiva, aaj mujhe janna hai. Agar tu mera dard jaanna chaahta hai na, to main bhi tere faisle ka kaaran janna chahati hoon. Tujhe aaj iss sawal ka jawaab dena hoga".
Shiva now knew that raavi is determined and he has no option but telling the truth.
He took a deep breathe and a pause of few minutes.
The he said:-"Maine tujhe talaak diya kyuki... "
Raavi:-"Kyuki?"
Shiva:-"Kyuki mujhe lga ki main tere laayak nhi hoon"- he said with his head down.
Raavi:-"Shivaa?"- she said in shock.
Shiva:-"Raavi tu, tu ek bahot achha ladka deserve krti hai. Iss duniya ka sbse achha. Waisa ladka jiske saath jab tu kahi baahar jaaye na, to logo ki, baahar bheed ki, nazre na hatein. Ek aisa ladka jo bahot padha likha ho taaki tu uske baare mein apne doston ko bata sake. Tujhe sharmindagi na ho. Ek aisa ladka jo tere dil or tere iss chehre jitna hi khoobsurat ho. Jo aisi frraaatedaar english bolta ho ki tu use sunti reh jaaye. Jise suit- boot pehnna aata ho, taaki tere in stylish kapdo ki baraabari kar sake. Humari shaadi se pehle dev bhi to tujhe pasand tha na. Tu uske jaisa hi ladka deserve krti hai.Padha likha, samajhdaar. Bilkul bhagwaan Krishna jaisa. Tu sabse best deserve krti hai raavi. Somnaath ki sabse sundar ladki ke liye, duniya ka sabse handsome ladka"- he said with choked voice.
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Raavi was listening all this with hurt on her face and tears in her eyes.
Shiva completed his saying and was looking at raavi.
But raavi didn't say anything. She was still looking at Shiva with same expression and tears.
Shiva:- "Raavi, kya hua. Tu kuchh bol kyu nhi rahi hai. Kuchh bol na".
Raavi took a long breathe and wiped her tears.
Raavi:-"Shiva pata hai kya, tu mujhe kabhi samjh hi nhi paaya. Teri yeh baatein sunkar aisa lag rha hai ki kaash maine ye sawaal tujh se kiya hi na hota. Kyuki uss talaak ne mujhe itni takleef nhi di jitni ki uski wajah de rhi hai"- she said while tears were rolling down from her eyes.
Shiva gets confused hearing raavi.
Shiva:-"Raavi tu yeh kya keh rahi hai. Maine to bass... "- he was about to continue but stopped by raavi.
Raavi:-"Nhi Shiva. Ab tu kuchh nhi bolega. Tujhe ye pta hai ki main kya deserve krti hoon. Pan Shiva, main kya chaahti hoon uska kya?" Main kaisa jeevansaathi chaahti hoon uska kya koi matlb nhi hai?"
Shiva:-"Pan raavi, tu bhi to aisa... "
Raavi:-"Nhi Shiva. Main aisa insaan nhi chaahti jo tune kaha. Main aisa ladka chaahti hoon ki jab hum kahi bahar jaaye to uss bheed mein bhi, uski nazrein mujhse na hatein. Ek aisa ladka jo chaahe padha likha na ho, pan mera man padh le. Jiska dil duniya ke hazaar sundar chehron se bhi jyada khubsurat ho. Vo jab bole na, to uski baaton mein mera zikr ho. Aur main bss use sunti rahoon. Jo chaahe suit-boot na pehnta ho, bss mera pyaar pehen le. Jo mere stylish kapdo ki nhi, meri feelings ki baraabari kare. Tujhe lagta hai dev mujhe isliye pasand tha kyuki vo padha likha hai or achhe kapde pehenta hai? Agar tujhe aisa lagta hai to tu galat hai. Vo to bss mujhe isliye pasand tha kyuki vo mujhe bachaata tha. Pan vo bachpana tha Shiva. Mujhe bhagwaan Krishna jaisa nhi, Bhagwaan Shiv jaisa chaahiye. Mujhe Shiva chahiye.
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Shiva kept listening her. Tears were flowing from his eyes.
Raavi:- "Yaha main ye ratt lagaaye baithi hoon ki main tujhe, shiva se pyaar karti hoon Or tu koi or hi khichdi paka rha tha. Gadhega, bandar, ullu"- she said while hitting on his chest.
Shiva:- "Raavi dekh, vo sab to puraani baat hai na. Tu abhi kyu fatt rahi hai"- he said while trying to stop her.
Suddenly raavi stop hitting him.
Raavi:- "Ek minute, matlb yeh saara kaand tune uss bakwaas si galatfehmi ke kaaran kiya?:- she said with an expression of unbelievableness.
Shiva:- "Kya? Kon sa kaand? Kya bol rhi hai tu?"- he said confusingly.
Raavi:-"Tere talaak ke wajah se hi itna kuchh hua or haan, vo disha, vo disha chudail bhi isi kaaran se aayi thi na. Or usne tujhe kiss bhi kiya"- she said angrily.
Shiva:-"Achha, meri chipkali. Sorry. Tujhe pareshaan krne ke liye "- he said holding his ears."
Raavi:-"Tujhe pta bhi hai, mujhe kitna bura lgta tha jab vo chudail tere kareeb aane ki koshish karti thi."- she said with a cute pout.
Shiva:-"Thik hai. Maang to rha hoon maafi. Apne bandar ko maaf kar de".
Raavi:-"Thik hai. Thik hai. Jaa maaf kiya tujhe".
Shiva:-"Matlb ab humare beech sab theek ho gya hai? Matlb ab tu mujhse naaraz to nhi hai na? Sab pehle jaisa ho gya na?"- he asked in excitement.
Raavi now found a chance to tease him.
Raavi:- "Pta nhi, sochna padega"- she said teasing him.
Shiva:- "Sochna padega matlab. Ab kya sochna baaki hai?"- he asked confusingly.
Raavi:- "Tu mujhe vo teen magical words bol de to kuchh baat banegi"- she said.
Shiva:- "Magical words? 🤔 Kya? 'BHOOKH LAGI HAI'. Haina? Yahi teen lafz na?😃 Tune bataya kyu nhi ki tujhe bhookh lagi hai. Main abhi kuchh khaane ko laata hoon"- saying this he was about to go but raavi hold his hand.
Raavi:-" Bhookhad kahi ka. Main khaane ki baat nhi kar rahi hoon. Main unn words ki baat kar rahi hoon jisse hum apne dil ki baat kehte hai".
Shiva understood that raavi wanted him to say I love you.
Shiva:- "Thik hai. Mai-main koshi-shish krta hoon"- he said noversly.
Raavi:-"Nahi ruk. Yaha nahi. Sabke saamne. Bilkul waise jaise maine kaha tha."
Shiva becomes shock hearing this.
Shiva:-"Kyaaa, sabke saamne. Ye tu kya bol rahi hai raavi. Aise achha thodi na lagta hai. Hai na. Mai yahi bolta hoon na"- he said trying to convince her.
Raavi:- "Ok byee Shiva"- she said and went out of room smiling.
Shiva:- "Ye chipkali ne bhi kaha fasa diya. Ab kya karun"- he said while rubbing in his hair.
Next day.
It is holi day and everyone is in the aangan doing preparation for holi.
Everyone wished each other holi. Raavi was playfully ignoring Shiva to tease him until he didn't speak his feelings.
THE END
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