《Shiva Ki Raavi》Part 10
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Hey guys,
WISHING EVERYONE A VERY HAPPY HOLI😇😇
I am back with another part of "shiva ki raavi".
Read, enjoy and do let me know your views about this part in comment section. 😇
Shiva held raavi's hand. Raavi turned.
Shiva:- "Mujhe tujhse baat karni hai"- he said looking at her.
Raavi freed her hand and said:-" Bol".
Shiva:-"Tu mujhe ignore kyu kar rhi hai?"- he asked directly.
Raavi gets shocked listening this.
Raavi in mind:-"Hey somnath. Isne to sidha sidha mujhse puchh liya. Ab kya jawaab doon ise. Mujhe to lga tha ki main ise ignore karungi to ye khud se wajah jaanne ki koshish karega. Pan isne to bina koshish kiye hi puchh liya. Kuchh nhi ho skta iss bandar ka🙄".
Shiva was waiting for her answer.
Shiva:-"Raavi Tu kuchh bol kyu nhi rahi. Main kuchh puchh rha hoon tujhse".- he said looking at her confusingly.
Raavi had no answer. So she left without saying anything.
Shiva became more confused now.
Shiva:-"Phir se bina kuchh kahe chali gayi? "- he said to himself looking at the door of kitchen.
Raavi came in aangan and Shiva came behind her.
Everyone was in the aangan. Dhara was peeling the peas and everyone was having tea.
Raavi went near well and pull some water out. Shiva also went behind her and stand behind her when she was pulling the water out.
She noticed that but didn't say anything.
She then went to mandir area and start removing the old flowers. Shiva again followed her and stood behind her.
Similarly she was doing her work at different places and Shiva kept on following her.
Everyone gets shocked and confused seeing the scenario in front of their eyes.
Suman maa:- "Ye Shiva kar kya rha hai. Uss markundi gaaye ke aage pichhe kyu ghoom rha hai".- she said confusingly.
Dhara:-"Pta nhi maa. Shayad dono mein phir se jhagda hua hai or Shiva raavi ko manane ki koshish kar rha hai"- she said to suman maa looking at Shiva and raavi.
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Gaumbi:-"Vo sab to theek hai dhara. Pan Shiva ko kabhi aise nhi dekha".- he said looking at shivi.
Rishta:-"Aise matlb kya gaumbi?"- she asked
Krish:-"Arey bhabhi, aise matlb dev Or gaumbi ke jaise. Peticot chaap".
Dev gaumbi and maa stared at him in anger. Dhara and rishta was smiling under the breathe.
Suman maa:-"Shiva! Kuchh chaahiye kya tujhe?"
Shiva looked at maa and everyone else. He realised that everyone was seeing him following raavi.
Shiva:-"Nahi maa. Main vo bss... "- he couldn't find an answer
Suman maa:-" Main vo kya. Agar kuchh nhi chahiye to iske aage piche kyu ghoom rha hai? "
Shiva:-"Main kamre mein jaa rha hoon, nahaana hai mujhe"- saying this, he rushed to his room avoiding the question session.
Few minutes later:-
Raavi went to room and start folding the cloths in cupboard.
Shiva came out of washroom.
NOTE:- IN MY STORY, EVERYONE HAS THEIR SEPARATE BATHROOM IN THEIR ROOMS.
He was all wet from head to toe and having just a towel tucked around his waist🥵
Raavi turned and saw Shiva in that wet look. Shiva also saw her.
Raavi kept looking at him as he was looking so hot.
After few seconds, raavi came back in senses.
Raavi in mind:- "Raavi ye tu kya kar rhi hai. Ghoorna band kar use. Tu use ignore kar rhi hai. Dhyaan rakh".
Shiva on the other hand was thinking something else.
Shiva in mind:-" Yeh sahi mauka hai. Kamre mein sirf hum dono hi hain. Abhi iss chipkali se baat krne ka sahi time hai".
Shiva started walking towards raavi. Raavi was about to leave but shiva caged her between the cupboard and his hand.
Both were staring at each other.
Raavi:-"Shiva jaane de mujhe"
Shiva-"Pehle bta ki ye kya naatak lga rakha hai tune. Subah se dekh rha hoon. Pure din bak bak krne wali tu, aaj kuchh bol hi nhi rahi hai".
Raavi:-"Tujhe kya main kuchh bolun yaa na bolun. Tujhe kyu itna fark pad rha hai. Hatt yaha se"-saying this she freed herself from Shiva and start leaving.
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But Shiva held her hand.
Shiva:-"Maine kuchh kiya hai kya? Kuchh hua hai to bta mujhe"- he said innocently.
Raavi:-"Mujhe kuchh nhi bataana, haanth chhod mera"- she said without turning.
Shiva understood that raavi is not gonna say anything that easily. So he found a trick.
Shiva:-"Thik hai, nahi bataana hai to mat bata. Pan ek baat jaan le, bahot log hai jo mujhse baat krne ke liye taraste hain"- he said with a naughty smile while leaving her hand.
Raavi became confused.
Raavi:-"Jaise ki?"- she asked.
Shiva:-"Jaise ki disha. Ek wahi to thi jo mujhe pasand karti thi.😜 Ek wahi to thi jo mujhe kisi laayak samjhti thi. Ek wahi to thi jo mere liye kuchh bhi kar skti thi. Ek wahi to thi jo mujhse pyaa... "
Raavi:-"BASSS!😡"
Before Shiva could complete his sentence raavi shouted.
Shiva looked at her in shock. Though he was teasing her, but he thought that she will get annoyed only. He didn't expected this strong angry reaction from her.
Suddenly tears started flowing from raavi's eyes.
Raavi:-"Shiva tu na mujhe kabhi samjh hi nhi sakta"- she said while sobbing.
Shiva felt immense pain seeing raavi in tears.
He went close to her.
Shiva:-"Raavi main to bss tujhe chhed rha tha. Majaak tha vo. Tu ro kyu rahi hai?"- he said wiping her tears.
Raavi:-"Tu bss majaak kar. Tujhe to sab kuchh majaak lagta hai. Humara rishta bhi tere liye majaa.. "- she couldn't complete the sentence as Shiva put his palm on raavi's mouth.
Shiva:-" Hamaara rishta mere liye kabhi majaak nhi tha raavi. Na hai or na hi hoga"- he said looking at her intensely.
Raavi removed his palm and said:-"Nhi hai. To phir kyu mujhe teri taraf se koi koshish nhi dikhi hamaare rishte ko bachaane ki. Ise sambhalne ki".
Shiva:"Raavi main koshish kar to rha hoon".
Raavi:-"Ise? Ise kehte hai koshish. Aise mujhse jabardasti kar ke kon si koshish kar rha hai tu Shiva? Tune kabhi mere man ki baat janne ki koshish ki? Kabhi puchha mujhse ki main kya sochti hoon. Mere dil mein kya hai? Agar tu ye sb karta na Shiva, to vo hoti koshish. Par tujhse ye sab nhi hoga. Kyuki sabar se kisi ki baat samjhna tujhe aata hi nhi hai."- she said and started leaving.
Shiva held her hand.
He felt that she is right. He felt guilty for never understanding raavi.
Shiva:-"Sahi keh rahi tu. Par jo aaj tak nhi kiya. Ya yun kahun ki jo mujhe bahot pehle karna chaahiye tha, vo aaj karunga, balki abhi karunga"- he said
Raavi turned listening to him.
Shiva held her arms.
Shiva:-"Raavi, aaj main jaan na chaahta hoon tere man ki har baat. Vo har kuchh jo tere dil mein hai. Vo har shikaayat jo tu mujhse karna chahti hai. Vo har taane, jo tu mujhe gusse mein kehna chahti hain. Vo har dard jo tere aankhon se to aansu bankar nikle, pan tere hothon tak kabhi nhi aaye."- he said looking straight in her eyes.
Raavi was looking at him in shocked. She never expected Shiva to say all this.
Raavi:-"Shiva tu ye sb... Rehne de. Main nhi chaahati ki tu jabardasti meri baat maane. Tujhse meri baatein sunne ki koi jarurat nhi hai".
Shiva:-"Nhi raavi, aaj mujhe sab janna hai. Or isliye nhi ki tu keh rhi hai. Pan isliye kyuki mujhe ehsaas hua hai ki agar humne pehle hi ek dusre ko samjha hota, jaana hota to hamaare rishte ka ye haal nhi hota".
Raavi-"Tu sach mein janna chahta hai?"- she asked
Shiva nodded in yes.
THE END
NOTE:- Guys, I am planning to post a HOLI PART further. Should I, or should I not? Do let me know😇
@sapnabishnoi your suggestion of Shiva keeping raavi over dhara is in my mind. Will execute in upcoming part.
LOVE FROM ANANYA 😇
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