《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 22
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Doctor : Mr.Pandya...Actually Raavi is in danger and we have given her oxygen mask...The next 12 hours are very critical
Shiva starts crying with his daughter in her hand
Shiva : Doctor please please aap meri Raavi ko bachaye na please...I beg youuuu
Gautham : Shiva please khud ko sambhal..Raavi ko kuch nahi hoga
Dhara : Shiva kuch nahi hoga raavi ko bas bhagwan ke vishwas kar
Dev : Shiva Himmat rakh dekh teri beti bhi toh Bach gayi nah toh Raavi ko bhi kuch nahi hoga
Doctor :Mr.Pandya please Hum koshish kar rahe hai
Shiva : Aap koshish kiu kar rahe ho mujhe meri Raavi chaiye (Shouting)
Doctor : Mr Pandya please apne aap ko sambhal lijiye
Nurse :Doctor Mrs.Pandya ki pulse up down ho rahi hai...She is breathing heavily
Doctor : Chalo
Shiva : Raavi tumne jo kaha mene voh kiya ab tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakti
Shiva sees goes to the temple and with her daughter in her hand
Shiva : Tu toh Vigna harta haina aaj tak maine kuch nahi manga per aaj tere samne haath jodke yeh chatha hu ki tu meri Raavi ko bachaye..Mere liye nahi toh is nanhi si Jaan ke liye...Tu ise apni maa ke pyaar se juda nahi kar sakta...Tu Aisa nahi kar sakta...Meri Raavi ko mujhse dur nahi kar sakta...
Nurse : Mr.Pandya hume aapki beti ka checkup karna hai..Aap aake form pe sign kar dijiye
Shiva : Haa.
Shiva leaves with nurse and gets his daughter Checked up
Doctor :Mr.Pandya We are happy to say that Raavi Bach gayi hai...Par wo bahut weak hai toh discharge 2 din baad mile gaa...
Shiva :Thank youuuu Doctor meri Raavi ko bachane ke liye...Thank youu so muchh..Umar bhar ke liye aap ka karz rehega
Doctor : Mr Pandya please yeh humara kaam hai..Apki wife aapse milna chathi hai aur haa please yaha pe sirf ek hi Jaan ruk sakta hai Raavi ke pass
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Shiva :Aap sab jaye aur dev Rish bhabhi ke saath ruk jayega aur mai Raavi ke pass...Gaura aap log Ghar jaye Maa,Krish aur Ridhi bhi ghar pe ha
Gaumbhi : Chal theka
Shiva goes to Raavi
Raavi :Shivaa..Dekh hai na humari bachi kitni strong hai
Shiva : Haa Raavi ekdum meri choti chipkali
Raavi : Mujhe dekhna hai humari beti ko leke aana use mere pas
Shiva :Haa tu ruk
Shiva goes and brings their daughter and hands over in Raavi's godh
Raavi starts crying
Raavi : Shiva humari baachi...Kitni Sundar haina...Bilkul papa pe gayi hai meri bachi
Shiva : Haa Raavi bilkul humpe gayi hai...Chal ab tu rest kar
After 2 days Raavi gets discharged and they go home and it was Rish and Raavis childern naamkaran programme
Rish :Mai aur dev apne bete ka naam Samar rakhna chahte hai
Raavi :Mene aur Shiva humari beti ka naam
Saira rakh the hai humari princess
Maa :Dono ne bahut alag naam socha hai
Chalo ab Shiva aur Dev tumlog apne bache koi shahad(honey) Khilado...
Shiva and Dev made their child to have honey and all go to their respective rooms
Shiva : Chal la mai Saira ko Sula deta hu tum aaram karo
Raavi : Rehne de shiva..Yeh Bahut roti hai mai hi Sula ti hu
Shiva : Yeh chipkali !! Meri Saira bahut strong hai chal ab tu bhi aaram kar
Raavi :Idhar aa Shiva
Shiva goes near her
Raavi. :I love youuu aur thank you mujhe itni badi khushi dene ke liye
Shiva :I love youu too Raavi aur thank youu humare parivar ko pura karne ke liye
They both kiss each other
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