《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 21
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Raavi :Shiva bhook lagi hai chal na dinner karte hai
Shiva :Chal Meri dinosaur!!
Raavi :Mai dinosaur hu!!!
Shiva :Nahi Meri maa Mai Dinosaur hu!!
Raavi : Yeh le tera favorite aloo Gobi ke paranthe
Shiva :Thank youuu Raavi!!!
Raavi :Chal Mai tujhe 3 Rd gift deti hu
Shiva :Abhi khate khate!!!
Raavi :Haa...Tu bas Sun Meri baat
Shiva :Chal shuru hoja
Raavi :Tu Kal jab mai Raima ke saath shopping gayi thi na tab
Raavi : Shiva hum parents bane wale hai..Tum papa bane wale hoo
Shiva's eyes escape a tear...
Shiva :Sach Raavi
Raavi : Sach...Bilkul sach
Shiva goes and hugs her tightly
Shiva :This is best gift of life
Raavi :Thank you Shivaaa!!!
Shiva :Thank you Raaviii!!!I love youuuu
After 7 months
Raavi at midnight 3am
Raavi :Shivaaaaaa
Shiva is dozed in his sleep...Raavi kicks him down the bed and our Kumbhkaran came
Waking up
Shiva :Kya hai Raavi
Raavi :Shiva mujhe tere haath ke noodles khane hai
Shiva :Raavi yaar 3 baje hai subh bana dunga(He again sleeps)
Raavi :Dekha Baby..Aapke papa aapki yeh choti si wish puri nahi kar rahe hai...Aapke papa aapse pyaar hi nahi karte
Shiva :Hogayi teri nautanki...Chal bana tha hu
Raavi :Thank youu Papa and she laughs
Shiva was just admiring her
Raavi :Mujhe bhi aana hai kitchen Mai
Shiva :Ha chal
Shiva holds her hand and takes her towards Kitchen and make her sit near dining table
Raavi :Shiva sun na
Shiva :Kya hai Chipkali
Raavi :Mujhe kuch khata khana hai
Shiva :Abhi toh tujhe noodles khane the
Raavi : Please
Shiva goes to kitchen and brings imli for her
Raavi :Tu kitna bura hai...Mujhe noodles khane hai aur tu mujhe khata khila Raha hai
Shiva :Ae bhagwan!!Yeh ladki mujhe mar dale gi
Raavi : Ab Mai tujhe maarti bhi hu
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Shiva :Nahi meri maa...Tujhe noodles khane hai na
Raavi :Haaa
Shiva :Tu baith Mai abhi gaya aur abhi aaya
Raavi : Okay....Mera princess ke papa
Shiva :Theka
Shiva goes and makes noodles for Raavi and gives it to her...She eats like a baby and Shiva was admiring her
Raavi :Ghur kya raha hai, khayega kya
Shiva :Nahi tu kha
Raavi :Shiva mujhe walk pe jana hai chal
Shiva :Raaviii...Tu bahut badmaash hogayi hai
Raavi : Dekh Shiva...Sab teri hi galti hai
Shiva :Ab mene kya Kiya
Raavi :To bahut badtameez hai...Apni biwi ki bath nahi man Raha toh meri beti ki man le
Shiva :Chal....Tujhse mai kabhi nahi jeet paunga
Raavi :Woh toh mujhe pata hi tha
Shiva :Kuch boli
Raavi :Nahi...Chal
When they were about to leave they heard Rishitha screaming
Ri :Aahhhh....Devvv
Shiva :Shayd bhabhi ko labour pain horaha hai
Raavi :Chal dekhte hai
Shiva Raavi enters the room
Raavi :Rishh!!!Tujhe itna pasina aaraha hai
Shiva :Ae Dev uth ja!!!Bhabhi ka bacha aane hi wala ha
Rish :Raavi Tum log mujhe hospital le chalo...Mujhe bahut dard horaha hai
Raavi :Haa!!!Shiva tu car nikal jaldi
Shiva :Theka
Dhara and Gaumbhi comes hearing their voice
Dhara :Kya hua Rishitha
Gaumbhi :Yeh dev abhi tak nahi utha
Shiva :Chal car aagayi hai
Raavi and Dhara make Rish sit in car and Raavi rubs her. Hand and whereas there Gaumbhi wakes up Dev and they reach hospital and Suman and Krish are at home with Ridhuu
Raavi :Shivaaaa...
Shiva :Raavi..
Raavi :Shiva and she faints
Shiva :Doctor ko bulao jaldi Gaumbhi
Raavi and Rishitha are both in OT and Rishtha does a normal delivery and is blessed with a baby boy
Doctor :Mr.Shiva Pandya aapki wife bahut weak hai aur toh aur aapka bacha bhi bahut weak hai...Hum shayad kisi ek ko hi bacha sakte
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Shiva :Doctor aap yeh kya bol rahi hai
Doc :Mr.Pandya aap kise bacha na chate ho Hume Bata dijiye aur ha thoda jaldi
Shiva :Doctor aap meri Raavi ko bacha ye
Doctor :Okay Mr.Pandya
In Ot
Raavi :Shivaaa ..
Doc :Wait Mrs.Pandya hum bulate ha
Raavi : Theka
Doc :Mr.Pandya aapki Biwi aapse kuch bat karna chathi hai..Aap chaliye
Shiva :Haa Doctor
Raavi :Shivaa...Tum ro kyu Rahe hoo
Shiva says her everything and he cries
Raavi : Doctor aap humari beti ko bachye please
Shiva :Raavi
Raavi : Mujhe pura yakeen hai ki mai rahu ya nah rahu tum humari beti ko sambhal lo gae
Shiva : Raavi tu Aisa kuch nahi karegi... Doctor please aap Raavi ko hi bachye
Raavi :Tumhe meri kasam tum humari beti ko nahi
Shiva : Par..
Raavi :I love youu Shiva.... Doctor chale
Shiva :I love youuu too Raavi...
They leave and Doctor start operating and Shiva and Raavi are blessed with baby girl and When shiva hears her voice he starts crying and Doctor gives her to Shiva
Shiva :Raavi...Doctor Raavi theka hai kya
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