《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 17
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Shiva leaves her and Raavi goes near him and tickles him
Raavi :Ab kaisa lag raha hai
Shiva :Chod na yaar...
Raavi :Tune choda tha...
Shiva pulls Raavi closer and kisses on her cheek.... Raavi takes her arms and and wrap it around his neck....She peck on his lips.
They both slept cuddling each other
In morning :
Raavi goes to washroom to get freshen up (They have attached bathrooms)...Where Raavi sees a file back of the painting...She takes the file and gets shocked as it contains the reports
Shiva was standing at back and he knew that she has learnt the truth...
Shiva :Vo..vo..Raavi yeh
Raavi : Shiva Tumhe pata tha mere reports Mai Kya likha hai
Shiva : Haa...Raavi...
Raavi : Yeh Jhooth haina Shiva..
Shiva :Nahi Raavi...Yeh hi sach hai ki shayad hum kabhi parents nahi ban payenge
Raavi falls on her kneels and starts crying
Raavi :Yeh sach nahi
hosakta...Mai...Mai...Kabhi maa nahi ban paungi...
Shiva : Raavi mujhe lagta hai Hume sach apnana padega...Samjha jao na Raavi...
Raavi : Nahi...Tumhe yeh sab pata tha phir bhi Tumhne mujhe kuch nahi bataya
Shiva :Kese Bata tha Raavi....Himmat nahi horahi thi
Raavi :Tujhme himmat nahi thi...Ek baar Batana tha
Shiva : Jab mujhe khudko Kuch samaj nahi aaya toh...
Raavi :Toh kyaa Shiva....Mai kabhi maa nahi ban paungi
Shiva : Raavi please sambal lol Apne app ko please....Tum sirf Apne baari Mai soch rahi hoo...Mai bhi toh kabhi papa nahi ban paunga....
Raavi hugs him tightly and keeps crying for more than 2 hours....When she heard a knock at the door where Dhara bhabhi was calling them for breakfast...Shiva replied that he will soon come within 15 minutes..
Shiva :Ae Raavi chal Uth....Ja Jake taiyaar hoja Hume doctor ke pas bhi jana hai
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Raavi :Nahi jana....
Raavi gets rigid...Shiva takes her to washroom and washes her face and asks her to take bath and change...Raavi does as he said and today Raavi forgot to put Sindoor and today she was so dull with no smile in her face...
Shiva soon gets ready and he says Raavi to accompany him...He sees she haven't applied Sindoor..He applies sindoor in her partition and kisses Raavi on her forehead giving her the assurance that everything is gonna get fine with time....
During breakfast
Dhara :Raavi aaja sabko khana paros de
Raavi doesn't give her any response and sit on the table
Shiva :Dhara bhabhi aap baitho Mai serve kardeta hu
Maa : Tu kiu serve karega Peticoat chap no 3
Aaye Raavi jaldi serve kar sabko
Shiva shakes Raavi..She comes in senses...
Maa :Ae Raavi chal sabko nasta paros de
Raavi serves everyone the breakfast and sits at her place
Shiva : Gaumbhi Raavi ko doctor ke pas le jaunga toh Mai dukkan shayad late aau
Gaumbhi : Theka
Shiva Raavi leaves to doctor and Shiva tries his best to make Raavi come out of trauma
Shiva :Ae chipkali....Golgappe khaiye ghi
Raavi doesn't reply Shiva feels so hurt and he don't know what to do
They reach to doctor
Doctor :So yes Mr.Pandya according to reports..Shayad Mrs.Pandya maa nahi ban sakti par haa I am glad to say that ki aap ke pas chances toh abhi bhi haa and I think you should keep trying
Shiva : Jii Doctor...Par agar Raavi conceive bhi karle toh uski jaan ko koi khatra toh nahi hai
Doctor :Haa...Apki wife ki life ko lhatra hi hoga kiu ki inke accident ke baad shayad inke body pe jyada stress tha
Shiva : Yeh hawan kund Mai girne ki wajah se hua hai doctor
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Doctor :Nahi...Mr.Pandya yeh inke bachpan ke Kisi accident ki wajah se hua hai
Shiva :Theka doctor....Hum aate hai able hafte
Doctor :Thank youuuu
Shiva :Chal Raavi
They reach home only to find out that Suman has seen her reports
Raavi : Sab ke muh itne uthre hua kiu hai
Shiva :Mujhe Kya pata
Suman :Ae Raavi Mera Ghar mai ek bhi kadam mat rakhna chali jaa yaha se
Shiva : Maa yeh tu kiya bol rahi hai....Biwi hai yeh Meri...Bahu hai teri
Suman :Yeh to chup rahe
Raavi: Maa.....
Suman :Mera beta sirf Teri wajah se baap nahi ban sakta ..Teri wajah se vo kabhi bache ka sukh nahi hai....Mere Shiva ki Kismat hi phuti hui thi Jo tu uski Biwi hai
Shiva :Yeh tu kiya keha rahi hai maa...Tu bhi toh ek aurat hai...
Suman : Isiliye toh yeh kal Apne Ghar jaye gi humesha humesha ke liye
Shiva : Toh phir Theka Kal Shiva sang Raavi ja rahe hai yeh Ghar chodke
Suman :Tu kiu jaraha hai
Shiva :Ab shadi ki hai toh nibhani toh pade gi
Raavi :Shiva please
Maa : Tu kahi nahi jayega...Samja..Kal dekhte hai
Maa leaves
Dhara : Idhar aa Meri bachi....
Raavi comes in a hug with Dhara she feels as if she is in her mother's lap....Dhara caressed her hair and tried to console her
Raavi : Maa..
Dhara : Chup hoja Meri bachi...
Gaumbhi hugs Shiva and he hides his tears
Gaumbhi whispers in his ears :Shiva Mera bhai...Tu bahut tut chuka hai andar se..Ab apna man kholke ro le
Shiva : Gaumbhi mai Kuch nahi kar paya....Raavi ke sath hi aisa kiu hota hai...Jo sabka acha chathi haa...bhagwan tujhe Jo saza deni hai mujhe dena use kiu..Pehle hi apne mummy papa ko kho chuki hai aur apne Zindagi ka sabse bada suk kho degi ....
He is broken
Both Shiva and Raavi are completely Shattered
Raavi hugs Rishitha
Rishitha :Tension mat le Raavi...Hum Saath hai..Teri behen tere saath hai
Raavi : Rishitha...
She hugs him tightly
Gaumbhi separates himself with Shiva and Rishitha seperates herself with Raavi
They make them sit on cot and today nobody haves dinner...Dhara makes Raavi sleep in her lap and Gaumbhi makes Shiva
Gaura are shattered to see them
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