《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 16
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Shiva :Mai bhar ja rahu hu Kuch kaam hai isiliye
Raavi :Theka
Shiva goes to clinic
Shiva : Good morning Doctor...Mai Mr.Shiva Pandya yaha pe Mrs.Raavi Shiva Pandya ke reports collect karne aaya hu
Doctor :Yes Mr.Pandya...Actually reports ke according Raavi ke 10% chances hi hai conceive karne ke
Shiva :10% matlab
Doctor :Matlab shayad aap dono kabhi parents nahi ban payege...Raavi agar conceive kar bhi le toh shayad aapka baby healthy na ho aur ise Raavi ki jaan ko bhi koi khatra ho
Shiva :Doctor check karo na yeh Raavi ki reports nahi hogi shayad aapse koi galti hui hogi
Doctor :Sorry to say Mr.Pandya yeh sach aapko mana padega...Ab aap please jaye mujhe baki patients ko attend karna hai
Shiva takes the file and goes to his favorite place
(Imagine Shiva is broken and he is saying this dialogue)
Shiva to himself : Raavi ke sath hi aisa kiu hota hai...Jo sabka acha chathi haa...Hey bhagwan tujhe Jo saza deni hai mujhe dena use kiu..Pehle hi apne mummy papa ko kho chuki hai aur apne Zindagi ka sabse bada suk kho degi ....
Raavi calls Shiva
Raavi :Hello
(Shiva controls himself)
Shiva :Ha bolo Raavi
Raavi :Shiva Maa ne aaj hi Somnath Jane ko bola hai Hume...Kaka ki tabiyet kharab hai isliye...Tu ek car leke aanaai humari packing kar leti hu
Shiva :Haa...Theka
Raavi :Shiva Tum ro rahe hoo
Shiva wipes his tears
Raavi :Kha khogaye Mr.Pandya
Shiva :Are Chipkali...Mai Chattan Pandya hu Mai kiu rounga Bhala...
Raavi :Chal Theka
Shiva :Mai aata huu..Byeee
Raavi :Byeee
Raavi could sense something fishy but she thinks she talk about it later
Raavi packs their luggages and wait for her Bhootnath to come
Shiva came at 5
Raavi :Tu aagaya...Ja Jake fresh hoja Mai tere liye Kuch bana ke lati hu
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Shiva :Hmm...
Raavi :Shiva Kuch hua hai toh mujhe bata de
After all Mai tumhari wife hoo
Shiva : Raavi Kuch nahi hua hai Mai fresh hoke aata hu
Raavi :Jhooth kiu bol rahe ho..Tumhari ankhe itni suji hui haa...Tum aise....
Shiva : Mene bola na Kuch nahi hua hai..Tumhne samjh nahi aata ek baari Mai... Irritate karke rakha hai (in his shouting tone)
Raavi gets scared and she leaves
Raavi to herself :Shiva ko force nahi karti...Use jitna time chaiye lene deti hu...Par mai sach ka pata lagake rahungi
Raavi decides to make his favorite aloo Gobi and methi ke paranthe
She goes to her room
Raavi : Shiva aaja khana kha le
Shiva :Mujhe bhook nahi hai
Raavi :Mene Teri favorite aloo Gobi aur methi ke paranthe banai hai
Shiva : Bilkul mann nahi hai Raavi
Raavi takes the plate and goes near the couch and she feeds him with her hand
Shiva :Mujhe maaf karde Maine Tumpe chilaya
Raavi :Yeh le...(He haves a bite)Shiva Vese bhi mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga....Aur hai jab tu feel kare mujhe Batana Tum mujhe bata dena...Take your own time
Raavi gives Shiva another bite but he takes that and gives her the bite
Shiva :Tu kitne ache se janti hai mujhe.....Mujhe kuch Batana hai par shayad ab nahi hogi himat Mera andar batane ki
Raavi :Chal ab tu khale...Hume Somnath ke liye bhi nikalna hai
Shiva :Haa theka
Shiva haves food and goes with their luggage in aangan
Shiva :Maa hum chalte hai
Maa :Haa..Raavi kaka ko saari dawai dedena aur mujhe Pura yakeen hai ki tum dono El dusro ka khayal rakh sakte ho
Raavi :Jii maa
Shiva :Chal...Jai Somnath maa
Maa :Jai Somnath
They leave in car and they reach Somnath
Inside the house
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Shiva :Mai kaka ko dekhe aata hu
Raavi :Wait kar hath nu dhokar jaa
Shiva : Haa theka
Shiva leaves and Raavi cleans the house and goes to make food, she makes food and goes to kaka's house
Shiva opens the door
Raavi :Chal andar Mai khana laga deti hu
Shiva :Haa chal Theka
Raavi comes with plate and serves food to kaka and Shiva and She cleans the house and washes all the clothes and checks kaka's temperature and takes care of him for 3 days
Shiva thinks how could she be so selfless
After 3 days
Raavi :Chalo Kaka ab aap bilkul thek ho gaye ho
Shiva : Kaka ab Kal hum doctor ke pas jayenge aur last check up karake aate hai
Kaka :Raavi Tum bahut achi hoo..Tumhe dekhe mujhe Meri beti ki yaad aagayi
Vo toh mujhe 10 saal pehle chodke chali gayi iss duniya se
Raavi :Mai apki beti hi toh hu kaka....Roye mat
Shiva is so proud of his wife...Finally tomorrow everyone is coming or Somnath
Raavi : Shiva sab aaj aarahe hai toh mujhe sab kaam khatam karne hai Mai chalti hu
Shiva : Hmmm....
Raavi leaves and complete all her work everyone comes at home and Shiva hid the reports
Shiva : Jai Somnath maa
Maa :Jai Somnath Shiva...
Dhara :Aap sab betho Mai sabke liye Pani leke aati huu
As Dhara walks she faints
Shiva : Bhabhi aapko Kya hua...
Gaumbhi calls doctor...Doctor checks Dhara up and
Doctor :Mr.Pandya aap papa bane wale hoo
Gaumbhi : Kya yeh sach hai...Meri Dhara maa bana gayi
Dev : Mera promotion hogaya Mai Chacha ban gaya aur Rishitha Chachi
Maa :Mai dadi bane wali huu..Dhara ne toh mujhe saari khushi dedi
Raavi :Haa maa
Maa :Toh phir Dev-Rishtha Tum kab suna rahe ho good news mujhe
Dishitha : Hum!!!
Maa : Aur nahi toh kya
Rishitha : Humne abhi Kuch plan nahi kiya hai
Maa :Tum dono to waste ho..Toh mera Sher kab suna raha hai tu mujhe khush Khabar
Shiva is tensed but Raavi blushes
Dhara wakes up
Dhara :Gaumbhi....
Gautham : Dhara Tu maa bane wali hai
They have a family hug
Everyone at their respective rooms
Shiva :Chal so jaa Raavi bahut late ho chuka hai
Raavi :Shiva Kiu na hum bhi maa ko khushi dede (blushes)
Shiva : Mujhe bache nahi pasand...
Raavi :Par...
Shiva :Ab hume bhabhi ka khayal rakhna hai
Tujhe sona hai toh soja warna
Raavi :Warna Kya
Shiva holds her and tickles her near her belly
Raavi :Shiva chod...Mai so rahi huu
Shiva :Par...Tujhe aise pareshan karke mujhe acha lag raha hai..
Raavi :Please na Shiva
Shiva leaves her and Raavi goes near him and tickles him
Raavi :Ab kaisa lag raha hai
Shiva :Chod na yaar...
Raavi :Tune choda tha...
Shiva pulls Raavi closer and kisses on her cheek
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