《SHIVI KI DASTAN》CHAPTER 13
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In morning
Raavi : Good morning Dhara bhabhi
Dhara :Good morning...Kya hua Raavi Teri aakhein itni suji hu kiu hai
Raavi :Kuch nahi bhabhi...Kal nind nahi aarahi thi toh Sara kaam khatam kardiya
Dhara :Wese kaha gayi thi Raavi Kal tu
Raavi : Dhara di Mai haina Kal:Anatha ashram gayi thi
Dhara :Are Wahh Raavi
Raavi : Thank you bhabhi
Sabka nasta ban gaya hai Mai kamre mai chalti hu koi kaam ho toh bata dena
Dhara :Shiva ko Uth dena Raavi....Aur ek chai leke chali jana
Raavi :Theka Dhara dii
Raavi prepares tea and takes to her room
Raavi calls Shiva so he wakes up Shiva wakes up and sees the tea near him with the note.Dhara bhabhi ne chai bheji hai pe Lena aur unko Kuch kaam hai toh fresh hoke chale jana Shiva haves the tea and goes down
Raavi is cleaning the room so that she can avoid talking to Shiva
Shiva :Kuch kaam tha bhabhi
Dhara :Kal Mahashatrunjay puja hai toh sab saman lene ke liye tum aur Raavi jao ge
Shiva :Par.....Theka
Dhara smiles and Shiva leaves to his room
Shiva : Raavi Dhara bhabhi ne kaha hai ki Kal puja hai saman lene Humhe jana hai
Raavi :Tum Simran ko leke jau....Mai nahi aarahi hu
Shiva :Iska saman sirf shadi ke jode Lana hai Tum chal rahi hu,mujhe tumse koi bahas nahi karni hai
Raavi :Nahi aana hai mujhe.....
Krish comes there
K :Bhabhi ne aap dono ko niche bulya hai naste ke liye
Raavi : Krish mai nahi aarahi hu....Mera vrat hai aaj
Krish :Bhabhi theka hai ...Bhai tu aaraha hai ki Tumhne bhi vrat rakha hai
Shiva :Mai pehle aau ki Meri chappal
Krish :Mai jaraha huu(Krish leaves)
Shiva : Kiske liye vrat rakha hai..Tu un sabse jooth bol sakti hai mujhse nahi
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Raavi :Mene vrat rakha hai apne maa-papa ke liye
Shiva leaves and have breakfast and Raavi serves breakfast
Shiva : Saman ki list de dijiye Mai akele hi leke aata hu
Dhara :Kiu Raavi Nahi aarahi hai
Shiva :Nahi bhabhi
Dhara : Par puja ka Saman aur tayarri nai Jodi ko hi karna padta hai
Raavi :Me jaungi bhabhi aap list dedo
Dhara gives them list and they leaves
Raavi doesn't speak a word.....Shiva also doesn't speak anything Raavi is very tired and she was feeling dizzyThey bought all the puja samagri and reach home
Raavi goes to kitchen to Drink water and there she sees a paper under table she bends to take the paper.....Raavi takes the paper and she gets shocked
It was written "Sleeping pills"
She remembers everyone's juice colour was pink except Shiva
Raavi goes to her room and sleeps
In morning
It's been two days Raavi didn't have anything except water
Today is Mahashatrunjay puja
Everyone gets Ready
Panditji :Dono naye jode ko apna hath pakad ke Jo Mai bolu vo bolna hoga
Dishitha catches each other's hand....Shiva goes to catch Raavi's hand but she moves it then she sees that everyone has seen her so she blows air on her hand...Shiva holds Raavi's little finger
Panditji : Ab sab Jo Mai bolunga use daurain gai
Om Tryambakam Yajamahe Sugandhim Pushti-Vardhanam
Urvarukamiva Bandhanan Mrityormukshiya Mamritat
Yeah mantra ka jaap aap logo ko 108 baar
Karna hai
Everyone :Okay
Everyone does it and At last when Raavi was on her 108 mantra
Raavi :Om Tryambakam Yajamahe Sugandhim Pushti-Vardhanam
Urvarukamiva Bandhanan Mrityormukshiya Mamrita...t
And she faints and falls on the agni kund as
Shiva sees this as he felt the grip of her finger is lost and picks her up and take her to room and call doctor...After every body completed the jaap they saw Shiva and Raavi were not there they were searching them ..Gaumbhi goes to Their room and sees Raavi is fainted and her body has some burnt marks and Shiva is crying continuously and waiting for doctor to come...Gaumbhi shouts and everyone comes there along with our Chudail (Simran)
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Gaumbhi :Kya hua hai Raavi ko Shiva
Dhara :Kya hua bolna
Dev :Kya hua hai ise baata na Shiva
Krish :Bhabhi Kuch bol kiu nahi rahi hai
Rishitha :Ae Raavi ,Uth varna mai Teri masi ko bulanungi
Shiva : Doctor kaha hai
Simran(in mind):Yeh toh aise hi maar gayi mujhe toh Kuch karna hi nahi pada
Doctor came in
Shiva :Doctor, ise Kya hua hai yeh Jawab kiu nahi de rahi hai
Doctor :Mai check Kari huu..
(After some time)
Doctor :Mr.Pandya aapki Biwi jal gayi haa Kuch jagah...Aur wo behosh hiu hai kiu ki inhobe Kuch nahi khaya do din se
Shiva :Haa doctor Kal iska vrat tha
Doctor :Inki body bahut weak hai aap jaldi se inhe glousce ka Pani aur kuch healthy khila dijiye
Shiva :Jii...Aur kuch
Doctor :Kuch nahi aap kal clinic aajana Kuch reports collect karne
Shiva :Jii..Dev doctor ko chod ke aajana
Doctor leaves
Shiva :Aap sab jaye jab ise hosh aayega Mai Apko bulata hu
Everyone leaves ....After 20 min
Raavi :Shivaa....Shivaa...
Shiva :Raavi Mai yahi huu.....
Raavi gets up and holds him tightly and starts crying...Shiva tries to console her But Raavi was uncontrollable...She was fed up she wanted to cry She cries in his arms for more than 30 minutes and then she leaves him
Shiva :Thu thik hai Raavi
Raavi : Mai...Jal kese gayi....Mujhe toh sirf chakar aaya tha...Bolna Shiva kia huu hai mujhe..Bol naa
Shiva :Raavi Tu agni kund Mai girl gayi thi..Tu thek hai ki nahi
Raavi :Tum dur raho mujhse...Tum bahut Bure ho..I hate you Shiva
Shiva was really hurt by her words
Shiva :Chup hoja Raavi ,Yeh soup pe le pehle tu Thoda acha feel kare gi phir Mai dawai laga leta huu
Raavi : Konsa rishta hai humhare beech
Shiva :Dosti ka hai...Bhale hi pati patni kaa rishta 8 din mai khatam hone wala
Phir bhi 8 din tak tu meri patni hai aur mai tera pati
Raavi doesn't say anything...Everyone comes
Dhara :Tu thek hai na Mera bacha
Raavi : Haa bhabhi
Gaumbhi :Meri Raavi, kaisi hai tu,thek hai na aur Shiva bata kia hua hai isee
Raavi :M thek huu gaumbhi
Shiva narrates the whole incident
Dhara :Par Raavi thera vrat toh sirf Kal tha toh tune parso kiu nahi khaya khana
Raavi :Vo..voo...Parso Mai bahar gayi thena tabhi muje yaad aaya ki mujhe vrat Kal rakhna hai aur Parso nahi
Dhara :Thek che
Everyone asks whether she is fine
Rishitha :Pagal hai Kya tu Raavi...Apna dhyan nahi rakh sakti tu...Tujhe Kuch ho jata toh mai bhua ko Kya bolti...Bhale hi Mai tujhse nafrat karti hu...Par tu hai toh neti behen hi naa...I'm sorry Raavi mene Jo Kuch bhi kiya tumhare saath
Raavi : Rishitha please....Sorry mat bol
I'm sorry par mai bilkul thek hu
Raavi was happy that she got her sister back
Everyone left again there was only Shivi
Shiva applies medicines to her hand leg and now it's time for her bellyRaavi got small scratch...Shiva bends down to apply medicine he touches his index finger on the scratch...Raavi feels his touch and she closes her eyes...Shiva bends near her belly to blow air..Shiva blows air on the medicine applied...Raavi couldn't handle this proximity so she moves back
Shiva : Chal ab khana kha le
Raavi :Nahi khana
Shiva makes her drink the soup
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